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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT 25
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I thought we could spend the evening together PT 25
Previously
Tina had whispered into Bettes ear one dark night that she would like to make love on a bed of rose petals, she had giggled when she told Bette, feeling embarrassed at the slushy romantic nature of her fantasy, but Bette had listened, taken it in and made it come true, it was an unforgettable night and one that was held dear in her heart.
Bette had long since had the thoughts of once again carrying out this fantasy, not just for Tina, but for both of them, today had given her the absolute ideal opportunity, she wanted and needed to make amends for her earlier behaviour of walking away, and she would continue to show Tina how sorry she was for breaking her promises of being open, and for walking away when she should of stayed and accepted words that her love had said.
Tonight, she would show her how much she loved her and she would show her how profoundly sorry she was, she would bring Tina back from the restaurant and she would make long, slow love to her on a bed of red rose petals
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Tina settled as the hot scented water enveloped her weary body, the bubbles embracing her soft skin, the rose petals floating around her, she brought her hand up through the water, her fingers appearing through the bubbles, lifting a stray petal, it clung to her skin, molded to the curve within her palm, she brought the fingertip of her other hand toward it and gently touched its velvety surface, the smile forming on her face as she once again thought about this grand romantic gesture of Bettes. That woman never failed to surprise her, and so totally out of the blue.
She had imagined them arriving at the hotel, maybe having a bottle of wine on the balcony reminiscing about the day or the previous few days, maybe what had happened at Milk last night, because they certainly hadnt talked about that yet, and she knew that whenever they had experienced an intimate situation that hadnt occurred before they always talked about it, how it made them feel, what it meant to them, what if they had been caught and twice last night in the club they could have been in the situation of being caught, but her smile widened as she knew for sure that there feelings for one another and how close they were, neither of them would of given a second thought to being caught out, maybe Bette would have been uncomfortable at being discovered having an orgasm at the same table as her friends were sitting and chatting, but something in her mind was also telling her that Bettes feelings of cautiousness in relation to public displays of affection was changing, she didnt seem so apprehensive or conventional in their approach as she used to be, maybe the last few days she had thrown caution to the wind and just gone with the flow, maybe she would return to her conventional approach when they returned to a settled normalcy in their everyday life.
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WOoOoOo Thanks for that, I was hoping you wouldnt make us start up another ”save tibette” petition lol, But I thank you for not pullin an Ilene on us .. anyway this chapter is beautiful!, so romantic .. can’t wait for the next chaptola!
Simply magnificent.
Hey!…Well i almost had trouble getting past Bette getting dressed…..but i forced myself,only to be rewarded with a beautifully descriptive picture,you`ve set the scen of whats about to be a very romantic,very sexy ,and knowing you very hot night!
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow!!!!
Wow! okay you have to post tonight! Love the descriptions, they add so much to the story!
whoa mama!!!!!! lord what a build up…..damn kindly continue..PLEASE!!!!!!!!
Simply beautiful Jobadge. Your descriptions of each lady leaves nothing and everything to the imagination. Just wonderful. Thanks for the post. Post again soon, please.
I love the level of detail you give. It’s beautiful.
Jo – you been reading vogue again – or maybe your next job will be writing for them!I’d love to see bettes face when she realises T’s wearing stockings and suspenders – TeeHee!
Well Jo I thought you were having trouble getting your creative juices flowing. If this chapter is an example of you having trouble being creative then I can’t wait to see what you write when you are in a creative mood. This chapter is fantastic, wonderful, beautiful and just plain brilliant. You are one hell of a writer and I can’t wait until you post your next chapter.
Ms. Badge, you’ve set the stage wonderfully, showing us that these two have designed their evening with such love and consideration for the other that we have no doubt that the dinner and evening to follow will be spectacular. I just hope all my American sisters will be able to leap the Atlantic and realise that the suspenders Tina has on do not go over her shoulders.
great as always…please, no henry near tina :(
Love your details from Bette getting out of the shower ,to her smell Tina aroma. That is a double WOW thanks
You’ve certainly achieve the Wow-factor with this chapter. Just exquisite. Keep it up please. Thanks for giving me something wonderful to read just as I drop off to sleep – I anticipate very pleasant dreams tonight!
I am actually speechless. I could see with my mind’s eye exactly what you were writing. The way the water flowed off of Tina as she moved in the bath. The rose pedals throughout the room. It is just breath taking. I do not know how you do it, but you have such a way of setting the scene that brings in every sense that a human has. I especially love the ocean view. The water does have very calming effect. I can be so lonely and want to die, but to sit and watch the waves, birds, and sky help settle my inner turmoil. Thank you for this wonderful descriptive view of these two loving women.
Thanks again for giving us a wonderful chapter. I am enjoying this story so very much. post soon
I’ll stick to my earlier statement which I see you found useful “WOW”!
This is good chapter, and they sound so hot!
simply breathe taking as always Jo — you are so amazing with how much detail you go into and all the details just paint a beautiful picture of B/T. brilliant as always J
Jo another masterpiece. “I was hoping to achieve the wow factor” Well you have definately done it. WOW
Really enjoying your story and love your attention to detail. Thanks for sharing!
This was amazing, the way you discribed the kiss in the bathroom…Daphne Du Maurier couldn’t have done it better. You’re one hell of a writer. Thanks for that.
JO, I am new to your wonderful tale and must take this opportunity to thank you for creating this magical and majestic marvel. This has taken a slow and meandering path through a few days with Bette and Tina and has captured so much more emotion than all three seasons of the show. The love and commitment is palpable is every word, phase and sentence that you so affectionately use. Your descriptive passages place the reader in the picture with Bette and Tina as silent observers to the unfolding events before them. Your care and attention for the merest morsel of each moment sets the bar higher for all the other authors on this site. This teases and torments and tortures your audience; I am completely astounded and transfixed by each new installment and feel, as the addict, the short term exquisite joy and oblivion of this fix. And this chapter brilliantly demonstrates the assiduousness of both characters as they recall and process the day’s event and prepare for the night to follow. I can’t hardly wait to see how Tina’s enraptures Bette’s other two senses. I feel that the fruition of this goal will be worth every minute waited in anticipation. Thank you for sharing is masterpiece with me. A Fan.
OMG….LOL (I couldn’t resist)