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The L Wing – chp 54
The L Wing — Chapter 54
I stand up and move to help Tina get up. But she half moves to get up but stays on her knees in front of me. She takes a small black ring box from her jeans. She looks up at me.
I love you with an all consuming need that will never be satisfied. I have found in you – in us a peace and a sanctity that leaves me in tears of happiness sometimes. Bette Porter — will you do me the great honour of becoming my wife ?
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Narration of Bette Porter.
I look at Tina and hear the words she has just said –
Will you do me the great honour of becoming my wife ?
Oh my God– did she just say that – is she on her knees asking me to marry her ? She wants to marry me ! Oh God. Well say something Bette – yes ? Of course I want to say yes — but is that enough ? Does she expect more that just a one word reply.
Look at her on her knees with a ring in her hand. Oh babe .
I am going to start crying in a minute.
I fall to my knees in front of her – she opens the ring box.
It was my great grandmothers – its mine – its a Kennard heirloom. I would be truly blessed if you would agree to wear this for me.
I look at the ring – it is made of white gold – with a single emerald in the middle. I look at Tina – my Tina .Somehow I have to find the words. I take hold of her hand and place it between both of mine.
Tina – my beloved. I love you so much. There is nothing I want more in my life than to become your wife. Tina Kennard- I would be blessed by God to become your wife. Thank You
She is giving me her biggest and warmest smile.
I know it cannot stay on this finger until we come out in public- but for now will you wear it here
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(36 votes, average: 4.19 out of 5)
Alley, Brilliant to see that Tina has swept Bette off her feet and surprised her with this proposal. Now reality is starting to dawn as the implications of this union are dealt with. Got my hat out for the big day so will be watching and waiting restlessly for it. As for the deductive reasoning of Bette, wonderfully written as Shane’s concerns are shown in their true light. All of this marvelous melodrama is magically mix by you. Thank you for is special gift. Your Loyal Fan.
At first, I found it difficult to accept BP as the POTUS but due to your excellent storytelling, I am totally addicted to this tale.
So nice to see a bit of bliss. And nice they can still learn about each other. Bette’s getting wise to Tina’s Alphaness, and getting a clue to Shane’s reticence. Not bad for an old dog to teach herself new tricks. Not to say that she’s a bitch.
Oh are the screws tightening on Tina. She really doesn’t want to betray Shane’s convidence and she really don’t want to lie to her future wife, especially when Bette has just said that there should be NO secrets between them when they commit to each other. A little white lie is still that, a lie. Man it has to be hard to be in love with such a smart cookie (Hee, hee). I am with Lamentamini, I thought the call was about the paparazzi. GREAT job again Ally, such a well bablance story.
Ally, that was such an amazing chapter!! Ahhh… It’s nice to see that Bette’s FINALLY realized what’s going on with Shane, it took her quite a while for a President, I must say. But anyway, how long are you going to torture us with Tina’s Afghanistan nightmares, how long has it been, three or even four months already? and you’re still not telling us, tsk, tsk, tsk. The suspence is killing me. ;) Time to spill the beans… waiting for your next chapter as eagerly as always.
oh god it jus gets better everytime!! yey! post soon
nice
Hail to the chief ! This story just rocks.
Tina will never tell Bette that Shane love the big Boss. I just wonder when Tina will resign from her job. She will need to do so before the tell anyone about their engagement. Then all the crap on Tina will come out. thanks
AS you know my favourite story at the moment, Love it, no addicted to it, I need it everday. Another great chapter, god knows how Tina is going to deal with this, still got a nagging feeling that the press have snapped them. Gives us more soon please xxxxxx
I thought the phone call was going to be bad news. Great story!!!
Another one of many great chapters you have given us Ally. I can’t wait to see the reaction of the senior staff when Bette and Tina tell them they are in love and getting married. I think if Bette really thinks about it she should be able to figure out which one of them Shane has a crush on. I just love it when I get to read your chapters in my favorite way. You are the best my friend. Oh yes and one more thing–I was right again.
hmm…bette is going to know about shane now…i hope shane will fall in love with carmen
This evening I have been treating myself to chocolate truffles and I can honestly say that despite them being exquisite and gorgeous (and my favourite) I enjoyed reading this chapter even more than eating them. Just delectable writing.
ALLY, Another great chapter. I so love this story.
Here comes the bride all dressed in, oh hell who cares what color. I am so happy the Bette said yes. It took Bette a while to figure out that Shane may have a crush on one of them. I wonder what she is going to say when she realizes that it her that Shane is in love with. Please post soon.
bette is one smart cookie…thanks ally…
Bette is so freaking smart and let see how Tina handle it!
This is so awesome, please keep it going!!
haha bette is a quick one!! well not that quick but glad tina didnt have to spell it out
I was sitting here a few minutes ago wondering if we’d get a chapter soon. YAY! I was afraid the phone call would be someone saying a magazine was about to run a story on their relationship.
I like Bette being able to second guess, can’t have Tina leading the way all the time… Great chapter mate! Oh the tangled web of the POTUS.
Look the wonderfull work of Icecream. Enjoy your days off and keep on writting. This is One hell of a history. Thank you for sharing it with us. a Loyal fan
She is one smart President, and this is one smart story. Clearly the best going on this site. Absolutely loving this Bette and Tina!!