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a new life ch. 42-5
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By the time Bette was dressed and had gone on deck again, Allain was back from town. There were 2 other men busy in the kitchen and the smell was fabulous, Bette was not sure what kind of food it all was, but it sure smelled good.
Allain asks if she wants a drink while he looks her up and down showing his appreciation. Bette wore an orange linen summer dress with orange slippers with a soft sole so she wouldnt ruin the deck.
Id like a dry white wine, please. She replies on his question.
Non Madame, you have to try our real French aperitifs. White wine is for diner, I get you a real aperitif, you just sit down and relax. Oh, is the other lady coming up as well? Allain said.
Uhh yes, she will be here shortly. She went in the shower after me. Bette replies with a blank face.
Okay, then I pour hers later. Allain said making his way to the bar. Bette got on deck, the sun was setting, it wasnt gone completely yet but it had started to sank in the sea.
Allain came back with a glass, the liquid looked a bit funny. It was cloudy and yellowish and there was an ice cub swimming in it. Bette raises her eyebrows when he handed her the drink. She takes a sip and coughs when she feels the alcohol running down her throat, the taste was funny as well, it tastes like anis. It was okay but enough for one, and she told him that too. She walks with her glass to the front desk, looking at the scenery in front of her; the beautiful sunset with his red and orange colors. She smiled as she thought about the day and remembered that Monique was calling tonight. Than Tina walks on deck, she can smell her perfume as the sea breeze is blowing it in her direction. Tina is also holding a glass with this funny drink, and she looks stunning in her light bleu skirt with cream colored halter-top. You can very well see now that she has a nice color, most blonds dont get a good taint but Tina is lucky. It must have something to do with her hazel brown eyes.
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Oh the “Henry Barrier,” is like a nightmare waiting for the lights to be turn on. It’s time to shine a bright light on that issue that ultimately can help them both to realize their love for each other is stronger.
damn…bette has to listen sometimes because if they won’t talk, they can’t move on…i hope bette will hear tina’s crying and comes to talk
I think I would’ve waited till after dinner to bring that up. Going over tough subjects during dinner is just a bad idea, especially if you are really hungry.
If only Bette would listen to Tina and what she has to say. They know they love each other. Thanks for the post.
Delightful.
Bette needs to listen to what Tina has to say so they can move on with their lives together. Please let Bette come back to talk this out with Tina.
Damn now Im not hot anymore but Im cold now, this is hard for them and hope Bette will and listen and talk with Tina. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Tina is doing the right thing in trying to get the Henry issue out into the open. Hopefully, Bette will calm down enough and realize that they have to get this issue out into the open. It would be nice if Bette went out on the deck and found Tina and they openingly discussed this thorn in both of their sides.
Wonderful writing, don’t ever do this talking during dinner, I can defenitely understand the furious reaction of Bette. En nu, een volgende hoofstukje graag ;).
we know the ”whats his name” issue, was going to be talked about one way or another, but seriously, maybe could of discussed after dinner lol!, shoot, I wudda dun gone off, of the beautiful food as well, on just hearing his name .. but I hope Bette will be more willing perhaps next morning, after sleeping on it, etc
Bonaire, Looks like all of the good work has been undone. The point of the day was to move away from the purely sexual gratification and move to the emotional and pyschological aspects. These are the things that keep you together and must be worked upon by both parties. The ‘Henry’ situation needs to be resolved before further rebuilding can occur. Somethings you need to clear the site before creating a new abode. Bette needs to swallow her pride and listen to everything that Tina has to say. And Tina needs to say these things out loud to own them too. I just hope that their love can overcome this latest horror. Wonderful as always. Your Loyal Fan.
DAMN SO DIDN’T XPECT BETTTE TO REACT LIKE THAT!!! COULD ALSO UNDERSTAND TINA’S NEED TO BRING IT UP WHEN SHE DID!!!!!! They have to talk, THEY HAVE TOO……AND THE MAKE UP SEX IS A MUST….hehehehehe!!!!!
What does Bette want them to do? Act as if Henry doesn’t exist? She’s got to listen to Tina or they won’t be able to move on together. Great job!
Another great chapter. I hope Bette comes around and let’s Tina talk and say what needs to be said so they can move on. Thank you
Tina had no choice, It needs to be said,or there is no tomorrow for them. We all know that Bette was hurt,but Tina was also over Candace Bette has got to stop being such a hardass. Hope she hears Tina sobbing. thanks
i think the next chapter will be a hard one! i know that is difficult for Bette listen about Henry but she need, they need this conversation, i hope Tina won’t get drunk cause will be worse. don’t make me wait so long for the next please! good chapter, very good chapter