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Like a fairytale, chpt 7
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Once upon a time on like a fairytale:
As the king talked to the guest Tina looked around hoping to see the reassuring smile of Bette… She was nervous… She couldnt find the brunette but Eric caught her eye and smiled at her… He really looked a bit like Bette… The young princess was surprised and confused with her own thoughts, why did she keep thinking about her best friend? She had just seen her a couple off minutes ago but she missed her already… She shook her head and thought it was just because she was nervous to meet new people.
In the meanwhile Bette had run to the safe protection only the forest could give her… She cried without sound, the tears just kept on rolling… Shed been afraid of the prince since the moment her best friend had mentioned him and she was crushed when she saw Tinas reaction to the handsome boy… She collapsed against a tree and sat there, crying, untill the bell rang for diner…
Defeated, she headed back to the castle and left the forest.
Not aware that she also left the green-eyed female who lived there, very worried….
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Chapter 7
The days left to the princesses 9th birthday flew by…
She and Prince Eric got further acquinted as that was what their parents wanted.
The boy was very taken with the goodnatured blonde and when his mother discussed a possible future marraige he was blushing and smiling.
Tina liked the prince, he was sweet and a bit shy…
He resembled Bette in a way…
He didnt really… look like her, although his eyes and haircolor were quite similar to the ladys maids daughters…
It was something in his eyes, the way he looked at her what reminded the princess of her best friend…
Tina didnt see much of Bette the days before she turned 9.
Everybody in the castle was working extremely hard to make the party a beautifull one for they all loved the little sweethearted blond…
The princess herself was supposed to entertain her most important guest…
As much as the princess liked Eric, she hated this task, for it prevented her from spending time with her best friend.
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I wonder where the queen is taking bette. Please post soon.
Oh man…Tina almost kissed Bette and said I LOVE YOU! Damn you stupid Queen, you have ruinned the chance you have been searching for! Well, I bet Tina won’t see Bette right before her 16th birthday then. Is it the time to bring on other girls? lol… Great update, more please.
i have a feeling queen mama knows who tina loves… and it looks like she may not be to happy… loving both of your stories… please continue
Ok. glad that this chapter was longer…I hope you post soon
The queen is a fool. Is there a problem because bette is a female or because she’s the maids daughter, in this case propably both. Thanks for this chapter, looking forward to the next one. I’ve got a feeling bette will return on tina’s 16th b’day and give her the kiss of life!!! Just a thought, your the writer.
Great chapter. Damn the queen. The girls love each other. Thanks for the post.
damn the queen…i hope she will ralize that true love isn’t defined by gender…i believe in happy ending…bring it on
No my God, you’re breaking my heart!!!! I still believe…but, poor Bette…poor Tina…all this emotion and they are only nine years old! Wow!!! Hurry with the next chapter please! Thanks!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Please post again soon!
Why do parents or others keep those that love one another apart from each other? Poor Bette and Tina, neither one knows what is going to happen to the other now. I guess that the queen has finally figured it out that Bette is Tina’s true love. The girls have not really figured it out yet. Only now does Tina realize that she loves Bette. I hope that the queen does not remember that sometimes distance makes the heart grow fonder of the one they love.
i love ur story…please post soon..it’s cool Tina didn’t choose the prince…XD
wow its me walks thanks for that ive been waiting for this post for like ever please keep going with this one love where it is going
You actually shocked me twice! I figured Tina or Eric would trip and they’d end up kissing each other. EWWWWWWWW gross! Glad that didn’t happen. But Tina landing in Bette’s arms was too cute! Awww! Also, I figured the guard would cut off Tina from finishing the “I love you.” Nope! I just hope Bette heard her. It sucks that they were split apart, but the good news is now September has a better chance of brining them together since they both realized the love is there. *does a happy dance, trips on a tree root, lands on her butt* Ow, I think I hurt my brain.
please post again soon..interesting story..
i can’t believe it Tina said i love you and they almost kissed, but always there is a but! the mad queen arrived to ruin everything! the little moment between B&T was so cute and i almost thing that the longing kiss arrived! it was so sad see how they take away each other, thanks for this very good chapter, i hope i read soon about the next, take care
*Shouting together with Megga* NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! that was so good until the queen come and ruin everything… oh gosh, mothers are all the same.. they know, they stop u… or they know but refuse to acknowledge it… all we need are approval and blessings… *sigh*
seems like Tina’s mom is the wicked witch of the west!!!!
Tja, ik was er ook wel vroeg bij, maar 9 jaar, is toch wel erg vroeg nietwaar. Sprookjes zijn toch geweldig hé, spijtig dat ik niet in eentje ben opgegroeid ;)
They almost kiss damn you queen why you have to do that and that will kill your daughter , this is so sad and let see how September doing to the stupid queen. OK let kick eric out of the picture, don’t want to hear anything about him anymore. OK post soon please, thanks!