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Like a Fairytale, chpt 8
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Once upon a time on ‘like a fairytale’:
Bette? I love…
The space between there lips minimized and they almost touched eachother when Tina mumbled the last word of that important sentence
You…
Guard? Take her away!
The harsh stern voice of her mother startled the princess and Bette jumped backwards tripping over a root. Before she landed one of the castleguards the girls knew quite well had seized the brunette.
The princess looked in her mothers eyes and saw the anger and dissapointment in it, but she didn’t know what she had done wrong.
You come with me.
The royal woman grasped her child and started pushing her to the castle as Bette was dragged away by the guard…
TINA!
The brownhaired girl shouted scared. She knew she shouldn’t have acted on her sudden desire to kiss the royal girl and this was her punishment for it, but she was afraid…
The princess ran back to her best friend but was held back by her mother who looked at the whole scene dissaprovingly.
I don’t want to hear her any more
After that order the guards covered the girls mouth so the screams were smuttered.
The princess started crying when the queen was draggin her along to the caste, finally realizing what had just happened she quickly put the present she had received in her pocket…
She looked around and caught the eyes of the girl she loved so much, just before she was dragged out of sight
No Bette… NOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Chapter 8
The queen had ordered to take the brunette into the forest and the guard with the assignment wasn’t to happy about it… Thomas knew the two girls quite well and they were always nice to him, He remembered the time it was extremely warm and the princess had brought him something to drink..
Pulling the two best friend apart was the hardest task he had done so far and he felt awfull as he dragged a strugling Bette deeper into the forest.
Please Bette… Stop struggling…
He begged as he saw they were out of the queens sight.
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i do really love ur story so much. it’s wonderful. please post soon. ^^
Hi there…just catching up with this story…and it´s really good…You writes brilliant. For your question, i agress with dainty…you should write in your own way and tempo…and build your story like you want…We all loves it and do not rush anything…Bye and looking forward for your next postes
Yeah! *happy dance*.. Finally, Shane is here! lol… How can the stupid queen do such thing to her best friend’s only daughter! And Tina will not forgive her for doing this to Bette. Gosh, she might think Bette is dead.. oh man, bring it on drama! What?! You needed advice? My advice is simple.. Keep writing and keep posting!!! Do whatever you think it’s right with the story.. sobs.. if you think you need to hold the KISS then do it. Sobss… but keep posting! Don’t forget I still need DAILY fix! Lol
Alright yeah Shane is here to help Bette, and let meet the others to. Still sad that Bette and Tina are apart, and let see whats next and drama coming. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Poor Bette, but she will be taken care of. What about Tina who will take care of her? You know that her mother will set her up with every Tom, Dick and Harry that comes along. We all know who will be in her heart (Bette)and hope that her return will be quick. Will she be able to hold out until her true love returns? It was okay that September left before she could help me. She had more pressing issues and people to take care of mainly Bette. Just remind her when she is done in about 7 years to return to me and help me out. Bette and Tina are more important.
YAY we got Yoda! *does a happy dance* I wonder what Maxine will think when Bette doesn’t come home? Maybe she’ll kick the queen’s ass. lol j/k As for your other story, hmmm. I’ll PM you with an idea, k? :)
Yoda is on the scene…LOL!!! What do you mean by making such statements???? Post when I’ve written some chapters, and u don’t know where to go with the story???? U cannot do that, I live vicariously through it, SO THAT WOULD BE CRUEL AND UNJUST!!!!!!! And i will find u if u do such….LOL!!!!!!!! R U GONNA POST ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THAT STORY FOR THE WEEKEND….a girl can hope can’t she…”sigh”
Yay Shane!!!!! its gonna be so good when Bette goes back and sweeps Tina off her feet. Your doing such a great job with both stories. Keep the chapters coming…I love your stories.
He, nu moet je maar ineens een paar jaartjes overbruggen hé. Ik wil ze terug bij elkaar en in sprookjes is honderd jaar slapen ook direct voorbij nietwaar ;). For the other story, let them go all the way, make it a NC-17. I don’t care if you use 17 pages for it, just do it :D. EN DOE HET VANDAAG NOG AUB !!!
Oh look, here comes the gang :D Shane, Alice and Dana coming along into this story as well? oh gosh, parents can be real meanie when it comes to ‘protecting’ their children, but most of the time they don’t know their protection is killing their children… hmm… oh, I’m totally fine with a few chapters before the first kiss in ur other story ;) As long as u’re posting regularly, I so need ur story for my daily fix ;) I’ve given an idea in the comment of ur other story :)
LOVE IT!!!!!
Sooo Sweet!
oh MY!!!! :0) this is just getting too good to put down!! i cannot continuously convey to you, how the simplicity of this advebture has captured my attention from the beginning. you possess a rare quality of insight, vision and clarity when sharing each chapter with us all. your story begins to vibrate a different echo yet remains true to the intent of those involved. again, my most gracious ten thumbs up to you for permitting us to all walk this path with tina and bette.and, thank you again for taking the time to share with us this continued story. i applaude you and such a wonderful story!!! BRAVA!!!
Dit is een al evenzo geweldig verhaal! Can we please have another chapter of the other story today as well?? Please?? :-)
Ugghh.. Someone needs to slap that queen upside the head!! I can’t stand her! And what will the king think he sees his little princess moping around? And how could she do that to Maxine? Are you sure the queen’s not a reincarnation of QBIC?
Just, love what you are doing with this story and the other one also. Like them both. On the other one,write your story the way you want to and we will be pleased no matter what you do. You have to write it the way it comes to you, no do so just to please us, we will be with you whatever you choose to do. My name Dainty is actually my real nickname given to me by a friend of my mother’s when I was 3 yrs. old. The story goes that when I was that young everytime my mother would put a clean starched and ironed dress on me, I would go outside and sit on the front steps. Before I would sit down, I would always throw my dress out behind so that I would not sit on it and wrinkle it or get it dirty. So she named me Dainty. That’s the story. thanks for the post.
Ah, the price we pay for love. Pauvre Bette. Six years is a long time for two kids to grow apart and for a love, even if profound, to diminish …
at least someone knows what she’s doing…just keep tina safe from queen and eric
what incredible! i can’t believe the queen wants Bette hurt! please take away Tina from her mother and far away from Eric i can’t wait what will happen in the next post you have me so hook with your two stories.