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The L Wing chp 64
THE L WING – CHAPTER 64.
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Tina – babe — are you alright ?
She does not answer me — just stares ahead. I touch her arm and still she does not look at me.
I look at Shane.
That is how she has been since the shooting.
This is my worst nightmare come true – Tina’s past is suddenly something that we can no longer ignore.
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Narration of President Bette Porter.
Shane – this is what I think it is — yes ?
It looks like it yes — she has not said a word since it happened.
I stare at Shane – we know what the other means before either of us say it. I feel tears starting to fall – Shane touches my arm – I accept the gesture but somehow find the strength to fight back the tears.
I am going to need ever ounce of strength I have ever had in my life.
I get into the car and touch Tina’s arm – she stares ahead.
Tina – come on babe — lets get you into the apartment.
Somehow I get her out of the car and with my arm wrapped around her waist we walk inside – Alice and Lara are standing in the foyer – I can see by their eyes that they know something is badly wrong with Tina.
Alice comes forward.
Hey there Tina – come on honey.
She looks at me.
Where ?
The Residence – I will be straight up.
Chief ?
I turn to look at Shane.
I know you are not going to want to hear this but there are about 50 things you can do before you can be with Tina –let Alice help her.
I need to be with her Shane.
I know you do Bette — but you were the intended target of an assassination attempt tonight – we need to find out who and why and whether they are planning any more attempts on you and this country.
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(39 votes, average: 4.10 out of 5)
Ok…Chicki used to be the queen of cliffhangers with her story. I think the crown has now been passed on to you!! You are really keeping me on the edge of my seat with this. Please don’t make us wait long to find out what’s so horrendous in Tina’s file.
Ally, we need a couple of lengthy chapters right away. Pretty please. What’s in the file and why is Tina so damaged? Such a great story and this is no place for you to leave it.
Damn, I have to know what is in that file. The way that Bette has put Tina’s well being in front of everything else should show everybody how much she loves Tina. Bette is not even concerned for her own health. Mrs. Kennard needs to open her eyes to how much Bette loves Tina. What is her Beef with Bette anyway? It is not like Tina just came out and they had seemed comfortable of her sexuality. Or is she always had in the back of her mind that Tina had just not found the right man? Either way Bette is the best thing that has happened to Tina.
noooooo! why you stopped here! please please post soon i can’t wait to see what is the files! this is a lot of dramam but you write in suc a great way! please post soon please!
OH SHIT, this is not going to be good
oh, NO NO NO…no cliffhangers…i am dying here…next chapter super soon…pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
UGH! PLEEEEAAASSSEEE POST SOON.
OMG! Please stop with the cliffhangers ally! You are killing me here! Pleeeeease post soon, i’m loving this story!
U PROMISED ANOTHER POST TONIGHT……WHERE IS IT???????? ARRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!
that was fucking great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! post now
WOW WOW WOW – I wasn’t looking forward to what might happen but you really out did yourself in this chapter. I am in awe of your imagination and your talent. And I am also on pins and needles waiting to find out what next?
holyshitcomments! i think this chapter has the most number of comments i’ve ever seen in a single chapter! wow.
what’s in the file what’s in the file. Come on ally please. I have to know, what happened to Tina over there. You really are killing me here. Pretty please w. sprinkles on top.
WoW what to say? but that the suspense iks killing me
Unbelivable sotry! A nail-bitter..Pls! I BEG YOU, not to make it that harsh for Bette to think lowly of Tina..I had enough dissapointment with the L-Word season 3 that i am considering not watching it anymore..pls..not that drastic please!!!!
Shit shit shit, this is drama and dangerous and awesome. OK now let find out about Tina’s past. OK post soon please, thanks!
Did Lynette “Squeaky” Fromme bust out again? Was it Travis Bickle? Yes, Miss Ally, you keep us dangling at the precipice. I wouldn’t be surprised if you have Tina tied up to the railroad tracks one of these days.
Thanks a lot for this fantastic story, I’m sitting here in front of my computer and I’m not leaving until your next post shows up.
great story.. please indulge us with a lots of chapters soon..
wow, you have to post soon, i can’t wait to see what’s in the file…sounds so bad…i hope it gets better soon, can’t handle my girls being in pain
I can’t wait to read what’s in her file that is so horrendous!
maybe the next post could be 10 pages long!!! lol. This is such a great B/T story! heck with tax stuff, your fans need you more!!!! plz post soon and then soon again and then ….
ally holy fuck!! i thought the other previous chapter were killers…no pun intended..but these one jeez….like i said every hour (only if we were so lucky) waitin biting my nails!!
Dammit this chapter made me want to cry. lol I have no freaking clue why or how Tina’s Afghanistan experience was so traumatic. It has to be more than just seeing someone die.
post traumatic stress disorder? tough one.
ice cream/pizza/beer trucks still standing by …
Waiting on pins and needles…please, please, post again soon!!!
oh god post NOW!!!!!!!
Coming out of lurking… Fantastic story!!!! Please post soon!!! Please?!! Pretty please??!!
Wham bang action in the last two chapters shifts into effective interior scenes in this chapter, coalescing into a fine moment – Kit arrives just when she is needed. Who better to be when Bette when she learns about Tina’s past? You really make this presidential concept credible. Thanks!
OK – Bette can fix it. She can, can’t she? I’ve got a feeling that the second term of office might have a question mark hanging over it. More, please.
WITH Bette. WITH Bette…
oh ally this is so sad…. i hope that whatever is in the file can help to bring Tina back. Please please post another chapter today.
Please please please post again. I’m begging here! I’m going away tomorrow morning and I must must find out what happens before I go, or I really will go insane.
Could you, could you give us another chapter today? =D
Ally…..you are really the master at these cliff hangers. Hopefully you can fit one more in for us before you have to go back to work.
how can you leave it like that?! please post soon, i am begging you
i love this story and the way it’s unfolding. the bette and tina here are such fantastic and interesting characters. i’m going to be checking for the next chapter every half hour. i wish you were still on your ice-cream vacation. please post soon.
Pleaseeeeee… *watery eyes* post another one today!!!!
Damn this was good.
God damn, you really have an attitude you’re wanting to exercise with wanting to leave cliff hangers at the moment!!! You better have those fingers tapping away right this minute…
dont leave it there! Torturer!
Thank you so much for posting!!!
Couldn´t you call in sick . . just for at few days (chapters)It´s such a great story . next chapter, now, please.
You’re the one special, gifted Ally!We’re just compulsive readers(lol), fascinated, waiting for MORE.
wtf! to Tina’s mom..i hope she changes when she sees how Bette loves Tina. Amazing story!
This is a nail biting story. Please don’t make us wait too long for the next chapter. What could have been so bad in Afghanistan?
ally, I knew Afhganistan would rear it’s ugly head. You are so dragging us along and we are so loving it. Keep posting, please!!
HOLY FUCKING CRUD ALLY, 3 FRIGGIN CLIFF HANGERS IN A ROW………R U TRYING TO GIVE SOMEONE A HEART ATTACK!!!!!!!!
This story is sóó good. Best on the board at the moment. Please post another chapter soon!
Wow, this chapter was freaking amazing! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
ally, you got these righteous women ALL riled up now! do you fel a bit afraid to go out? No problem, while you’re in, write some more! Write LOTS more. I too don’t know why just seeing someone die would cause this kind of reaction in tina. I WANNA KNOW! And would also like some chocolate ice cream please?
Hi Ally. This is so enjoyable to read. Wonderful. Like everyone else, I anxiously await your next chapter.
Ally you’re the cliffy-queen, but luckily for us you’re posting often :o)) Finally Afhganistan is here, it was only a question of time….I would have preferred Tina told her story to Bette herself, but under the circumstances Bette has no other choise but read Tinas file. I’m soooo looking forward to the next post….
Really good shit! Can’t wait to se what happens!!
Oh GAWD, How can you leave us like that. I think you secretly have atleast 5-6 chapters written and you just want to torture us! Post Soon!To Jobadge and TMerlin- Wassup with those chapters? I ‘m dying over here!
Does it have something to do with Tina’s not being able to love someone? like a lover kind of love?? since her first girlfriend died.. and then does Tina had a wife or something in Afganisthan and died too? hmm… u gotta post soon to solve all the mysteries…
Such a pleasure to be able to catch up on this wonderful story Ally…you’re doing a brilliant job with the entire concept, and I can’t help but notice that you have drama and yet at the same time you’ve managed to keep B&T together…hmm, what a novel idea…one I would appreciate seeing on screen might I add.
First ever comment. OMG just had to comment, this story is absolutely brilliant. Cliff hangers are awesome you are very very talented. Don’t keep me waiting too long!!
oh my god…you are one of the biggest teases on this site….it’s bad enough we can’t wait to read your chapters as it is, but then the cliffhangers, your killing us!!!!!!!!!!!
come on!!!! post soon pls… i’m dying in here…
You have us hanging from our finger tips and they are getting mighty raw,this is the third cliff hanger in a row. Bette needs to get back to being thePOTUS. and let the Drs take care of Tina. She is hurt herself. Czn’t fault her parent that is their child . My finger tips are hurting from hanging from the cliff. so thanks
Ally, sorry for taking those guesses in the last few chapters. Please don’t be cross with me. I come bearing peace offerings…tubs and tubs of ice cream… I adore your story. Now back to the comments. This was really intense. I’m kind of glad that Bette lost it with Tina’s Mom. Bette has been nothing but respectful and loving toward Tina’s family. *sigh* It’s time Emma sees how much B&T love each other and that Tina is not just the President’s kept woman. As Lucy said, she’ll come around. Please post again soon. I’ll be waiting on edge to read about what’s in Tina’s file.
WOW is it going to put me into a semi catatonic state when we find out what happened in Afghanistan? I am glrad ha Lucy and Bette get along so well., she and Tina will need both her and Kit’s support now. Please check your PM’s.
Ally, You are killing me here. Need More Please and soon. GREAT CHAPTERS
THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME! This was a fantastic chapter, please post again soon.
Alley, You certainly know how to turn on the heat and then walk straight out of the kitchen and leave me in there burning up. This is sheer torture!! What the hell happened to Tina in Afghanistan? Will Bette be able to reach her? Will Tina’s Mom ever get off that high horse and accept Bette as her future daughter-in-law? When will she realize that Bette is everything to Tina and vice versa. Please answer these real soon. Thank you so much for keeping me on thye edge of my seat with this latest installment. Your Loyal Fan.