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The L Wing chp 65
The L Wing – chapter 65
Previously :-
We have Tina’s Afghanistan file.
I look from one to the other.
Its that bad that you had to bring in my sister ?
Yes – I do not know how you are going to take this.
Okay — shut the doors.
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I sit down and Shane puts the file down on the table in front of me.
Kit sits opposite me and Shane beside her.
How is Tina ?
Kit asks gently
Sleeping – her sister has arrived and is going to stay with her. I do not want her alone — not under any circumstances.
I look at Shane who I realise is close to tears.
Shane ?
I am so sorry – I wish I could spare you what that file will do to you.
Shane – it cannot be as bad as that.
It can be.
Would one of you like to tell me about it or do I have to read about it – I assume that you both know about it ?
I rang Kit and told her.
Well that is probably a breach of various laws but we will ignore them for now as someone tried to kill me earlier on.
Its two things really.
Kit also looks upset – she has always tried to protect me – until I got to about 19 and started protecting her.
Yeah ?
Shane shakes her head as if she is trying to get rid of what she knows.
Do you want to read this or have one of us tell you ?
Shane — I have always considered you the most un drama queen of my staff – why all of this ?
Because we do not know how you are going to feel about your future wife after this.
Kit says. I am tempted to laugh — this is all too surreal. It is after 1am and all I want to do is try and sleep in my bed beside the woman I love.
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congratz on your award! You so deserve it!!!!!!! WOW!!!!
I know I don’t comment hardly, but I love reading your stories. You are a talented writer. Congrats as well on your award. Expect more comments from me. You’re the best Ally. Wonderful post babe. Keep them coming. :)
Okay. . .TOTALLY DIDN’T SEE THAT COMING! Drama drama drama, DAMN! Congrats on the award, I hope when Tina wakes up she realizes Bette is indeed alive and loves her. Please post again soon!
knew it…damn i’m good
Your story is brilliant Ally! Congratulations on the well deserved award!
this ia really beautiful story btw
Congrats on the award Ally way to go!!!
WOW!!! what a turn of events i was near speechless reading that chappie. Anyhoo excellent as always and Well Done on ur award i had no doubt about u getting one!!!
HOLY COW!!! What a twist! Hey, where are my 10 pages!!! lol!! Please, please, please, please post soon!! Congrats on the award… SO WELL DESERVED!!!
congrats dudeette!!!! man so did not see this one coming, that’s a shit load of guilt to deal with and now poor ole Bette has taken on some of her own, but she HAS TOO TELL TINA SHE KNOWS, SHE JUST HAS TOO!!!!!! I say to hell with the taxes and HELLO FANFIC…..CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!!!! ANOTHER TODAY…PLEASE…WITH A CHERRY ON TOP!!!!
ally…my jaw is on the ground!! shock value damn like no other!! and better believe u deserve that award!! fuckin amazing!!
That’s why you’re the queen of drama:)Congratulation!! You should take a crack at that FF challenge, from what we’ve been reading, what ever you decided to write will be phenominal. Waiting, waiting,waiting….:-)
nice twist!
That was beautifully written, Thank you
Congrats… mmm, drama. : )
Congrats on your reward. I was shocked by the high drama. But I love it. I only feel sorry for what Tina had been going through, so it’s not surprised Bette would handle it very well.
HEARTY CONGRATS i am very happy for you .I love this story my mornings start with a cuppa coffey and lookin for l wing on the fanfic page and you so made it worthwileyou are the best ally
DAYYYYYYYYYYYYUM! I figured Tina could’ve been the one to kill whether it was accidental or by force. But being linked to Bette like that before they ever met is just…my brain is nearly in shut down mode after that. Perhaps Tina somehow knew that Emily was Bette’s woman and that’s why she had always avoided that topic. Oh and grats on your second award! =D
my god, now i know why you won best drama, ally!.. congrats on your second award!!
Well Ms. allyemmerson, get you! Two in a fucking row! Now don’t go getting a big head. Not that there’s anything wrong with getting head. You know what I mean. By the way, could you squeeze another drop of drama into that chapter? A simple fan could never send that amount of shit flying, it would require a jet engine. I’m surprised Bette hasn’t called the doctor back for a super-sized antacid.
Congratz girl! its really an amazing story :D wow no wonder Tina is having nightmares! i think that Tina knows that Bette was engaged to Emily…maybe thats why she is afraid to tell Bette?? I hope you can update soon!.
Just in case I wasn’t clear, congratulations on your most deserved award.
Hey Ally – Congrats on the second award, it’s so well deserved, your writing is amazing and brilliant. This was a short post, but since it’s you it’s okay LOL…..more please….
Mate, what is a girl to say – Many many congratulations on your 2nd award – so very well deserved. Its been an absolute pleasure to get to know you, work with you on Three is Not a Crowd, and and your an amazing friend. Thanks for your continued support of the raunchy tale that is the Best Sex Story – and thank you for being the one to give me the good news, made it all the more sweeter. Thanks mate, for everything xx
Oh, forgot to say – fuckin awesome chapter mate!!! Porter – what a girl!
This story just keeps getting better. Thanks for the story and congratulations on the award.
Ok, I’ve been a silent reader for months, but this story is amazing and i just had to let you know! Keep up the good work and Congrats on your award, you deserve it!
congrats for you award you really deserved it this is an amazing story and the way you write is amazing. I have to said you let me spechless with Tina’s file! this is a lot of drama but the Bette’s love for Tina is bigger! thanks for keep writting and congrats again for you award!
From the bottom of my heart: I thank you for writting this beautiful story! You deserve the credit that has been given.
Crikey! That was a twist and a half. Didn’t see it coming – brilliant! I’m going to stop trying to second guess what’s going to happen next – ‘cos you are the mistress of surprise. Many congrats on the award – totally deserved. Know you’re busy, but I’m working on an incredibly boring documentary script at the moment and your story just livens up my day. Thanks!
Congrads on the award YOU deserve IT!!!This is one hell of story I am enjoyed it from the begining.. I love the twist you just gave us. I guess we will see how strong true love really is.. Please keep going and post soon if you can. and sorry I don’t comment everytime but it is hard at work when I read. Thanks for the story…
Congratulations on your award. It is soooo deserved. I hate politics and at the beginning I was leary about reading this story. But let me tell you, you have had me captivated from the beginning. You are such a great writer and I will read anything you write. This was a great chapter and I as always, I can’t wait to read more. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Great story AlleyE. Love it. Congratulations on the award.
Ally, you are my bestest friend in the whole universe and I can’t find the right words to tell what your lasting friendship means to me. I am very proud and so happy that you have won another award because you deserve all of the accolades you are receiving. You even put a twist into this chapter that you didn’t let me in on—shame on you. See I told them in SF that even if I know things that you change them at the last minute. I love you dearly Ally. Keep writing and posting. And yes once again I know—I AM BIASED!!!
Congrats on the award Ally! This weekend’s posts really punctuated what those judges and we readers already knew. :) “Heart attacks ‘R Us” must be the store where you bought your computer. Thanks for keeping our TiBette hearts pumpin’ wildly.
“Thank you to JB and LH for filling my dreams full of lustful thoughts” ROFLMAO!!! This is a very deserved award, The L Wing is one of my favorite histories, I don´t know how you come up with this stuff! Congratulations!!!!
If i ever win the lottery I am setting you up in business to write the L Wing Books, you are soo soo talented each chapter is better than the last. You sooo deserve the award and I really cant see how anybody will be able to take your crown from you, because you are the best and just keep getting better. This story was jaw dropping, but I think that poor Bette will eventually have to tell Tina that she knows, as It will be too big for her to keep from Tina. And poor Tina hope she gets the help she needs and will get back to herself soon. Congrats again cant wait for the next installement
When you said Drama,that is what you meant. Love this story. you keep us on our toes ,and found out can second guess you.when I try its way off. ////////////////CONGRATULATION///
I bow my head for such mastership, you’re simply the best. My sincere congratulations for the award. This was once again one hell of a chapter.Love you.
Congatulations…very well deserved….and this chapter was brillent….loved the drama….keep it comin!
oh crap. congrats on the award and please post soon ^_^
Now Tina needs to wake up and tell Bette about her dreams. Much deserved award
Congratulations on the award. I enjoy this story so much.
Congratulations for your award! This is a great History..!
Congratulations on your award !! I’m doing the happy dance for you because your story rocks – however I’m a little blown away by the twists and turns of the last few chapters – Tina pulling the trigger on her girlfriend I’m doubting it – have to go back and read the chapter when we learned about this from Tina’s POV – I will track it down cause you put it there for a reason – aren’t I a devoted fan :)
Congrats!! I love this story so much..the best thing about it is the twist that comes along!!
Congratulations on the award, Ally! Drama indeed. Poor Tina, poor Bette. Love really can conquer anything. Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Looking forward to more!
The award couldn’t have gone to a better writer…..love this story! Didn’t see that one coming…can’t wait for the next instalment.
Congrats on the award, you deserved it!!! Bring the drama on… never gets enough! (^_^)/
Way to go, Ally!!! Congrats on the award. It’s well deserved. Hope Tina wakes up soon. I don’t think Bette should keep what she knows to herself. It’s going to eat her up inside. Please post soon!!!
CONGRATS YOU DESERVE THE AWARD!! LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!
bloody f***ing hell…i can’t imagine what is bette going through and still feel this strong love…and what is tina feeling i hope we’ll find out soon…congratulations on your 2nd award, you deserve it
As i right this my mout h is hanging open, DAAAAYYYYUUUUMMMMMM, so did not see that happening!!! OMGAWD, what a twist!!! I don’t care what Bette says this revelation is only the beginning of more shit to hit the fan. How much more can Bette take? That would be so f***ked up if Emily did survive that she and tina were going to get married, now that would be some DRAMA!!! Oh, congrats on the award, so deserved! Since you won another award I think you should give us another chappy!
congratulations, ally, you definitely deserve it. a fine twist, by the way.
oh gosh what a chapter, that was so good!!! I love how i just have no idea what is going to happen next. CONGRATS on the award, highly deserved!
Congrats on the awared, definitly well deserved. But, holy shit, no way we saw that coming. The guilt and grief that Tina must hold inside. Bette cannot keep the information to herself, Tina may not even know. You can’t start a relationship with lies. What a load for both of them, and oh yeah, Bette just happens to also be the President. No stress. Can’t wait for more. Way to go.
Congradulations and so well deserved. What a TWIST and so brilliantly done. I am glad that Bette can force herself beyond her own pain and shock to her love for Tina. Beibg able to put her love for Tina above al else speaks sooo well for her and puts all detractors (Emma) to rest–case closed. Please continue.
CONGRATS ally!! This is GREAT! You have always kind of hinted that Tina and Bette’s past were connected, so that didn’t surprise me, but Tina pulling the trigger…mannnnnn! I’m back to not trusting Tina’s intentions fully although I do believe the shooting was an accident…just not sure if Tina knew about Bette and Em already. Tina has some balls if she knew about their relationship and still got involved with Bette. Anyway, you definitely deserve the awards!! I am so sorry – I wish I could spare you what that file will do to you…WOW!!
Congratulations Ally – now back to the grindstone!Jeez poor Tina – any reason you’re torturing her?
A VERY VERY deserved award Ally!!! The 4 last chapters have been a total shock, sure as hell didn’t see that coming… but they are great great chapters!!Post soon please pretty please!!!
Congrats on your award. This is awesome and damn big drama, to much for them to handle. OK post soon please, thanks!
Congratulations on your award Ally! We missed you in SF…but not to worry…Ruth did a great job as your mole!! LOL Thanks!
See, this chapter just reinforces why you won again. Congrats, great chapter.
so deserved the award…..you are the drama queen my dear…….please bring it on……i love this fic……
Congrats on your second award. You’ve got the goods! What an imagination you have. I hope you get to experience the events in your story…not the violence just the lust.
Hey you..back from SF and I am catching up. Drama is now your middle name. That was a great few chapters and I can’t wait for more. Congrats!
Congratulations to you on your award. You deserve it with your wonderful stoy telling. You bring joy into me with your words. How is Bette going to deal with the fact that Tina slept with Emily? Did Tina even know that Emily was seeing someone else? If Tina was unaware of her relationship with another woman how can she be responsable for the affair. Shooting someone and killing then accidently can and will destroy someone who is unable to forgive themselves. No wonder Tina slept with half of Europe. It is like she was trying to wash the ugliness out of her conscience. I hope that Bette will decide to tell her about Emily so that they both can move on and maybe get to the bottom of all of this mess. Great Post.
OMFGLIKEMOUTHDROPSTOTHEFLOORTotally didnt see that commingWOW! Your goood!, followed this story from the beginning, can’t wait to see what drama ahead u got for us!congrads on the award!
Ally-You just keep getting better and better. I cannot wait until your next post. Hope it is soon.
Whoa did not see that coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i said o fuck out loud and cause people to stare
Great series Ally congrats.
oh my, what a twist…super good…Thumbs UP!
Congrats on your well deserved award! It is a great story.
Well Damn! I ddin’t see that one coming. Bette is a better lady than me b/c I don’t kow if I could handle finding out that the love of my life had an affair with the former and now dead love of my life. Talk about heavy. I’m off to read yur next chapet b/c i need to get Tina’s side of the story. Maybe she can redeem herself, but that’s a big maybe….i guess it’s not her fault since Bette and the major were not public….but, I’ll stop rambling and just read the next chapter. Congrats on the much deserved reward Ally!
Big congrats on your 2nd award, well deserved. Keep the drama coming. Love this fic, and await the next chapter. Thanks.
I love this story, I never thought I would since I’m not that big on politics or this type of storylines. I have to say though, I am beyond hooked! I come home everyday after work and I have to just check if there is an update, which is another reason i love this series because the updates are consistant. I’ve been reading from the beginning but never bothered to register until now, so yeah awesome story and congrats on the well deserved award!
Congratulations on your award. I love reading your stories.
Congratulations on your award, you deserve it so much, I am so hooked on this fanfic. Love it, love it, love it!
Congrats for a so deserved award!!!!!!
wooooooohooooooooooo~ congrats on your award! definitely so deserve it! :) keep posting!!!
Congrats on your award! This is far deeper than anything I could have imagined. Drama wrapped within an enigma, how will Bette be able to keep this secret? Wasn’t that the undoing of them on The Show? Thanks!
all i can say is W.O.W.!!! great story.. great writer..please post again soon..
Oh my god! Finally I have been able to catch up with ur story and what a story it is! You so deserve the award Ally. Congrats!! Can’t wait for the next post …