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The Luckiest Woman In The World! The Fantasy Challenge
Tina rolled over admiring Bette who had just fallen asleep. It had taken Bette a month after Tina returned home to make love to her. Bette didn’t want any false assurances like the last time. Just three months ago Tina didn’t know where Bette and Angelica were. During that time of pain, hysteria and loneliness Tina fell apart.
Not only did she long for her daughter but Bette as well. The shock forced her to see what was real and what wasn’t. She finally admitted she wasn’t in love with Henry. He was a mistake who came into her life when she was blinded by anger and hurt.
Bette was no longer the woman she fell in love with. That confident, powerful, self-driven woman. She lost her job along with her drive to succeed. The woman she had loved became this uncertain, powerless, lost person.
Then Henry came along full of that testosterone power of a man. Tina thought she needed someone to take charge and he even tried to define how she felt. Tina was one step short from being a doormat. She almost let him adopt Angelica. Weakening and becoming ashamed of her past lifestyle and having a mix raced child, she looked to Henry to make things better, make things easier.
When they walked down the street as a family people looked at Angelica like she didn’t belong. Like there was something wrong with her. If she stayed with Henry, it would have been impossible to explain to Angelica why people thought she didn’t belong. It would have been impossible to explain when or why Tina lost her way and forgot who she was. When she became old enough to understand the stares and small talk behind her back, Tina couldn’t explain it but she knew Bette could.
Tina was one fortunate lady. She smiled because she had her life back. She had her woman that she fell in love with and a beautiful baby. In a few weeks Bette will be opening her own gallery funded by the sale of her paintings. She scouted for unknown artists as well as up and coming ones. Bette even hand picked the Gallery director. Tina heard of the woman for many years yet never met her. This woman was Bette’s ex-lover.
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Thank you for letting us know who your other alias was. I did not even think of that one! What do you mean you are not going to continue?!?! I love the story “there is no place like home” I look forward to it every week. I understand you don’t feel like writing but I sincerely ask that you continue,please. It is a refreshing story on the site and I love the slow burn feel to it. In any event thank you for sharing your talent, the pleasure was all mine!
I definitely didn’t see that one coming! I can understand being burnt out and wanting to take a break from writing. But please don’t just flat out stop.
Take a rest,but not to long, and come back. We need you on the site. Your stories are so well written and heartfelt. Just dont stop. we would be the loser. thanks
I truly hope you don’t stop writing ‘there’s no place like home” I LOVE it and lots of others do too. As was said, take a break, but please don’t stop!!!!
Love your stories, please don’t stop.
Hey Succulent1, great story. Excellent competition for those who have taken up the challenge. I love the who interconnected family angle… which has Bette in the center connected to Kit and the new baby with Angus, Mel, Gus and Brian. Swwet. Nice twist. I love it. Thanks for your story.
Yeah, I agree with everyone else. Your stories are great! You can’t quit now! You and your alter ego are wonderful writers :)
well, you got me there, i would never guess about your second name…i would hope you won’t stop writing any of your stories, so please reconsider…nice chapter for the challenge, btw
Love ALL your stories, but understand you may need a break….a short one hopefully. Please don’t leave us….we need your stories….they’re the best!
Please do not stop writting you are so great at it. Thias story is the BEST Thank you so much!!
I sure hope you don’t stop writing…everything you write..I enjoy and always want more. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
I sure hope you don’t stop writing…everything you write..I enjoy and always want more. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Your story”There’s No Place LIke Home” is simply outstanding. Please don’t stop. I truly look for it each day hoping to see a post. It’s so different than the others on this site. Please reconsider.
Wow this is wonderful and happy for them. Love all of your stories and hope to see post soon but take your time ok, see you later!
What is it about Bette that keeps getting her punk’d by her baby mamas? …I hope you will come back to your story about B&T in Canada with Kit, Bruce and Senior. The drama!!!!
Your stories are wonderful. This one is right up there with the others. My only hope and wish it that you will reconsider and continue with, “There is No Place Like Home”. That story is so rich with southern history and the characters are like right out of a novel. I too have looked forward to that story. But, I do understand getting burned out. Take a break but please come back to that one.
Thanks for outing yourself…I had no idea. I am very sorry to hear that you no longer feel like writing. Your story “There’s no place like home” had quickly become one of my favorites. Who knows what the future will bring? I can’t help it…I am selfish, and hope that it is more chapters from you. Thanks!
I enjoy all your writing so much and you have such range. I’ll especially miss the drama, fascinating/surprising story lines, tenderness and body heat. You have such passion and heart in your work. I’m hooked on both your stories so hopefully you just need a vacation and will return.
hey suc1: im very sadden that you are leaving us for selfish reasons i might add.but take care lady we hope to see ya later! we loved youre stories and maybe you feel up to it youll continue. we need to know what tina going to do to cherly.? youre killing us.TAKE CARE!!!!!! FRIEND!
was waitin for the story update for “there is no place like home”.really adore that story! juz wish – hurry back!!!!!!!!!!!! dun leave us here!
You and Michellia are one in the same, who would have thunk!! Take a well deserved rest, but please come back, youi are too talented a writer to not indulge your passion.Brain as Bette’s half brother and screwing her ex is just TO CREEEEEEEEEEEEPY. I have NEVER ben a fan of Brain (I hated the writing in the show. I mean comme on it as it Brain pissed perfume and his s**t didn’t stink. It was too unrealistic that one person would be the universe and EVERYONE was drawn to him or they were wrong.).
i lack the talent it takes to write a great fan fic., so i can’t say i know what your going through, however, i am an extremely greedy fan fiction reader, who would surely perish if you deceided not the continue your michella series, i totally understand the need for a break, but please, please not a permanent one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are a great wriet whom we all enjoy reading – enjoy your rest, but know that I won’t be able to sleep until I know what happens in “No Place Like Home”!
Awwww that was sweet and great, but I’m sad that you doesn’t want to write anymore, I love your writing and I would never have guess about your other author name :o)) Take a break and then come back when you feel ready – we need you to write. Take care.