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The L Wing chp 69
The L Wing – Chapter 69.
Narration of Tina Kennard.
We have been at Bette’s place in Virginia for just over a day and it’s a lovely afternoon. Bette is working in her study and I have been sleeping on the sofa.
I decide that what we need is to spend time away from both our jobs. So I have been preparing a picnic for the last 30 minutes, I even find an old fashioned basket to pack it all in. I collect up a blanket to lie on and sunglasses and a portable radio and pack them in a backpack.
Finally I go to her study – she is writing in the margin of a report that she is reading. I watch her and smile – she can be so serious when she is working. Those dark eyes can be so intense that they look sombre.
After a few minutes she looks up and smiles at me.
Hey there
Hey Madam President
You okay sweetie ?
Yeah – you going to be long ?
Depends – why ?
I have a picnic basket filled with fruit and bread and slices of ham
and salad and all sorts of things that I know you really like. I thought we might have a picnic somewhere.
She throws her pen down, picks her papers up and locks them away.
Are you asking me out on a date Tina ?
I might be.
She gets up
What do I need to do ?
Just get changed.
Okay
She comes across to me and kisses me softly on the lips
I will be a very quick. Wait for me ?
Naturally
She runs upstairs and I collect all the gear and sit on the front door step. I have been out of my unresponsive state for three days now and the only thing inert now is Bette’s sex drive.
I desperately want to make love with her but she seems scared of me. We need to talk this through – the problem is that we have never been big on talking about our sex life. And that is because we have always been too busy making love to need to have discussions.
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(49 votes, average: 4.27 out of 5)
Please, please, please post another L Wing soon!! I like both stories, but you keep me hanging everytime!! I hope that B tells T the real reason soon… they need to work through this. post soon please!!!
oh fucking hell ally, u made me cry dude. And of course your other story got raved about it was awesome! Anyhoo poor bette I hope she talks to tina soon. Thanx again Ally WE LOVE YOU!! ;)
YAY i was 1st! WooooHoooo *skips off into the sunset*
Bette definitely needs help coping and it doesn’t seem like she’s inclined to admit it. You gotta save her, Ally.
If you could only feel my heartbeat…please post soon Ally. Thanks for sharing your wonderful stories with us.
Is bette going to tell her what really went down???….Find out in the next installment of The L Wing….dun dun dun :D
If only Tina knew that there was more to it than just her own demons coming to the surface.
I state again, they need intervention, they need couples therapy to get through this. At least have Bette speak with the psychiatrist who helped Tina and get an opinion as to how to proceed. Also early in this story Bette told Tina her lover was murdered so!
Are you trying to give us a heart attack with these stories of yours?!? I love every fucking minute of it! Bette will have to confess soon about this, it’s eating her up. But how do you break it your finace,”hey by the way the woman you accidentally shot and killed and was fucking was my soon to be wife, wow the sunset is beautiful tonight” That’s a tough conversation to have, i don’t envy her. Anyways, please continue with both stories, you have to now because you have turned us all into addicts. I confess that I am junkie and proud of it! Looking forward to the next hit!
Love love your story…I hope Bette can open up to Tina if not things will get much worse…love the drama you bring as well. Please post soon Ally.
I love this story so much, please go on as soon as possible.
ally: you are a big TEASE!youre going to be getting hospitals bills for all the heartattacks youre giving us.but thays why we love ya lady.please save bette and make her talk to tina.tina doesnt like kept waiting for sex?????.please post soon both stories were not picky just greedy.lol you rock
Hey puppy! An NC-17 chapter–how appropriate for this chapter number. Please don’t make Tina suffer much longer thinking that Bette doesn’t love her anymore. Ally, I hope your back gets better quickly–Oh yeah just how did you hurt it again? LOL!!!!
Hey Ally, I love both stories but would like to see Bette tell Tina the whole story. Emily brought a lot of what happened on herself. She was the one who was sleeping with Tina. Yes, Tina knew tha she was the other woman, but sometimes in those situations people do crazy things. The only way that Bette will be able to forgive Tina for Emily’s death is for her to tell Tina the truth. I do not want to see a rerun of this past season. I would like to see a together Bette and Tina.
love this story!!!please keep posting
Please post another chapter TODAY…
Wow, the tables have really turned. Looks like Bette won’t be able to keep her secret very long. It must be killing her not being able to tell Tina who Emily was. Time to be truthful.
Aargh another chapter soon please. Please get Bette to talk to Tina and let them sort it out so they can spend the rest of their lives together. Happily.
Fantastic, I really really like your other story, but it is not a patch on this one. Poor Bette she has to open up tp Tina, please dont make this spoil it for them
Noooo, Cliffy!!!! Bette has to talk to somebody, if she’s not ready to talk to Tina. At least she has to talk to Kit or Shane. The best way she still needs to let it go and tell T the truth. It’s eating her inside, poor Bette. please post SOON!
I love your story very very much but how come Bette didn’t talk to Tina’s shrink about when and how to share this important info with Tina. I love your last paragrah of Tina’s insight but she doesn’t know the half of it and I fear it will drive them a part and somehow put one or the other in more danger – see the type of anxiety your story creates… your good. Don’t let this hang too long please.
please give us more. we want more.
what a turmoil…i wonder, when bette will tell tina about emily if it will add to the drama
Okay, I’m thinking that Bette needs to tell Tina about Emily PRONTO! Please post again soon!
Bette needs to rid herself of these demons. It’s no longer Tina’s demons that have invaded her. She really need some professional help. No more secrets! She may think that she can handle it and that she’s protecting Tina but it is wrecking havoc on their relationship. Please post soon.
Let me first say a belated congratulations for your award! The concept of the L Wing is just brilliant, and the new story you have on the go is its equal. I’m amazed at how much you write – it’s hard for me to keep up and I find I have multiple chapters to read at a time when I finally do get a chance. Truly a pleasure – thanks for taking the time.
Please have these two talk very soon..you are making me sad….oh and I hope you post soon
POST SOON!!!!
Wow amazing and please post soon, thanks!
too damn good ally
Love The L Wing, hope you post again soon.
waoooo! a difficult difficult time for B&T i hope Bette get the courage to talk to Tina. Continue please!
oh goodness, i wish you posted at least once a day…this is an amazing story, that just grabs your attention and you cannot wait to know what happens next :)
Ally it’s not even a question what story you need to contniue with. You have me hoojed on the L Wing! I’m addicted to this story and i need my fix. Please post soon!!! Please.
What a drama Ally!!!! This is so great and so sad, I’m sad for Bette and for them as a couple. Bette needs help no matter what the country thinks and she really needs to tell Tina about Em….what is she thinking not telling her AARRGGG the president makes me so mad sometimes!!!! I’ve not read your other story yet, I’m sure it’s great, but can’t you just write this one and save the other for later….I need this story all the time!!! Have a great day…
Ally, even though I’ve had a headache for the past day and a half from studying in the dark, I just had to read this. Wow girl…fantastic. Poor Bette!
Exceptional as per usual. Thanks.
that was a very emotionally charged and powerful chapter, ally.. thanks a lot, loved it.
You have me in a real dilemma here. I love both your stories. Your writing is awesome – I simply don´t have time for my kids anymore, let alone ,my job – but then one has to prioritize, so post soon, please!
Ally, Wonderful as always. I love the way that you so expertly describe both Tina’s and Bette’s emotions and thoughts. Now they needs to open out and share these both the doubts do more damage and destroy thier realtionship. Bette really has to tell Tina everything that is curretnly haunting her. At least Tina has the insight to realize what is going on with Bette and hopefully can give her the time and support to release these demons too. I do adore everthing that your write as their is such warmth and honest sentiment in every post. Please continue with this and “A Long and Winding Road” as both bring such pleasure. Thank you so much , Your Loyal Fan
More, need more. Brain gone. Need more Allyemerson…please?
please..please..please post again soon.. great chaptert..awesome story..
Please post soon, it was a great update…you are so evil with the cliff hangers…haha but its all part of what makes you so good…please continue…and soon…thanks for the update!
bette has to tell bout emily. no other choice. pls post soon!!!!!!!!!!
Bette needs help and is unable to ask for it. They need the psychiatrist who helped Tina. This was a difficult chapter, please post soon.
yeesh, i hope they get through this! a moving chapter, ally.
tell her now bette!!!!!!!!!!!!
Omg! This is getting so intense. I love your story ^_^ What will happen if bette tells tina about emily…
sorry i’ve been away for two wks wow!! alot has happened in that time – you got a much deserved award for the l wing which i really love to read and what reading it’s been tonight –hope bette will talk to the dr that helped tina -she told bette she’d need some help to handle the new info– what creative vibs you have and the surprises that you deliver in your story can’t hardly wait for next posting of this story or your new one –a pregnant bette