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“Young and in love” chpt. 3
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Place: Science Class
Time: 3:30 p.m.
That day…
The class just ended…
Shane: “Hey, are you okay?” She rubs Bette’s back.
Bette: “I’m fine.” She looks away. She thought of Tina and her sad face.
Shane: “Well you don’t look like it. Are you coming to the library with me?”
Bette: “Yeah. I have to see Tina.” She stood from her chair and adjusted her clothing.
Shane: “So, how long have you and Tina been having problems.”
Bette: “A while now.” She breaks eyes contact and sighs.
Shane: “What’s up? What are you not doing?.”
Bette: “Simple things like my homework…and studying.”
Shane: “Shame…shame…shame.” She shakes her head.
Bette: “I know. I already feel bad enough. Thanks for making me feel worse.” She walks off.
Shane: “Hey…” She grabs her arm. “I’m not trying to make you feel a thing. I’m trying to get to the bottom of you slacking off in school. What’s the problem?”
Bette: “I asked Tina to marry me and she’s been putting my question off for some reason.” Shane eyes widened.
Shane: “You what? Bette…what’s the rush?”
Bette: “I don’t know. I keep having this dream about her hooking back up with Helena. I am scared shitless Shane. What happens if I lose her?”
Shane: “Whoa! Slow down. Okay, first of all you’re not going to lose her, well, if you don’t do your studies, but besides all that. She’s with you now. Not Helena. I can’t tell you how many times she expressed this to you.”
Bette: “I know, but with her constantly in Tina’s face has begun to worry me a bit. I know Tina loves me, but the question I have is she in love with me?”
Shane: “Bette…you’ve been dating her for a couple of years now. I think it’s fare to say and based on the facts that she is indeed in love with you.”
Bette: “Hmm.” She seems to disagree. “I don’t know Shane. Tina’s been pretty bitchy lately.”
Shane: (Chuckles) “That’s what you say about all the girls you date. It seems when the pressure is applied you can’t take it. You always end up doing something dumb. What are you looking for another outlet?”
Bette: “No. Of course not. I’m just not good with this relationship thing Shane. I’m used to dating multiple girls at once. Am I wrong for that?”
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I figured it was obvious what Bette’s question was because Tina mentioned marriage in the last chapter out of nowhere. Hopefully Tina realizes she’s being temporarily kicked out and not ditched.
WOW!!!!! WOW!!!!! That was great
ya what lamentamini said
Awsome another chapter, did I tell you how much I like this story, I do…I hope Tina sees that Bette is trying to make an effort and in return gets rewarded lol. Post real soon.
I’m loving this story. I really like Tina in this story!!
Good for Bette, kick tina to the curb (temporarily anyway). Tina is being way too serious. Bette didn’t ask that chick to knock down her door and she got rid of her as quickly as hse could. Why can’t Tian just supposrt Bette and help motivate her instead of constantly throwing Helena in her face. Loving the Bette/Tina college theme so please continue.
i already read all the last chapter and this story is good But i think Tina is overeacting, but i hope they can work out theirs problems continue this is good.
very very sweet story :)
Hey I’ve just read the 3 posts and I’ve to say I don’t like your characters very much – especially Bette and Tina. Why is Tina so bitchy and acts like she is Bettes mother and where are their passion and love for one another??? You have to fix this now, if you ask me (I know you dont LOL)
Good chapter. Bette kick Tina out and thats for overeact, I know she is really worried about Bette problem and she need to stay and help her and supports her, not go to party and come back tell her that she not stady, making thing up, thats not right, and hope they will work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
It’s fair enough that Tina is worried about getting married to someone who hasn’t shown that much effort toward her studies, but she has to be blind if she thinks she’s not putting into the relationship. Bette needs Tina to be there for her and that whole thing about telling her not to go out and then turning around and going herself is a bit slack. Then to come home and state “She wants me back Bette”, no shit Tina don’t you think Bette sees that ever time Helena undresses her with her eyes?!?!?! I meen please that was a stupid thing to say and when you add that to the comment she made earlier about her realationship with Helena, it looks like she just keeps throwing her in Bettes face when ever it suits. Hello would anyone else be pissed if your girlfriend said that to you?!?!?!?! Great chapter, I love where you’re taking this, it’ll be interesting if they can both see their wrongs and pull their heads in! Post soon.
Oh I like this, Tina is being a pain in the ass though, hope she doesn’t see it as been dumped
I realy like where ur going with this… Looking forward to your next post :)