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Damaged Ch. 130
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Carmen woke up in her old bedroom and sat up. She stretched and yawned. She climbed out of the bed and walked out of the room. She walked into the living room to see her cousins watching cartoons. She smiled as she said good morning. She walked into the kitchen and her mother Mercedes was cooking breakfast.
“Good morning,” she looked at her child. “How did you sleep last night?”
Carmen sighed softly. “Alright mami.” She raked her fingers through her hair.
Mercedes walked away from the stove and walked over to the refrigerator. She turned around and looked at her daughter. She sighed and shook her head. “What mami?”
“You’re moping around. Get out and do something. I don’t want you in the house all day.”
“Mami, I think I made a big mistake.” Mercedes moved the pan and turned off the stove. She wiped off her hands.
“About Chane?” Carmen smiled at how Mercedes said Shane’s name.
“Yes Shane,” Carmen dropped her head. “I don’t think I should have made that choice.”
“Carmen, you did what your heart told you. If you feel like you didn’t make the right choice, think it over. Everything won’t come at you at once.” Carmen nodded her head.
“I already miss her mami. I’m going crazy without her.” Mercedes walked over to Carmen and wrapped her arms around her.
“Everything’s going to be okay mija I promise. Let Chane calm down and think things through before you try to run back into her arms again.”
Carmen looked at her mom and smiled. “Thanks mami.” Mercedes kissed her daughter on her forehead and squeezed her.
“Anytime mija, anytime.”
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Shane woke up in Cherie’s bed. She sat up on her elbows and looked around. She scratched her head and started to sit up. Cherie walked into the bedroom and smiled.
“Good morning beautiful.” Shane smiled faintly at her. Cherie walked over to the bed and crawled towards Shane. “I want to say last night was…incredible.” She leaned forward and kissed Shane softly. “I hope that you’ll stick around this time.” Shane looked at her and smiled.
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I feel so sorry for Carmen. She needs to let go of Shane and find someone who won’t hurt her so much. Don’t get me wrong, I’m an enormous Sharmen fan (they’re my favorite; I’m actually writing a fic for them myself), but THIS Shane takes Carmen for granted and is emotionally and physically abusive. Nobody deserves that kind of treatment. Nobody.
How could Tina let Bette go? She is so hot with Helena. thanks
I always love your sharmen drama.I hope Carmen will make the right chioce this time and will try to get shane back even if this won´t be so easy.Good job!
ACB, Finally am up to speed with your fabulous fan fiction and tell you how much I am enjoying it. I think that Jodana should hold it there and follow through with Tina as this could be the making of both these injured parties. They each need someone to care for and look after so why not each other? AS for Carmen, she is finally realizing whet she has lost but it looks like it might be a little too little and a lot too late as Shance escones herself with Cherie again. Jenny and Elle are really being to grow as a couple and share one another’s lives. Alice just needs to trust Dana and maybe welcome Lara into their home. That way she can keep an eye on these two old friends. And finally Bette and Helena remain hot to trot, anywhere and any time (Thank you) as their love deepens and matures. All in all, a terrific tale and many thanks for all of the installments. Your Loyal Fan.