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The L Wing 70+71
THE L WING — CHAPTER 70 plus 1
Previously on The L Wing ( or the missing chp 70 )
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Narration of Tina Kennard
I stare at her for a few seconds until I come to my senses and realise that there is one thing that I must be doing at this exact moment — holding my mixed up girlfriend.
I quickly pull her into my embrace — holding her tight and trying to give her as much love as she has given me since we became partners. I have been so mixed up with my own feelings that I have not given enough attention to her – not properly – not the way she deserves.
“Bette — oh honey I am so sorry – I am sorry — come on babe – its okay – I promise you that it will be okay. I am over the worst and nothing is going to come between the two of us getting married at Christmas and spending our lives worshipping each other. Its okay Bette “
I kiss her hair and nurse her – cuddling her tightly to me. She eases away after about five minutes of just holding onto me.
“I swear I don’t see you as a killer Tina – I love you — and I want to make love to you — its just that — I have been getting the sort of dreams that you must have. I see you and Emily and I am there and I cannot help you “
“You have seen her photograph I take it ? “
“Yes – it was in her file “
“Are the dreams a rerun of what you heard me telling Dr Gage ? “
“Yes — lots of shooting and you are so helpless and I just cannot get close enough to reach you — either of you “
“Do I die in your dreams ? “
“No — just wounded – badly wounded with a lot of blood. I guess that comes from Candy’s shooting – you don’t know this yet but there is a photograph of me taken when security were getting me out of the theatre and there is a shit load of blood around – some of the press won’t show it but it is on the internet. “
A thought occurs to me about the assassination attempt. I stroke Bette’s face and gently place my lips on hers.
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(44 votes, average: 4.39 out of 5)
oh god, ally, you have to post another chapter today.. you have to.. I love this story
wow, looks like I’m the one who just fainted, hope T would not run away. Glad you’re back in action, started panicking yesterday when I can’t open your stories, thought I have to go out & buy a new laptop, we miss & love u..
Oh My God you can’t end it like that. I absolutly have to know what happens. YOU are killing me with these cliffhangers. PLease Post Soon. Pretty Please with a cherry on top.
Thanks for posting the chapter that was lost. Wow, that was your best yet. Looking forward to more, more, more!!!
WOW!!!! Please post another chapter today I need to know whats happens next. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YES!! It finally happend :) Cant wait to hear how Tina takes it. Love your story!
Excellent storyline, please post soon!
Hey Ally, doing a happy dance as I was distressed at trying to read chapter 70 and kept getting an empty page. I take it the same is true for “The Long and Winding Road” as the last chapter (4) displayed another lack of your wonderful words. At looks like the truth is out there now and these gals can get some closure on the past and continue to build their palce in the clouds together. Thank you for all of the dramatic prose that keep me on the edge of my chair as I devour every chapter that you post. Please post more real soon. Thank you for everything. Your Loyal Fan.
this is my fav fanfic story at the moment. Please. You have to post another chapter today. Is it night time over at your end, ally? could you please please just post another chapter before u sleep?
What did you do to annoy the Server God that your story got posted all funny? How did I manage to get to it before the deity expressed its anger? Any way, let’s hear it for progress! Bette spilled, which is only fair after Tina did her own vent. I hope Tina doesn’t go catatonic again over the news.
ok ally, i love love LOVE this story. BUT, lord love a duck, when is it going to stop being all about bleepin tina!! lest we forget, just earlier, someone damn near killed bette, and did kill someone she worked with, and immediately its all about tina in her catatonic state. Now tina’s awake, and bette knows she was the one with emily, and she has major demons to deal with, and tina FAINTS! Bette is going though hell, and maybe it could be about her for one minute! tina made her choices, she isn’t any victim…
Oh MY! The shit has hit the fan. Something tells me that it’s about to get worse!!! Post Soon!
please don’t leave us hanging here too long…god what a story
all pls post soon this story is more addictin than any addiction iwould have known dun keep us hangin preety pls…love love love it
Damn, you’re good. Post again soon, please.
wowwwww! this chapter was amazing! how do you do? every chapter you let me hook waiting for the next! i am diying already for the next!
Please dont leave us like this,I{we all} need another chapter asap. Love this story. This is a great story. thanks
you are truely amazing at telling a story, amazing
OH MY GOD… PLEASE, PLEASE post another chapter today…. don’t keep us hanging like this….
i think i am having some form of heart failure, oh my god, i can’t believe you leave us hanging like this, thank god you re-posted the last chapter, i was literally throwing a fit, trying to read it, p.s. please re-post your other story too. i am so damn addicted your killing me!!!!!!!!!!!
ally i curse u n praise u!! ur build up hand me heart pumpin its slowin down now!!!
ally – thanks for the new chapter – I wondered why Bette didn’t have Tina sit down and also I would have thought doing this with the therapist present might have been a wise move – despite these overisights on the part of the POTUS I am very glad she told her. Now of course the question is can Tina handle it. What will you write – you leave me wondering what the next turn will be.
Thank you for posting!! I wait for two days, but it feel like 2 years. I almost cried when I read chapter 71. How do Tina handle this? Hopefully, they can figure the way out.
dang this is good.
OMG, the stress. First of all thank you for reposting chapter 70, I was going nuts yesterday with yours and a couple others. I am so glad that Bette finally told her, you just can’t keep that kind of stuff locked up inside. Hopefully, Tina will not run, and they will talk. None of it happened intentionally. Two lonely people, in a place of devastation and horror. You have got to post soon, cos the suspense is killin us.
Holy cow, you are definitely killing me here!!!!!! You’ve to post VERY VERY SOON…..and I’m so glad that Bette finally told Tina, it was the only thing to do. I wonder how Tina will take the NEWS????
Excellent!! Thank you so much for not leaving it hangin’ in the breeze and teasing us until the next chapter.
Please, Please, Please, Please Post again today!!! You have us all totally hooked on this story! I can’t get anything done cos I’m constantly checking the site for your updates, so for the sake of my electricity bill, my housework and my sanity, please dont keep us waiting long.X
You really are an amazing writer! You are so right in making Bette tell Tina. She needed to know, however hard it may be for both of them. Don’t let Tina slip into another PTSD-episode. Please post more!
COME ON ALLY! YA CAN’T JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!!!
Please PLEASE!! Post another one tonight..I love this story with its every twist and turn!! OMG this is so good!!!
Please Ally…can you have a post very soon? I am going to have to get you to that cabin and pay you to write. post very soon…pretty please? My heart can’t take this..
Oh I am scared, please make them get through this please, oh my god you have to post soon
Don’t leave us hanging to long. Love your stories.
Hey babe, you really have everyone sitting on the edge of their seats. I think it might be a good idea to post another chapter of this story soon. Because if you don’t I’m afraid they will form a mob, go to England, kidnap you, and take you to that cabin that fergz1 keeps threatening you with and make you write all day and night. At least this time she said she would pay you to write. LOL!!! This was another exciting chapter and even I don’t know what is going to happen next. Come to think of it Ally–Why haven’t you told me? I thought best friends were suppose to share things. Come on just a little preview–pretty please!!
YOU SOOO CANNOT DO THIS TO US…..YOU HAVE TO POST SOON….LIKE REALLY FREAKIN SOON..ITS KILLIN ME…….
Nooooooo.. NOT AGAIN!!! Don’t let Tina shut down again.. they have to work it out together. Wow.. Ally, you are a brilliant writer, more please!
oh the drama! Great chapter, I love your attention to detail, and how amazing you paint your unpredictable story. Thanks for sharing.
Ok…this is friggin great. I hope your next chapter comes REALLY SOON. “Lord love a duck” is right…can’t even begin to imagine what will happen when Tina wakes from the fainting and can’t wait.
Oh god, Tina has just had her fucking world turned upside down, side ways or any other way that it could be turned. I don’t think that Bette will ever stop loving her and would move heaven and earth for her. What I am afraid of is Tina running as fast as she can right into her own head or world. She is going to be dying all over again and this time she may not survive. I hope with all of my heart and soul that they can and are willing to put their love back together.
Fainting is certainly a good way to keep TK from running!
oh crap…now everything is out in the open..i hope tina won’t run away
Yay I was able to catch up! Gotta love glitches that wipe out an entire page. At least Bette told Tina what was going on even if though it means more drama will most likely surround them.
Please, please, please post soon!!!
Yay the comment pop up works!!! Ally – wow! will T see the letter – it bears out her version of events – shes pragmatic – she can get over this. Bette needs to stop grieving as well.Please post another chapter soon
OMG, please post the next chapter soon! Glad that Bette told Tina. It’s not healthy to keep secrets like this bottled up. It would eat her up inside. Some times things just have to get worse before taking a turn for the better. Please, please, please post again soon.
please ally.. please.. post again soon.. don’t leave us hanging.. please.. great chapter.. great writer..
Holy Crap! Another excellent chapter from The Drama Mama. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Holy freaking cow this is bad and damn drama coming. Hope They will talk and work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I never taught someone could….I’m speachless.
Can’t think straight! (Love the double meaning!) Fantastic chapter but must you leave us in suspense?? Any chance of another chapter before bed? If I promise to be a good girl and do all my work and be nice to my housemates? Pretty please?
Drama Queens!!!
oh man…i know great writers keep their readers wanting more…but come on…we’re dying here! Please don’t let us wait too long…pretty please…with a cherry on top:)
OMG!! That was sensational! Ally, u cannot leave us like this. Pls pls post sooon!