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Damaged Ch. 131
Carmen pulled up to the home that she shared with Jenny and Shane. She sighed heavily and got out of her car. She walked up to the door and walked in. she saw Jenny and Elle watching TV. She smiled softly and waved. She walked past them and walked to the bedroom. Jenny got up from the couch and followed Carmen. She knocked on the door and walked in. she saw Carmen sitting on the bed with her records in half. Carmen looked up at Jenny with tears in her eyes.
“I’m just grabbing some things, and I’m leaving.” Carmen got off the bed and grabbed her things from the debris off the floor. Jenny stood against the door and crossed her arms.
“I don’t know what happened between the two of you, but I love you both, and I hope that things between you two becomes better. I hate to see you two heart-broken and depressed because it hurts me also. I hope that you both find it in your heart to forgive each other.” Carmen dropped her head and sighed.
“I don’t know Jenny, I’ve been through so much. I don’t think I can take it anymore with her, but I miss her.” Carmen picked up a picture frame and threw it. “It so fuckin’ confusing! I don’t know what to feel anymore! I love her,” She lowered her voice. “But I can’t do this with her anymore.” She packed her things in the duffel bag she brought with her. Jenny walked up to her and touched her shoulder.
“I know what you’re going through, but you either let go or you fight for what you love.” Carmen looked at Jenny and smiled. She wiped the tears that where falling down her cheeks.
“Thanks Jenny,” Jenny smiled and nodded.
“You call me if you need anything, I don’t want you to become a stranger. I like to have you around. You’re a friend, and I don’t want to lose that.” Carmen wrapped her arms around Jenny and gave her a hug.
“I’ll call you, and I’m glad to have you as a friend Jenny. Thank you.” She pulled away and sighed. “I better get out of here before Shane shows up.” She grabbed her bag and walked out of the room. Jenny came out behind her and closed the door. Carmen said goodbye to Elle and walked out the door. She walked over to her car and threw her bag inside. She walked over to the driver’s side and got in. Shane was pulling into the drive way as Carmen got into her car. Shane got out of the Jeep and started to walk over to the car. Carmen pulled away from the house and sped down the street. Shane sighed and watched Carmen’s car disappear down the street. She walked up to the house and walked in. she looked up at Jenny and Elle.
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I’m adding a comment because I adore Bette & Helena together more than I ever enjoyed Bette & Tina together. If BeLena hadn’t been part of the description, I would have skipped on past it. I’ve had my fill of B&T.
I’m still loving this, I’m glad that Alice isn’t freaking out because of Lara, I think she’s a bigger person now. I think Dana needs to talk to Alice more before making semi-decisions on their wedding, but it’s awesome. Blimey and how cool is that that Kit is going out on a date w/a fan, unheard of…but that’s Kit. Well, can’t wait to read the next post, Awesome Akira…Cheers mate!
Hey ACB, I am much honored and humbled by your kind comments. Now on to your wonderful writing; You have created and embodied all of these familiar characters with fresh ideas and relationships. It is good to see that Alice is overcoming her fears and being open with Dana with respect to Lara. Best idea is to keep your friends close and your enemies closer. Shane is really messed up and needs to hit rock bottom before she can trust anyone again and Cherie has never been one to wait around for long. Tears ahead I’m sure. Carmen is suffering right now but needs to break with Shane before they can rebuild their friendship prior to embarking on anything more romantic. Kit is playing with fire now and better watch out or she will get burnt. Bette and Helena are cruising along butI am sure this relationship will have its up and down soon as life interfers. Tina needs to find herself first before setting sail on another union. Maybe Jordana will be the support system to assist Tina on this journey. Two broken hearts can sympathize and repair one another. Thank you so much for your productivity and perfect prose. Your Loyal Fan.
Love Bette/Helena. Will always love B&T, but if they can’t be together the B&H is hot. Why do I get the feeling, that this Katherine is reallys someone else. Wasn’t that they’re mothers name?
shane and Cherie….I don´t know…for sex okay but a relationship?? that´s wired. I just want her together with carmen again, I think.But let´s see what happen. Thanks for this fast update!