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The L Wing – chp 73
THE L WING – Chapter 73
She laughs and kisses me again – I hold her as we kiss – wanting more of her. I know this is wrong time and wrong place but it is good to kiss her. And when I close my eyes all I see is my blonde love- not Emily.
Narration of Bette Porter
We talk for another half an hour or so until I get so tired that I can barely keep my eyes open. Tina pulls my body against hers and I drift off to sleep When I wake up she is sitting up with her laptop on a pillow in front of her and she is looking at the screen
“Hey you – you are supposed to be resting – what the hell are you doing ? “
She turns the screen for me to see it – she is playing Chuzzle.
“Oh annihilating fluffy objects now ? “
“Yeah – stimulating eh ? “
“Yes – how are you feeling honey ? “
“Not that bad – I’ve been lying awake watching you sleep and thinking“
“And what have you come up with ? “
“That I love my partner so much – that so far everything has been about me. Its time to devote all my time and attention to you. You need a lot of loving Bette and I intended to be the person to give you that amount of loving. I love you so much babe”
“You have had a hard time “.
“And so have you – I want to stop thinking about myself all the time – so lets enjoy ourselves – as you said earlier on we cannot keep going over and over things. Lets talk about it at set times and lets have some fun. And we’ll start by having a bloody great party tomorrow “
I laugh “ You seem so much happier honey “
“I have a lot on my mind but for now we need to have some light time and a party is such a great thing. And I have been adding to the invitation list – I hope you don’t mind “
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(38 votes, average: 4.45 out of 5)
I loved it. It was poetic. ;)
That was Great ….two parts had me in fits of laughter….Tina : “I am going to cook you some pies “Bette : “Oh Tina “LMAOTina :“You stopped shaving “Bette :“Yes – I just stopped – I’ve had other things on my mind “She looks sadThat was great……
This was an awesome chapter. I don’t think it was weird at all. I love this story. Can’t wait for more!!
Bette’s having visions of the dead? Wasn’t expecting anything quite like that, Ally.
What was not to like, Love love this story, please please post the L wing soon
Not weird at all , just great!
Excellent chapter. Perfect.
I have to agree: not weird at all. Really well done… now, it will be weird if emily becomes a regular character who talks to b, but it worked very well for this scene! plz post something of either story soon! each time I read a new chapter from either story, I’m convinced that one is my favorite!!! so good!
Absolutely PERFECT!!!!!
that was a good way to let emily rest… love this story… please continue
Nothing weird here. It’s absolutely beautiful as always. And it doesn’t hurt to have a little poetry in this crazy world. So, please, go on, you’re doing a great job.
Ally, I just can’t stop saying it, I love you!
Great ending to this chapter – you are an inspired writer and I’m so happy to be reading both of your stories.
You are not weird – you’re brilliant. I love your story and your writing. Please please continue.
Charmed got this one totally correct..poetic…loved it. So you can be weird anytime you want.
VERY nice and a GREAT was for Bette to let go and move foward. All she has to do now is to be clean shaven for dinner. I am SURE that Tina will be appreciative. :o)
what were you getting sensitive about – you’re not wierd and niether was the story
Ally, I don’t find it weird… at all! It’s great actually. Is that mean I’m weird too?! oh man… actually I also need to see a therapist. Lol… Thanks for posting, please continue
Great Chapter!!
I thought it was an excellent chapter and I can’t wait for whatever Tina is planning. Glad Bette has finally scattered Emily and even got her blessing (only slightly weird but it worked well actually). I am completely in love with your writing. Hope life is treating you well and not interrupting your writing!
I didn’t think this was weird either. If anything, scattering Emily’s ashes to the wind and rain and river was therapeutic for Bette. She has finally let go of the ghost and nightmares that haunts her. Great chapter. Thanks, Ally.
great…past is in the past, bring on the future
Bette can move on now. Excellent (crap now I sound like Eric lol). Tina is a bad singer? Oh no. I don’t think I could marry a bad singer. I’d flat out tell her, “You suck. Never sing again.”
Something are hard to let go of,Bette,bless just steped from the past into her future. She let Emily go. thanks
This chapter did not have a weird spot in it. In fact it brought closure to one relationship and allowed the other to begin a new. You do not need a therapist. Now, I on the other hand do need one. Great chapter to one hell of a story.
i like it so much! it was’nt weird, and Bette did the correct thing in order to move on!
well ally i don’t think this chapter is weird at all. I think it’s great. Seems like Bette will finally be able to move past the whole Emily thing and that means that her an Tina will finally be able to reconnect physically. Keep the chapters coming….pretty please!
It wasn’t weird this one, only a little diffirent from what you normally post….but I liked it. Maybe a little morbid Bette has kept the ashes for 7 years, but it was a good way to close that chapter in the Presidents life. I hope Bette meant that Tina was cute as a singer and not bad!!! Please dont let us wait that long again for more L Wing…..
not weird in the least! i thought bette was going to cheat on tina with alice or shane was going to shoot someone! classic chapter from the Drama Mama.
Yay! I’ve been waiting for this update…and it was great as usual, please update soon.
Great update Ally. Not weird at all ^_^ Just perfect.
i think everytime you post a chapter of this great story i tend to always say this.. please post again soon.. great writer..:)
A litte scared of the scene of emily and glad Bette set her free. Now let them satrt a happy and wonderful life together. Ok post soon please, thanks!
How beautiful and so spiritual, please continue.
WOW!!! That was just Great. Thank you