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More Than a Feeling
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The bright noonday sunlight streamed through the Venetian blinds, creating lines of light on Bette’s face, shining directly on her eyes. She stirred, feeling a weight on her left arm. What is that? She panicked, cracking one of her tired eyes open. The first thing she saw was the upper half of Tina’s face, and felt her exhale on her chest. Suddenly, it all came back to her. They were making out on the bed, Tina told Bette she loved her, and they fell asleep. Bette slowly opened her other eye, smiling as she watched Tina sleep. She told me she loved me…
She heard the crunch of the gravel in Alice’s driveway, some doors open and close, and some muffled talking. Trying to slip her now dead arm from beneath Tina, Bette eased slowly away from the slumbering girl, but Tina tightened her grip around Bette’s waist. “Where you going?” She mumbled, still half asleep.
“Morning beautiful.” Bette kissed Tina’s lips softly and Tina slowly opened her eyes.
“Morning.” Tina smiled, kissing Bette back. “Dragon breath.”
Bette gasped playfully, covering her mouth with her free hand. “I do not have dragon breath.”
“Do too.”
“Yeah well, yours doesn’t smell too great either.” Bette planted a soft kiss on Tina’s mouth. “But I’ll kiss you anyway.”
Tina closed her eyes and buried her head in Bette’s shoulder, groaning. “What time is it?”
“I have no idea, but it’s gotta be at least noon.”
“Fantastic.” Tina muffled, shifting herself around.
“Uh Tee?” Bette winced. “I can’t feel my arm.”
“Huh?” Tina looked at Bette, confused, and then realized the thing in her side was Bette’s arm. “Oh, shit. Sorry.” She rolled off Bette’s arm, rubbing her dented side before rubbing Bette’s arm. “Can you feel anything yet?”
As much as Bette wanted to, she couldn’t feel Tina’s touch. Maybe it was for the best, since a second later, Alice burst into the bedroom. “Oh lovebirds! Wakie wakie!”
Both Bette and Tina rolled their eyes. “How is it you manage to burst in at the most inappropriate times every time?” Bette asked, trying to bend her uncooperative arm.
Alice shrugged. “It’s a gift.” She went over to the window and pulled the blinds open, intent on annoying the girls further, but looked down at the commotion in her driveway. Suddenly, she let out such a scream, both Bette and Tina jumped.
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YAYYYYYYYYYYY *happy dance* brb with a real comment. Oh and yay you’re feeling better! =D
MANDA!!! soooo glad your back and feeling better. And finally your back with another chappy! i was going through withdraw. But i must say this one was nice and longgggggg and awesome. I’m loving T and B more and more. They are so damn cute. I love this story beyond wordssss…keep it up! and post soon, i can’t wait to see what will happen with shane and carmen and the rest of the gang (btw you write each character perfectly)
My Tibette heart is smiling. It loves this story because Bette and Tina are actually together. I hope that both are able to come to terms with their relationship. Coming out is fine unless it damages your relationship with your girlfriend. Can’t wait for the next post.
Amazing, so great and sweet. Nice of you to give us such a long chapter, but be careful I could get used to it LOL. I’m glad you’re feeling better, post as soon as possible, I’m definitely waiting :o))
welcome back! is glad to know you feel better! thanks for this incredible, funny and long chapter! Alice was so lucky cuase somebody else clean the mess! i hope you will feel better and better! take care
back with a vengeance manda!!
I love your story possibly an unhealthy amount and am very glad to see you back! Hope you heal quickly!
i love this… and i don’t blame bette for waking up nadia that way either… i hope tina’s mom is ok with them… i have a feeling she will be… and i think sam knows… so i don’t see a problem there either… can’t wait for an update… and so glad your feeling better… please continue… later babe
Manda, I’m only on page 4 but I had to stop reading to tell you that I’m dying of laughter. Because I work for an entertainment company, nobody cares that I’m laughing like an ass. If I was a mortician, we might have a problem. Okay, I’m going to finish reading and then I’ll be back to give you props.
Lovelovelove this story, fellow FFA member! Glad your hand is getting better!!!!!
Didn’t care that NY commodities prices went down today, I couldn’t help smiling while I was reading your story. One of the sweetest chapters ever. PS: Glad you feel better
Well Manda, now that I’ve read all nine pages I realize that I have to adjust the scale that I use to measure the exact level of Kick-Ass that a story meets. This chapter definitely came in at Kick-Ass Level 100…which is amazing since there were only 10 levels previously. Manda for President…or in my case, Prime Minister. Either way, a fanfic award should come with your Presidency. With respect to the party, the came, they saw, they conquered. Now onward and upward for all of the ladies. You hear that Ilene? Not spiralling beyond the abyss of hell that you took us to in S3. ANYWAY, back to work! Glad to hear that you’re feeling better Manda and a big thank you for even writing this story in the first place.
Glad you’re back. Stitches? Yikes.
Came across this story recently and read it at one stretch! ^_^ Great story Manda, love it.
It’s a damn shame that not everyone can have cool parents. I stayed up late to read this chapter. If I doze off at work, it’s your fault because I just can’t say no. lol I really don’t blame Bette for waking up Nadia the way she did. LMAO Everyone is so cute that I can’t get over it. Thanks for the double long chapter. I know you had enough time to give us a double shot since you weren’t able to post sooner. *sends out good vibes to your hand*
wonderful, i loved it…carmen is one tough cookie but shane will conquer her…and alice is a really good person…and of course, B&T, so sweet together…wonderful chapter, thanks
hurraaayyy thanks so much for having lots and lots of b/t affection in this chapter. glad you’re feeling better.
Good chatper and amazing!
That was awesome. Glad you are feeling better.