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More Than a Feeling
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Bette flinched and closed her eyes. “Fuck,” she muttered under her breath as she released the door handle and turned.
Alice stood there with one hand on her hip, her smile wide and mocking. “Aww, don’t worry Porter, I don’t have dibs on the room or anything. Feel free to use it whenever you like.” She walked closer to Bette, trying to peek over her shoulder into the room. “So,” she whispered devilishly, “you and Tina get in a little pre-homeroom action? I’m impressed.”
Bette smiled. “What are you talking about? I like to bang erasers for fun, like someone else I know.”
“Cute.” Alice sneered and then realized all of the eraser dust on Bette’s hair and shirt. “Whoa Porter, what’s all this? Get a little rough in there?” She swiped some chalk dust from Bette’s shoulder.
Bette merely rolled her eyes and shook her head. A second later, the door opened again and Tina emerged, completely unaware of what was happening outside. She nearly collided with Bette, flinching in surprise. “Oh Jesus!” She whispered, closing the door and sidestepping until she was a good two feet from both Bette and Alice.
“Ooh, busted!” Alice exclaimed, smiling victoriously.
Tina blushed, suddenly shy. She looked down at her converse sneakers, biting her lip. “Hi Alice.” She said flatly, looking back up at the ever-grinning blonde.
Alice looked around, making sure no one was there. “Y’all are lucky I found you and not someone else. Rule number one Porter: never turn your back on the hallway, no matter how pretty the chick is inside.”
“Well, I couldn’t help it.” Bette looked at Tina, who blushed further.
“Rule number two: second party has to wait at least five minutes before even attempting an exit. Five minutes T.K. You waited about two and a half.”
“Okay…” Tina said.
Alice shook a finger at them. “Most importantly, rule number three: ALWAYS get rid of the evidence.” She swiped at Bette’s shoulder, rubbing the white chalk dust between her middle finger, index finger and thumb.
“Actually Al, that’s what I was going to do before you stopped me.” Bette said. Then, the late bell rang. “And now we’re all late.”
“Not me, I’m excused.” Alice smirked, waving her pass in Bette and Tina’s faces. “You guys better get a move on before hall sweeps catch ya! Later!” Alice walked away, laughing.
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Silent reader, who decided to come out. I have to say that I am enjoying this story very much and I will continue to read as long as you are wrting. So if it takes another 50 chapters to get what you are trying to convery then by all means do so. Can we have more Sharmen!
*singing* oooh it only gets better.. OOhoo Yeah it only gets better.. This story just gets better…
Alice and her fuckhead friends, Lara might be better for Sana than Alice. Bette and Tina forever. thanks
Alice has just invited trouble by forgetting about Dana. Now she has opened the door and allowed Lara to come in. I am glad the Bette was able to hold her temper. If it had been me, I am not sure that I would have been able to control my anger. People are so cruel at times.
How can Alice forgot? Does it means she doesn’t care about Dana at all.. well, because of those fuckhead friends and she’s maybe losing Dana… big chance. Love your story, please continue
Bette and Tina are so cute and sweet, love them. Alice is fuck up big time and gonna lose Dana if she be with those fuckhead and forget about Dana. OK post soon please, thanks!
p, i knew it, flakey Alice; but never mind Lara to the rescue; and what about Bette’s note and the ‘dating’ quip, whose gonna find it???
oh-oh…trouble in danish paradise…i’m sure glad B&T are still doing good and i don’t want to see any trouble for them
Oh my, Alice fucked up badly!! If she doesn’t hurry up, her place will be taken by Lara. Sounds like drama is coming up. And where is Bette going with Tina? These girls are so sweet – I think they’ll probably be too busy eat their sandwiches…Thanks for a great update.
LOL Fuckheads! Wow another word I thought only I used. B&T are still so cute, and the note cracked me up. OOPS I need to wrap this up or I’ll be late for work. Weeee!
Woooooooo How could Alice do that to Dana o.O MG! She needs summ asswooping I tell you! Hope to read another chappy soon!
Alice is the fuckhead, she doesn’t deserve Dana who is better of with Lara. Dana and Lara is just so cute together. Where is Bette taking Tina – the beach maybe?? More about B&T if you ask me :o)) Post soon please
Oops NYBOT is jumping but I don’t care becuase Bette and Tina are sooo cute, just love them but I’m kinda dissapointed of Alice! Great update!
The amount of sadness that I feel as I approach the last page of any of your chapters, simply put, cannot be normal *sigh* and the only prescription…is more cowbell! If you get that Saturday Night Live reference, multiple hi-5’s Manda! Anyway, the encounter between Alice and Dana…probably not going to be a Hallmark moment. Looking forward to Tina cheering Bette up with soothing, um, words. Yeah, that’s it, words. Fantastic chapter Manda
Manda, as always fantastic chappy!!..i caught myself reading each word per minute just to make it last. lol. Alice made the biggest mistake of her life right there, because Dana is now going to want to be with someone who cares…THEREFORE LARA. I can’t wait to see what Bette has in store for Tina. PLEASE POST SOON MANDA..
Alice just killed me. That was so wrong. I feel drama ahead.
Another wonderful update. Thanks Manda. So happy to see that B&T are going strong!
Hey Manda I just found your story a few days ago and boy am I glad I did :-) This i a fantastic story… I am really looking forward to reading many more chapters so please continue.
well i think dana should get to know lara better and tell alice to go and play with those fuckheads friends of hers… loving this story… so is bette taking tina somewhere romantic… i bet she is… bring it on…
Thanks for the update Manda, really loved it.