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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT29
I thought we could spend the evening together… PT29
Previously…
Tina brought her lips to the warm flesh of Bette’s shoulder, her voice quietly uttering her previous thoughts, "we made it baby, we got through it…"
"Mmmm" came the muffled reply.
Tina pulled their bodies closer, her lips continuing to graze the glowing body in front of her as her own body began the familiar movements behind. The sensations of being deeply in love overtaking her, her mind had been busy, now it was the turn of her body to confirm just how much she was in love.
"Do you know how much I love you baby…?" Tina whispered into the ear of the stirring form in front of her.
"To the moon and back…?" came the mumble.
"Oh no baby, not even close…"
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"Tell me T, if I’m not even close, tell me…?"
Tina’s mind wandered to how she could possibly show Bette how much she loved her, how could she possibly tell her how much she loved her?
"I… can’t…", Tina quietly said, her voice cracking with emotion.
"Huh…?" Bette voiced cleared slightly, hearing something in Tina’s voice that alerted her to ‘something’.
"I can’t actually tell you…?"
Bette’s eyes opened fully, rousing herself from the deep restful sleep, she maneuvered herself around to face Tina looking into the face of the woman who had gone from stroking her in her slumber to now being emotional, when the only words being uttered were about how much Tina loved her.
Bette’s sleepy mind couldn’t yet understand where the sudden turn of emotions had occurred.
"T, honey… what’s up?" Bette brought her hand to caress the smooth cheek in front of her, the hazel eyes, full of unshed tears, looking downward.
"It’s nothing…" Tina quietly spoke without making eye contact.
Bette brought her hand to Tina’s chin, their heads both resting on the cream linen pillows, their bodies still showing signs of red rose petals, intermittently stuck to their smooth glowing skin. Bette’s fingers gently raised Tina’s face, allowing their eyes to meet.
"T…" Bette’s eyes were gentle, their silent message telling Tina she was listening, listening to whatever ‘its nothing’ meant.
Tina gave a little smile; she took a deep breath before speaking, "have you…ever felt like…" she looked downward again, not knowing how to put into words her thoughts from only moments before.
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Mental note: make sure your eyes don’t glaze over in your 2:30 pm meeting because you’re thinking about this chapter. Oh, to be that mirror on the ceiling in their room.
Jo, by the words you wrote in this chapter you have just shown us the true meaning of making love. Just truly beautiful—mind, body, and souls connecting perfectly together. You are a brilliant writer and a wonderful friend. Thank you.
Hey…Mushy,warm,….god i could go on….What a really beautiful chapter to read after a hard day,Always a complete pleasure to read your story,Thankyou.
i really really loved this chapter…so much hope and love…perfect
That was like a great pastry, Jo, sweet and hot. I just want to say I like it when they sashay. I know they’ve done it in the past, and I certainly hope they will again.
WOW!!!!WOW!!!!!WOW!!!!!! Speachless
Mushy,warm. Wouldn’t if be lovely if we could start, end , and even in between each day that way. Why do I feel so calm after reading this, well among other things, and like all I want to do is cuddle and just relax. Awesome, just awesome.
Breathtaking!!!! thank you
Jobadge that was very beautiful. Thanks.
always one…that was perfect!
Once again, you have proven why you won an award. How do you manage to make another spectacular chapter each and every time?!?! Post soon!
I am breathless, speechless and overwhelmed by your words. Sometimes love can not be put into words. The uttered word can not always encompass the true meaning of love. With your words you draw a visual picture that is the embodiment of love.
Love this story! This is the type of short chapter I can deal with!
Simply beautiful. You gave us the opportunity to be voyeurs of the most intimate moments of this loving couple. This is why Bette and Tina will always be soulmates. No Other Love. Together Forever.
Brilliant! Thanks Jo :-)
Damn that was awesome and beautiful and love them. OK let see whats next, thanks!
That was beautiful. Thanks.
Wow…that was awesome. I would rather have short chapters like that anyday than to have to wait. Thanks for the update. Can’t wait for more.
I didn’t read this last night for a reason that you know about J and now that i have i am in a heap on the floor. you are just truly amazing – thank you for sharing your talent with us and reminding everyone why its B/T for so many of us. brilliant – just brilliant
OMG….thanks mate :o))
i jus had a warm shower and sat down for readin this story without watchin the rating……now i need a cold one :) tht was sucha sweet hot intimate mushy lovin
please don’t ever stop this story…we need this, I need this, it’s so peaceful, loving and what we all seek in life…ahhhhh
We all want a love and an intensity like that… loved this ‘short’ chapter.
I just LOVE reading this story!
What can i say about this one, i even stopped breathing sometimes. Jobadge you’re a masterpiece.
Oh wow that was so beautiful. This is such a wonderful series. One I love pulling up when things look bleak. You have such a gently loving feel here it’s infectious. Thanks Jo