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Like a Fairytale, chpt 16
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Once upon a time on ‘Like A Fairytale’:
Tina was incredibly nervous as she awaited Bette’s mother… And when she heard the door and turned around she felt a sharp sting of hurt when she saw those familiair eyes… Bette’s eyes… in the womans face…
Maxime also had troubles holding in the tears, seeing the best friend of her daughter she missed so intensly…
But as they stood there they recognized in eachothers eyes their own hurt, and realized that they had found the only other person that missed Bette with an equal amount of intensity as they did theirselfs…
The princess began to sob as she threw herself in Maxime’s waiting arms. Finally receiving the warmth and comfort of a motherly embrace she needed so desperatly… No word was uttered, only tears were shed for the loss of the one they both loved so much…
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Chapter 16
Bette has told us everything aunt September
Shane looked worried into the mirror she was holding, seeing the grey streaks in the honeycolored curls of her only remaining familymember… Her mother, Emerald, had married a common man and was abandonned by him once he had found out she was a woman of magic… Shane had been 6 years old at the time and had seen her mother faint away in misery… Emerald had died not long after her husband had left her, and Shane, probably due to her own powers, had found the mirror and her aunt September, who had lead her to the cabin in which she had lived alone untill Alice had joined her… The way her magical aunt looked now was the cause of Shane’s worry… She recalled how her mother had looked just as old and exhausted
That’s good Shane… That’s good…
So we’re going to figure out a plan on how to get her there before the princess will turn 16…
September tried to smile reassuringly, she had seen the worry in her nieces eyes and she wish she could take them away… But she knew her powers were not even nearly as strong as they once were… the mirror held a magic in itself and so the magical female could stay in contact with her niece without exhausing herself
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2nd!!!! Another great chapter.. I didn’t need the tissues for this one I’ll hang onto the B+T =)
Damn talk about a tease. LOL Nah it’s ok I know you’re busy. You think the FFA should send out some associates to “take care” of that problem? xD This journey should be pretty funny with Alice and Dana along for the ride. =D
ONCE UPON A TIME Now we will get to THEY LIVED HAPPY EVER AFTER Aunt September will have enough power to get the Four of them To Tina. So glad that Maxine and Tina are together. Life will be easier for both of them until Bette comes to clain her true love. thanks
always a pleasure read your stories! thanks for this i know you are so bussy! i thing they will have a difficult times but they are so smart just i hope they arrive in time! take care
Noooo.. don’t let September faded away. It’s a fairytale, no one dies… or fade away! LOL… I want more! please, pretty. I know I shouldn’t push my luck,and I know you are busy…but you can’t blame a girl for trying. lol.. thanks for posting :)
Please don’t let Aunt September leave. She is suppose to come and help me once Bette and Tina were together. That is not fair. Shane, Alice, Dana and Bette traveling cross country now that will be a hoot. Can’t wait to see what kind of trouble that they will get themselves into. Hold on Tina, the army is on it’s way to take you away from your wicked mother.
well then they should leave tonight… get them there… bette has to save tina… love this story… please continue
Oh that’s so sad, Aunt Sept. isn’t doing too good. I hope she hangs in there, I do believe in fairytales…I don’t think that Shane and Alice& Dana will let Bette and Tina down. I know they won’t. **crossing fingers** for them. Cheers mate.
God, you made me blush with your so sweet words ! I’m truly touched, thank you – but the honour is mine, you know. Oh, don’t worry : even if I’m often late in my comments (put the blame on usual troubles of mine), I will never stop to be your faithful reader. Simply because your stories touch my heart, stroke my hopeless romantic soul and, yes, also very often fan burning embers of memories… (but you already know what your other story – BOAF – means to me). *** This chapter gives me the ideal opportunity to express you how I like the way you gave a very special part for Shane in this so charming – but moving – fairytale of yours. For me, there was always something especially touching in Shane’s character : her hidden scars, this huge vulnerability behind her deceptive coolness (something that relates her a lot with Bette, on this particular point), her deepness in the way she so obviously prefers silent thoughts and feelings to spoken words – no wonder she’s such a great analyser of human nature… So one of my absolute favorite scenes on the show, of course, is her so touching reaction in front of Bette and Tina’s tender happiness, at the end of the pilot : it expressed so well Shane’s deep need of believing and hope about true love. That’s why I’m delighted to see her having such a special part in your tale, sharing magical powers with her aunt September and receiving the essential mission to lead the gang in the long and hard journey they’ll have to do for getting Bette and her beloved princess together. *** God, you worry me now about this poor exhausted September ! But of course fairytales must always be pretty dramatic… and I wonder which pitfalls you’ll concoct to us for the coming chapters ! (*sigh*) Well, like Shane you’ll have to “follow your intuition…” ! I’m so looking forward to your next updates… ^_^
Good chapter. Now its time to get ready and get them back together and get them there befor its too late. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
I hope they won’t be too late for T&B’s sake as well as Septembers.
Great as usual…and no, my knee isn´t better..so…we´ll see, the doktor talking about a mirror opeation…. enough about me… Looking forward for your next postes…they are just great…
1st!!!!!!!! brb
Of course you are romantic! this story confirms it. So the gang is ready for the adventure I pressume, so cool! I can’t wait to see the pricess being resucued by her “princess charming”
Ahw, so lovely, this is getting better and better. Laat Shane voortmaken aub ik wil niet dat ze te laat komt, mooi verhaal ik hou ervan.