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What TIme Reveals Part 15
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“What ‘all these people’, Bette? It will be me and Frank, a camera man, and you teaching. Helena gave me the impression that you were in favor of the documentary.” Tina snapped, Angelica jumped at Tina’s harsh voice and Bette immediately soothed her back down. Bill and Sarah looked a bit surprise at how quickly Tina snapped at Bette. Things were beginning to make sense as the time went on.
Bette closed her eyes, as she continued to rub Angel’s back. She as fighting the urge to lash back at Tina but saw Angel’s quick reaction to it and thought better of it. It was at this time that the waitress came and took their order.
“Peggy and Helena will also be joining us at the center, so that’s two more extra people. It’s not like these kids know me well or even trust me. I realize that many might recognize you since you did work with them, but I honestly don’t know. Do you think they’ll be intimidated by several strangers and a camera man?” Bette calmly asked. Again both Bill and Sarah saw how Bette had tried to clam the situation and make an honest inquiry.
“I don’t know Bette.” Tina replied in a harsh voice that wasn’t loud so not to disrupt her napping daughter. “I hope some would recognized me, I couldn’t very well continue to work there and work at the studio could I? Or would you have preferred…”
“I think Bette might be just trying to see if maybe it might be a better idea for her to form some kind of bond with the kids before introducing a bunch of people especially with cameras. Isn’t there anyway you could just observe and then go back to film later?” Bill tried to compromise hoping to diffuse the suddenly volatile situation. Bette stared at Tina. ‘Oh yes, here she was the Tina I had become accustom to over the past year.’ Bette thought to herself. She clenched her jaw several times before trying to calmly reply to Bill’s statement.
“Bill that is an excellent idea. I think maybe the camera could be brought in, but give the kids a chance to get use to me before we introduce the camera to them.” Bette responded to Bill’s statement ignoring Tina’s accusation. Sarah was staring at her daughter trying to communicate with her silently to stop this behavior. She was glad Bette wasn’t taking the bait. Tina on the other hand felt her anger grow within her. She hadn’t meant to lash out at Bette and she wasn’t trying to accuse Bette of anything but that was exactly how it came out of her mouth. ‘What is the matter with me?’
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I get such a thrill out of saying that I am NOT a Bette & Tina fan. Bette & Tina together bought nothing substantial to their relationship. Neither one of them had been happy together for a very long time – before the affair – hell, before the baby. I’ve said this on numerous occasions; the only thing that made Bette & Tina spark was the sex they had. Other than that, a firecracker had more spark than they did. ………. Some of you are clamoring for Bette & Tina to be together in this story. Allow me to say that the ONLY reason I began to read this story is because it was about Bette & HELENA! From the gist of this chapter, I get the impression that the author strayed from the original intent and needed to find a way to keep the TiBetters happy.
I don’t hate Tina nor feel sorry for her. What I do feel is pissed the hell off by a few of her unspoken revelations. Here she is, jealous of her daughter because Angie is now (according to Tina) getting the love that Bette would have had for her. I think that is the most selfish statement one person can VERBALIZE or VISUALIZE. ………. Parents have a different type of love for their children, and if Tina hasn’t of turned her back on Bette, maybe she would STILL be getting the love Bette had for her. What made Tina so damned sick was her gut instinct FINALLY telling her that not only was Bette in the arms of another, but that other is Helena, and Bette will NEVER be back in hers…
I hope they NEVER get back together; and if it should happen in this story, I’ll gladly stop reading it because I am no longer interested in reading anything that has these two involved with each other outside of a relationship concerning their daughter. ………. Tina moved on, why can’t Bette do so? Who the hell needs to keep being punished for a mistake? Tina, it’s about time you seriously get over yourself. Tina didn’t want anything to do with Bette UNTIL Bette found happiness elsewhere. Now she’s puking her guts up. Give me a phukin’ break!!!………………..BTW, I understand that a few lines of the previous chapter may be necessary, but why so much. I feel like I was reading the entire last page of the previous chapter & without it, this chapter would have been one page.
dang its about time though cuz i mean dang how long has it been since they have been without each other and tina just realizes what she lost?
WOw there are a lot of emotions running wild here. I wanted to address some things. I don’t feel that I’m wavering in regards to the “pressure” for a TiBette. I want to show the turmoil going on with Tina, cause I think that was what IC was trying to do, just that she didn’t do it ver successfully. I also want to address the whole jealousy issue. Yes, the love that one gives a child is completely different, but we are talking about a woman who has never dealt with the fact that the woman she change everything around for had an affair. Tina is feeling a lot o fthings right now, and she can’t separate them from the other. SOme feel sorry for others don’t. Good! Because that is what good storytelling is all about. Some will be happy with this tale, others not so much. I hoping for a much healthy people by the end of the story! SnQQpy, just wanted to let you. THe reason I posted so much from the last chapter is becasue I wanted someone to be able to pick up the keys points again without having to re-read all the chapters. Sorry if that annoyed people. But I know I read a ton of fics here day in and day out and I always appreciate the a syp of what happened prior. Because I have been writing a Bette and Helena chapter than a Tina chapter there was a little more to it than normal. I will of course address everyone’s comments in my next update! Thanks all for being so passionate!!
pandamel – I really liked this chapter and how Tina was floating around in her thougths and that she is still so connected to Bette that she could feel the new relationship. I personally don’t care for the Bette Helena match – I just don’t think Bette would ever go there – too much nastiness from Helena and I don’t personally feel the chemistry but i do think it will be good for Tina to see that you can’t push someone so far away and still expect them to wait for you. Now let’s see where you take them next. thanks for your passion for this story as you said IC never really made Tina’s motivation and feelings clear – you did a great job with that in this chapter.
very very very sad because it was very very VERY well-written..thanks Pands!
Bette and Helena are not in love. We know this from reading the story – they may care somewhat about each other, and they can have great sex, but that is not love. We will never understand why Tina has done the things she has done; but we know that Bette and Tina’s problems started when Bette screwed around – who knows what that would do to Tina’s mind. I know that at the time that Bette slept with Candace, Tina’s mind was definately not on the path of leaving Bette for a man; especially knowing now that on the night of Provocations she was already pregnant, hoping to start a faimly with Bette. Maybe Tina had to go through what she has, just to get her head wrapped around everything. And although Bette and Helena may be “more” than what Bette and Candace were, that’s not saying much. I like this story, but it has that deja’vu feeling to me. I particularly liked the chapter where the interactions between Bette and Peggy left Helena speechless. I can’t help feeling that Helena is still trying to hurt Bette somehow, just because of the closeness that Bette has with Peggy…hmmmmm…or maybe Helena’s ultimate agenda is to hurt Tina now? I do know that Peggy named her daughter correctly = HELena. What a flip of the coin with B&T’s daughter being named ANGELica! IC pulled that one out of her butt, didn’t she? Well she has pulled a lot of things from there! I just keep hoping she will pull something from her heart instead!
Brilliant chapter Pands, fantastic piece of writing! I have to agree with some of the others though, i just don’t feel any sympathy for her, people keep referring back to what Bette did to tina, but over these two past seasons tina has treated Bette absolutely terribly and i do honestly believe that the problems betwwen the two were evident long before Bette cheated, not to say im condoning what she did because im not. Noone deserves to be treated the way Bette has been by tina. the woman needs some serious help, she should leave Bette alone and allow her to find some happines, while she goes and gets the help she needs. Just amazing Pands, really looking forward to the next. Bette and Helena, forever and ever. ;)
That’s sad. Too bad for Tina. Good Job.
Boy P look what your writing has done you go girl .What emotions .you know your a good writer now .Amazing just f##king amazing in the words of 1 Bette Porter.
This chapter was great in a very painful way. I felt for Tina here. I hope you can find a way for all three characters to be happy. I would love a Helena/Bette ending but then Tina would be sad and if you had a Tina/Bette ending Helena would be hurt. I have an idea Helena,Bette and Tina should have three way relationship so everyone can be happy..) Lovely writing and I hope you post more soon.
A TiBetter until they are no more.
My heart is so broken by reading this story I had to make mysife read tell the end .Thank God Tina mom hold her in her arms and some 1 was there with Tina you did give us that P.Somebody was there to console Tina that did make me feel good afther all Kit was there for Bette .This story just made me feel so sad.Tina never came to trems with Bettes cheating and I think it is hitting her now .P your wriring just keeps getting better and better .If a story can move me like this did .you are truly a good writer.But yes I am a TiBetter and it was very sad and made me sad.I GIVE IT 10 STARS
No, please don’t let Tina suffer like this. I dislike her a lot at the moment, but I still can’t bear to see her suffer. I want she, Bette and Angie to be a happy family.
No NO NO I do not feel sorry for Tina. Her problems are entirely of her own making, and she has hurt Bette enough. I love Bette and Helena together as Helena values and cares for Bette. Thre is no way that Tina can ever erase what she has done enough to deserve Bette again ever. Long live Belena!
To feel the pain Tina is feeling now its like have your heart and soul riped from your body. To know you have lost or losing you true love is so painful Hell we are all Bette and Tina fan Getthem back together. thanks
I’m with Seahurst, TiBette all the way!!! Its funny how fans of the show will forgive Bette’s unfaithfullness and taking Tina for granted in season 1, but when tina finally grows a back bone and ultimately screws up herself fans not only don’t forgive her but start to hate her character and only want Bette to be happy, and with someone else…hmmm… I still think Bette and Helena don’t have near the chemistry and love that Tina and Bette have together. There I’ve said my peace. Please keep posting!!
As a Tibetter merely along for a Belena ride, this breaks my heart and had my eyes tearing up. Tina, mistakes or not, has lost the love of her life, who has moved on, and that wrenches me to the core… I’m crushed… but still here… And it’s a testament to great writing.
YES P just make it to wear all of them can be happy.Dose not matter who is with who just let them have peace in the end and work it out so they can all be happy sorry about commenting again
it’s obivious that tina still loves bette but does bette still loves tina? I think (and wish) bette had moved on,… I’m in the middle… I love tibette but belena…
Hi Pands nice work again. Ok your story is very sad for Tina but I really don’t feel any sympathie for her. She got what she deserved for hurting Bette this much and not knowing what she wants axactly. You can let htem have their talk if you want to but let Bette move on and bullt a nice happy life with Helena. They are made for each other.
I haven’t the remotest idea how Tibette can now be brought back together. Wonderful writing, and please work a miracle (although I’d be sad to see your Helena hurt).
I totally loathe Tina, but in this chapter I feel sorry for her… BUT it’s all her fault… Keep going Pandamel, I love your fanfic
I’m with Seahurst, hate to see Tina like this but maybe now she can start on the road to forgiveness and forget. She still loves Bette and she needs to tell her so and just maybe Bette will understand her actions now. Maybe they can get back together. Hope so, for I too am a permanent TiBetter.
wow what a chapter… and sfdf5… you hit the nail on the head… people will forgive bette but not tina… why because she went with a man… last season when she was with hellena… no one was this upset… and i stand tall also… i am a TIBETTER ALL THE WAY… i don’t think bette and hellena would ever get together on the show… they are too much alike… bette would never be with hellena… and i am in great company… seahurst… armama… sfdf5… catcat… bettyhall… NYGayLady… missyang… and many many more… so bette had her fling… get them back together…please continue
Hindsight is 20/20. This was sad, nobody should experience that kind of pain but at the same time tina did place herself in this position. Although not on the Belena ship I do enjoy the ride. To other comments about forgiving Bette and not tina. like bealsfan said, there is host of reasons why this might be and there other factors involved, which have nothing to do with Tina being with men again. Tina is a bi-sexual woman and I have always thought that.
oh holy shit – that was damn powerful stuff and really well written — brilliant babe — really hot stuff
WOW!!! I am glad Tina came around in away. But Bette has moved on and she needs to be happy. If Helena makes her happy so be it. I do not hate Tina, I feel sorry for her. Because maybe now she knows what Bette went through when she went back to men. Thank you for your writting it is so powerful
Wow…its about time Tina realized what she lost. Can’t wait to see how this plays out. Great chapter as always.
Well, you still have your pride, you did give us a BeLena moment, but even you see that TiBette is strong. You din’t have to let Tina figure it out, so now with the guidance of her parents make her work for and really talk to Bette. Let her grow up and be the partner Bette deserves. Your story, but, my two cents! Give Helena another bomb shell to love.
Whether Tina “deserves” to lose Bette, or if she is given a second chance…this chapter broke my heart and brought tears to my eyes. To feel that kind of pain…well, I don’t wish that on anyone. I can’t help it, I still stand tall as a TiBetter! Thanks!
Wow, lots of emotions here pands, this is brillianty written I have to say. I can’t wait to see what you have in store for us next…it just gets better and better every new chap! Thanks!
This has been a wonderful story so far.I never thought that I would actually be ok withBette and Helena being together, but oddly enoughit makes sense in this story. I look forward to the next installment.
u really r a great writer. u made me feel sorry for Tina. but..but still don’t think Bette should be take Tina back..just too late… sometimes…it’s just about timing…thanks for ur writing..