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What Time Reveals Part 16
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Then…
“B.b.b.bBBBBBEEEEETTTTTTEEEEEEE!!!!” Helena screamed as a gush of fluid covered Bette’s face. Helena started thrusting more and Bette continued to suck and caress her spot. Helena shuddered and didn’t stop. She let loose fresh batch of liquid, going limp. Bette’s sucking turned to soft licks and then she stopped. She nuzzled her head on Helena’s stomach that still quivered. She glanced up to look at Helena’s face and saw that her eyes were closed. Bette moved up to Helena’s face. Helena’s eyes fluttered open and a languished smile formed on her face.
“You’re right, love. I am going to have a just got fuck by Bette Porter smile on my face.”
Now…
Helena felt soft, sensual caresses over her shoulders tickle down to her ribs, crossing over her waist, to circle around her stomach, and then back up her other side to her breast. The soft touches traced over breast, circling her nipples. Helena moans as she feels a pair of moist lips on her shoulders. A tongue suddenly licks up from its spot on her shoulders over to neck, drawing figure eights then moving up to ear lobe. Tracing it, circling it, flickering it until finally it’s pulled into a warm wet cavern.
Helena becomes more aware of her surroundings as her lobe is being sucked on while her breast is being fondled. She feels hard nipples press into her back, soft tresses of hair touching her shoulders and a foot rubbing lightly up and down her leg while coarse damp hair tickles her ass cheeks. Helena brings her hand up and tangles it in the wild mane at her shoulders, bringing the head closer. She tiles her head up and back to lock eyes with the deep chocolate eyes of her lover. Helena is witnessed to a lazy, sexy smile on Bette’s face.
“Good Morning, Puff” Bette drawled and then pushed forward taking Helena’s lips with her own. Bette’s hand, which had gone idly at the feel of Helena’s hand wrapping its self around her hair, now continued to explore as their tongues tangled and teased. Bette’s fingers took a hold of the perk, hard nipple that was now standing at attention and began a rhythm of pulling on it and the rolling it. Pulling it out the entire length, then rolling it between her forefinger and thumb. Helena’s head snapped back from the kiss, crying out in the pleasure Bette was quickly building in her.
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WOW!!!!OMFG!!!!! THat was HOT!!!! Please keep HElena and Bette together. I so love this story. I can’t wait to see the looks on Peggy’s and Tina’a faces when they see Helena and Bette. Thank you for this story I love the way you write.
DAMN!!!! I’m so envy Helena now. LOL… I need a cold shower. Great chapter, post soon please
ok…well…wow…that…oh my goodness…please keep writing. Don’t stop.
OMBG!! HOT HOT HOT… Abso’bloody’loutely fantastic Pands!! Girl your are an amazing writer!
I was really hoping for a TiBette reunion. I just don’t see HelBette at all. But there are many People rooting for a Bette/Helena relationship, and should really, really enjoy your story. Keep writing, your great.
speechless………Need cold shower!
That ……was……hoooo……ooooottttttttttttttt. Great chapter with all the right ingrediants. Way to go P.
Don’t worry about the comments; write for you. I’m a Tibetter, always have been, always will be, but I love your story and never miss it. Can’t wait for more, as usual. (Oh, I agree with you, by the way. I don’t think Bette ever took Tina for granted)
Hey lady,dont let comment worry,If sone dont like it dont read it, I a Bette and Tina fan,but helena and Bette are on fire together, If nothing comes of Bette and Helena Helena will know she has been with the best and learn a lot. If they stay together,she will learn a lot more and be loved by Bette. thanks for posting love this thanks
great thanks panda now i have to calm down after reading this how am i supposed to sleep now? : ) great chapter
Don’t know quite how you do it but this is some hot couple. I really don’t like Helena withBette, I am a serious TiBetter and want t see them together always but, the way Bette and Helena sizzle is unbelieveable. They are some hot together and I can only hope that this is just a f**kfest for the two of them. I want Tina and Bette back together. Thanks anyway for a great story.
Hey Pands great updat again. I LOVE IT and I’m very curious to read what Peggy is going to say when she sees her daughter lolz
OH MY GOD!HOT HOT HOT HOT!And trust me,^^ I dont usually write that about other couples when their gettin it on! BUT Damn, until T can sort herself out, and ya know, I say go Belena or Helebette whatever!I would like to make it clear thoTIBETTEr all the way ehehehe.
OMG that was freaking HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok I have to admit this is the last chapter I will be reading……I am content with this chapter……This is what I wanted to see…….When I started reading your story it was because it was a Belena story….(I thought)…..But as I read your comments and authors notes I see it might go either way……….I’m not saying I’m not a Tibette fan but that’s not what I want to read here………But I know the pressure from your others readers can be hard………You are a good writer so I think you can write a Belena story AND a Tibette story separately………….If by chance you are going to have Tina interfere with B&H, bring Dylan in and make it less painful for Helena……Just an idea………Please continue to write your story the way YOU intended!!!!!!!Once again that was HOT!
wow that was some chapter!! so fucking hot. and while i was originally a tibette fan after the first 2 seasons, the fiasco that was season 3 has me hoping for bette to find happiness elsewhere. also you and some of the other authers have managed to make bette and helena hot and believable, so carry on. I’ll be reading.
ffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck! i know i said the same thing to another one of your chapters Pands but HEY if you keep writing the bloooody hot scenes i’m going to keep on saying it!!!
oh yeah, i can’t wait until Tina sees that ‘just got fucked by Bette Porter look’ on Helena’s face. she deserves it after how she flaunted Helena in Bette’s in season 2…..I know that 2 wrongs don’t make a right. but damn it this is fanfic….where characters can get redemption and psychological beatings as well!!
wow, that was one hell of a chapter, although not too wise on my part to read at work, must adjust a/c immediately!!great job!!!!!!!!!!!
Well I’m posting at my own story again guess that means I have an ego:) I saw Michellia’s comment about me bringing this story around to a Tibette…here are my thoughts…maybe I’m not being clear and I guess I don’t want to give out too much of where my story is leaning. But maybe I should? I have every intention to write the the story with BeLena all the way, but want to build Tina back up to the point where at a certain point Bette will go…that is the woman I fell in love with. I’ll keep writing the BeLena then…once it’s said and over, post an alternate ending, ya know?
oh..Lena…we all know what happened to u by see ur face …haha…it’s my chair burns or something…why I feel so hot…i need an iceberg to cool me down…or could someone please call fire department for me…this story is getting better and better…higher and higher…thank u…thank u….
oh panda tht was steaming hot shizzile mah nizzle love makin between them i guess my morning hot coffey has to follow with a colder shower . dun let peoples comments effect your writing coz darling youare amazing writer an me inspite of being a hardcore tibetter cant help but feel myself gettin wet reading to helena and bette …i dun feel tht connexion post s3 and i only wish tht it was a nightmare :)
i find it weird that you can’t imagine bette and tina getting back together, yet you find it possible for bette and helena to be together, when that never existed and probable never will. please tell me if there will be an alternate ending, because the bette and helena thing would be like pairing up tina and alice and i just don’t ever see that happening either. Bette and Tina all the way!! Can’t give up on them now!
This chapter was the hottest thing I’ve read on this site! I loved Tina and Bette in Season 1 and had hope for them in Season 2, but Season 3 ended that hope. I just don’t see how two people who have hurt each other as much as T and B can put it back together. Like a lot of people, I want to see Bette happy, and if Helena does that, I’m all for it! Tina wanted Henry, Tina got Henry and now Tina should try to make it work with Henry and give Bette a chance to find herself again and find happiness.
And, I almost forgot, I love that Bette calls Helena “Puff”!
there’s nothing wrong to read about happy bette, the only problem is that BeLena relationship doesn’t really exist..are you stil planning to have two alternative endings as you mentioned in one of your comments or this is only BeLena story now?
DAMNNNNNNNNN….now how the hell am I going to go to sleep after reading this? Panda, you truly knocked this one out the ball park. -_- ………..But this line here, I didn’t get it………. “My mother is soo going to know exactly what happened to me!” Helena exclaimed before she burst into giggles.???
1st…….brb
well I’m and so are a few of my faithful readers hehehe, snQQpy to answer your question…Bette told Peggy that she’ll know when Helena’s been fucked by her, becasue she’ll be wearinf a “just got fucked by Bette Porter smile” hehe any who and KtoTam, I have every intention of woring this story to a point to where it can split. When is that gonna happen? I have no clue! lol, just the two days I wrote took over howmany chapters?? hehehe I’m slow oh well, and if you go to the MB on teh Laural thread, I asked some TiBetters of when they would like to see a TiBette story take place. Cuz I’m planning a writing a separate fic for my buddy Catcat!! It just can’t take place after S3 cuz I won’t feel it ya know??
I can understand you not buying TiBette after S3, but how can you buy BeLena after S2? Bette and Tina do have a history that includes love, Helena and Bette simply can’t stand each other.
P you did it again girl dont let ppl comments hurt you you are a damn good writer now i have to go change my underpants
Great chapter! We need to remember this is a fantasy world! Belena have their followers, as do TiBette. The fanfic writers have proven you can take them anywhere as long as you pen interesting story! I happen to like both. As for S4, who knows? Bette seems to have terrific chemistry with everyone! Getting B/T back to a place where there is even a slight possibility of reconciliation will be an ardorous task. Good luck, and thanks for writing.