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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT31
I thought we could spend the evening together… PT 31
Previously…
"Oh nothing T, nothing for you to worry yourself about, nothing at all!"
Bette leaned across and gave Tina a peck on the lips, with a wink, a gear shift, a glance in the mirror, they were off. Bette smiling to herself, Alice had the tape, she was going to enjoy letting Tina watch that, glad that in her mind she had done something that was totally unexpected, she would be looking forward to seeing Tina’s reaction when she knew that she’d be able to watch it whenever she wanted.
Yeah, they had had the most amazing weekend together; many memories made, many lessons learned and now they were on their way home, home to an evening with their friends. Their very own family.
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"Babe?"
Bette turned to look at Tina, who had been quiet for the last half an hour, her head resting back on the cream leather headrest, her eyes closed and the gentle wind blowing her blonde hair. Bette had been glancing across at intervals, when the traffic allowed, smiling to herself at how peaceful Tina had looked.
"Hey, I thought you were still sleeping!"
"I wasn’t sleeping Bette, I was resting my eyes!" Tina said with a glint of humour in her voice.
"Ah right, how come you always lose any semblance of hearing when you’re resting your eyes?" Bette laughed.
"I was thinking about tomorrow!"
Bette looked across, wondering what was happening tomorrow, "what’s on tomorrow, is there something I’ve forgotten?"
"No, I thought maybe I could cook up a special meal tomorrow and we could spend the evening at home together."
"That’d be really great T, is this for any occasion in particular?"
"No, but its Monday and its going to be us getting back into a normal routine, and you starting your different working hours, I presume you will still be doing that?"
"Of course, why do you say that? I sorted it all out with James on Friday. Didn’t you think I would do it?"
"Well, I suppose, it’s just uh…"
"It’s just what T?" Bette voice gave an element of annoyance, feeling as though Tina were questioning her integrity.
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Keep it coming that was great. Thank you
I love the way that you write whether it is your award winning style of Bette and Tina’s love making or of them learning to live everyday as a couple. Love making is very important to a relationship but so is living every day life and trusing the one you love. I am so glad that Tina learned that Bette really does love her and that it will take that leap of faith on her part to keep everything on an even keel.
If you are going to easdrop?? listen to all of it. Glad that shane is such a good friend. thanks
That was just great! Thanks Jo.
u made my day
thanks for a great chapter – really needed some T & B hope this weekend.
I agree with honda90: my day just got better too!! I love the reconnection story of these two! And I think tina’s reaction is an honest one given the history. i’m SO glad B gave her a reason to believe! can’t wait for the next chapter…whatever the rating.
I can understand the reaction here. I would not expect that just because they opened the lines of communication that everything would magically dissppear. They have been carrying on like this for quite some time and it will take time to clear that path to better communication. Thank god for Yodah! I really think that if tina would have said somehting to Bette about Melvin’s treatment of her Bette would have stood up to melvin sooner than what we saw in season 2. I enjoy these chapters as well as the NC-17! It can’t be all about sex all the time besides they still have more heavy duty conversation about the statements they made to each other on the beach. And they also have to practice what they have been preaching. For me I would love for you to continue showing us how they are battling through the lines of communication and how they overcome these obstacles. Like Candance, would Bette still have been enthralled by her? Or how would they handle they miscarriage? There is definetly more story to cover! Post soon!
Did the girls go over a safe number of orgasms in a short amount of time? Did brain cells get killed off? Geez, Tina, get a grip.
Loved it!I like the hot stuff as well as the emotional stuff, hell that’s what got me hook on this fic!! Keep it coming, and I’m glad to see that you’re still working through issues that won’t just go away cuz you’re having great sex!!
gee some writers are SO paranoid. yes you write fucking amazing sex scenes but you have created a version of B/T that is compelling because it shows them with their flaws. tina is not little blonde angel and you show that. and bette is not the big bad wolf — and you show that. such a problem soothing writers fragile ego’s don’t ya think… ? X
Jo, I love your story isn’t the sake of NC-17, even though they were HOT!!! Uh hum… To be honest, I wouldn’t like a story for just having sex all the time but no depth at all. That’ll be just like a porno!lol..so don’t worry about the rating. It’s a brilliant story, it brought tears to my eyes. Please continue
Tina was all the way wrong with this one, as Shane said she heard only what she wanted to hear and she was horrible to Bette. Then she takes off and when she comes back, she learns that Bette has hurt herself, and she stands there and commands Bette to get up from her chair and come to HER so that Tina can say a paltry “sorry”…Not even seeing if she’s ok or asking how she is….This is not right and not loving.
Amazing chapter! I love how Shane is always there helping them..yoda is da best lol.
This is a great chapter. As hot as your NC-17’s are Jo, you are a brilliant writer and this chapter proves it. I will read anything you write always.
That was a great chapter and Tina had better do a little more groveling. She should have given Bette a chance to say what she hzd doneinstead of flying off the handle.
Jobadge, I enjoy your writing, your NC17 is enjoyable, it is also a little more romantic than most NC17 But I really enjoyed this chapter the most, communication is something we all need to learn to do and do right. Thank you
Now, I love a good NC-17 chapter but I have to say that this chapter was unfuckingbelievable in the most amazing sense. Jobadge, I work in the tv/film industry and this is better than most of the scripts that come across my desk. For the love of all that is good in the world I’m begging you to please post soon…is it bad that I want Bette to make Tina work for forgiveness on this one? And I don’t mean in a cute way. Man, I have to let my anger towards S3 autonomy seeking Table Turning Tina go.
That was some powerful writing! I felt every emotion in this chapter. Keep it coming!
Tina needs to have a little more faith in Bette. Great chapter can’t wait to see how Tina makes it up to Bette.
great lesson in this chapter and i’ll remember it…and again thank goodness for yoda…every couple has ups and downs and somehow i feel that B&T can overcome it all with their love…thanks
Hey JB – Thank you so much for sharing your talents here, with us. This was another brilliant chapter. Do you really have fewer readers just because of the chapter ratings? Unbelievable! I read everytime you post. I love your story and your writing – there is so much more to it than just the sexual encounters. (Although you do have a special gift in your ability to write those encounters.) You had me gasping, groaning, and talking out loud to Tina while I was reading this chapter. I was telling her no, no, no, do not go there, and to shut up and think before she spoke, but of course it was too late. She has some HUGE apologizing to do. Bette really came through; I’m sure it was very difficult for her to say no to her father. So glad that Shane told Tina what was on her mind, and so relieved that Bette is able to forgive Tina. Can’t wait for more!
thank god you posted..I can always count on you. You aren’t going to bring Helena and Bette together anytime soon…right?
what a deep chapter – the emotions were exhausting…and oh so real! GREAT story (including the NC17s)!!
Tina crazy, poor Bette and glad they ok now!
Well written and an emotional chapter. Keep ’em coming! Thanks for writing.
Hey….This chapter,what can i say…it is nothing less than i would ever expect from one of the best writers on this site…and thats not even me being biased…lol….powerful stuff hun…they needed to test their last few days,and youve done it with style….keep it coming..
my day just got better….tks to you!!!
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great chapter! this is so good! you are right not all is happiness and they have to handled some hard times! very good!
I ove this story no matter what the rating is. Why is Tina so quick to think the worst of Bette. And thanks to her quick judgement now Bette is going to have a scar (temporary at least) on that beautiful face of hers. Bette obviously is trying to change based on the weekend her and Tina shared, But Tina has a lot more work to do on her end. Post soon please.
This one was really really beautiful Jobadge. You’ve made my day, thanks.