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Bette and the Dalmatian
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BETTE AND THE DALMATIAN – single post FF challenge 6
Bette saw her every day as she sat at her desk working on her doctorate. She was blonde and beautiful – every day she made the same walk with the same good natured Dalmatian dog that always walked to heel and always looked at her with a total devotion. And every day Professor Porter struggled with who was the more gorgeous – the blonde or the dog.
One day at 12:30 which was the usual time that the blonde went past with the dog Bette was waiting by her window in her tracksuit and trainers ready for her run — she normally ran first thing in the morning but today — well its really easy to get stuck in a rut isn’t it ?
And nothing better for an afternoon of deconstructing the ownership of the American newspapers during prohibition than a nice run. Plus it was about time to change her route as well.
At 12:30 the blonde came into view wearing black tracksuit trousers and a white tee-shirt. Bette almost fell over her chair in her anxiety to get out the door but she managed to just be standing outside her apartment doing her warming up exercises ( again ) when the blonde walked by with the dog.
“Nice dog “ Bette said conversationally.
“I think so “
“Hello there “
Bette patted the dog on the head and greeted it.
“You are gorgeous – do you know that ? “
She meant the blonde as well as the dog but obviously its not the third thing you tell a woman you are crazy about.
“She does know she’s gorgeous – she is so vain “
Bette laughed and continued to stroke the dog as she looked at its gorgeous owner.
“Do you think dogs know they are being talked about ? “
“This one does – she knows when I’m telling my friends on the phone about what mischief she has been getting up to – -yes you “
The blonde reached down to pat the dog and her hand brushed over Bette’s. Bette felt she had been plugged into the mains supply — oh God — she is something else.
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“Bette Porter is like the lesbian holy grail.”…great tie-in to the ubiquity of the ‘DaVinci Code’. Loved it and I’ll remember it! This was a sweet story and I wish you could have prolonged their courtship, but I realize you wanted to encapsulate this into one chapter! I love the transplanted B&T, on an English college campus! Thanks for a dandy story for a Sunday morning. I’ll stop reading right now and let its lightness prevail over my day. Thank you!
Ally, this was so cute. When you finish your other stories you can always come back to this one. Yodah is good writer and I hate what happened to her.
already a winner…this was wonderful and sooo cute, maybe i should get a dog since it’s one sure way to meet hot women or men in the park
Awwww so sweet and Holly is great. I was LMAO when Bette ran into the tree…
Ah, what a sweet story. Wish it would go on forever! Thanks.
Your awesome!!!!!!! Loved the story, especially the dog. Can so relate, especially to having them land on your chest in the morning.
Oh how I love dogs. that was a smart dog. she found the oerfect mate to mate with, thanks
This was so cute! And LMAO @ Bette busting her nose and trying to cover it up.
nice story & even nicer of you to dedicate this to yodah.
hehe so cute!
First, yeah! Cute story!
Hehe too cute!
soooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuttttttttttteeeeeeeeee
:D wow… great!!
You old me you wanted something other than CUTE said about this story, well the only other words are sweet, dainty, sweet, charming… you get the picture!! So Drama Queen, you do cute and soft too! Accept it!
that was wonderful. you never cease to amaze.
‘Bette Porter is like the lesbian holy grail’ LMAO… it’s so true. Reading this was like watching a hollywood style love story (it’s a compliment) :P I love it
I just looooove stories with dogs, this was awesome, thanks Ally.
Nice story, ally, and sweet of you to dedicate it to yodah!
that was so cute….think you can keep three stories going???
Very cute story. I wish our girls were this happy now!
Ally, I am in awe of your command of words and your use of them. You are a brilliant writer and I can’t tell you enough what a wonderful friend you have been and continue to be to me. I will always consider December 8, 2005 to be a very special day for me. Thank you for being you Ally.
So the dog got laid sooner than the Bette & Tina? That bitch! Well, if she was going to be a bad girl, at least they got some puppies out of the deal.
Beautiful! Its amazing how animal can tune into the unsaid human emotions and help with the connection. Good dog Holly, good dog. Loved your B&T.Thanks
sweet! niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
hey alas always this story too was as good as i would have expected of you…U are a amazing writer and i love it the way u write it with so much detail love this was simply adorable story pls continue this story and jus dont do it as one post story ..u already haveme addicted to lwing and a long and winding road :)
This was so sweet!
wow! what a nice story! ^_^
2 cute…..will there be more..like the s/l so far.
LOVED it. Adorable. And good show dedicating it to Yodah.
A combination of cuteness, sweetness, tenderness and humour. Great story.
Hey gal, that was a real delight. I really would like to get to know this version of Bette and Tina better. Especially now that Holly is a mother. Thank you for your light touch and true emotions. Your Loyal Fan.