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The L Wing 79
THE L WING – CHAPTER 79.
“CJ got a call – no one else knows “
“Okay “ I turn to Bette “ Lets keep it that way for now. Lets go and spend the rest of the evening with our friends and family “
I knew this was coming – that it was inevitable but it doesn’t stop me worrying if one or two revelations about my past love life might be one or two too many for my fiancé.
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Narration of Bette Porter.
I look at the grandfather clock in the corner of the room and see that it is just after midnight and at last the party is beginning to break up –we have just said farewell to all those who flew down from Washington.
Tina is talking to her brother and I am talking to my father who is waiting for Kit and they will leave too.
“Some advice Bette “
“Yes dad “
“You and your partner have been through a lot in the last few weeks. You need to calm down and no late nights “
“Meaning ? “
“You should take your woman to bed – its too late for her “
“I would like to go to bed. “
I say mainly because I cannot believe we have survived for five hours and we have not made love – I want her so much. At last the drought is over and we both want to drink up the juices of our lover.
“Make sure you get some sleep as well “
“Dad ! “
“Well its obvious that the two of you are struggling to keep your hands off one another “
I blush but am secretly thrilled that our passion is so obvious. I look across the room and smile at Tina who has just looked across at me.
“I wish you could see your face when she just looked at you”
“Okay dad – you’ve made your point – Tina and I are crazy for each other. We are very much in love “
“I heard Shane and CJ discussing some newspaper story that is about to break “
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(41 votes, average: 4.34 out of 5)
NO ONE, and I mean NO ONE, leaves us with cliffhangers like you do! Wo-Man… intense. you did just say “weeks” right…. I really like Long and Winding Road, too. But… you’ve left us in a darn tight spot here! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!! can’t wait for the next season!
OK, Ally, do what you must. But it’s cruelty to leave us, and this story, like this for long. See you on that twisting path.
WHAT!? oh the suspense!
Hey nice way to end a fic season :P Just dont kill Shane!. Awesome writting! :D
Re: the Razzie for Bride. I can’t remember if they give one to Sting, too. I remember him being pretty bad in a number of roles at the time, Dune being one.
are you serious? You are a fantastic realistic writer
WOW you certainly live up to your title. Here I am expecting the dirt on Tina’s past, then bam plane crash lol. Please don’t leave us too long, maybe just a short R&R.
ALLY YEA!IS OUR GIRL GO ALLY-GO ALLY-CANT WAIT TILL NEXT SEASON BRING IT ON BABY! WE LOVE YOU LADY!!!!!!!!!!
Ally-You are too cruel (screaming). Talk about a cliffhanger. So how long is this little hiatus going be? I was happy reading along and then boom, you hit me w/ a plane crash. Pls. hurry up and finish that story that shall remain nameless so that you can get back to the story that really matters-The L Wing. And if you’re taking suggestions about who if anyone should die in that plane crash, just know that I’m not super attached to Helena, Carmen, Val, Jenn or Lara. The others i need to live. But het it’s your story so you obviously know better than I what should happen. I guess I just re-reading this chapter until you make what I’m sure will be a triumphant return.
OMG, major cliffhanger!! And I’m sure we’ll be blown away when the L Wing returns next season…LOL. Thank you.
whoa whoa whoa!! i cant handle this ally!!
Damn, don’t leave us here I like all you write but this is my favorite
Is it like a mid season break which only last a couple of weeks or the break that last months? I can send ice cream if necessary. That was very good but scary. You should be a writer of any show, but I would pick the L word for you to do because you take care of Bette and Tina. Have a good break on the L Wing.
you know how to make us wait for your next, don’t you? can you give us some spoilers for the next season? ok ok i know! well i will wait! excellent post
Damn it ally, just cause you have nerves of steel doesn’t mean the rest of us do.Crikey…is that British slang or just bad spelling? You win, we’ll be here. Sue
WOW!!!WOW!!!!WOW!!!!
I gave your title of Cliffhangers QUEEN away. guess you will get it backnow at least with the other writer we will read her story sooner You did a great job on this my dear, Love your other story, Just do what you need to do and we will wait,as if I could write .thanks
You are so BAD!
I am not a happy bunny, I know I have said this before, I love all your stories, but this is my favourite, dont know if I can last a few weeks. I feel like you feel when the L word finishs for the season, great cliff hanger though
what a way to leave us hanging, with a bang…i’ll be waiting for season 2
OMG, Ally I can’t believe you actually did it. Your told me you were going to but I didn’t really think you would. Fantastic way to end the first season. No one will be able to take away your Drama Queen title now after this. I can’t wait to see what happens next and I have a feeling that this time I will have to wait just like everyone else.
Ally – You watch too much TV! – seasion finale had to be a really big cliff hanger didn’t it!!! so whos going to write the interseason fan fiction to keep us all going while the LWing is off air???
Oh my? The drama does not end with you , eh? Well as long as you are writing it does not matter to me if you are taking a couple of weeks off from this. Looking forward to the next season!
oh ally, how you love to torture us faithful readers! It’s all good though. at least we get to read your other great story while we wait for the next ‘season’. carry on love. I’ll be reading.
What a chapter. What a cliffhanger. Please write some more soon.
no ever a preview?
huh, you make me cry i can’t even type properly… I mean, not even a preview? :( dang.
ALLY, YOU ARE SO CRUEL!!! I just watched ‘United 93’ this evening, NOOOOOOOoooooooo… Not another plane crashed, it’s too much for me to handle in a day! *sniffs* I guess I’m gonna have nightmare. You so owe me… sobs…
oh COME ON!!!! You can’t just leave us like this!!! no f***ing way ally!!! I swear to God my heart is in my throat right now!!You can’t just do this to us, please pretty please!!
WHHHYYY!!NOOO!! Cliffhangers are such a cruel thing!!
Hey AE – the new season of The L Wing better start soon…very soon!!! Or I’ll hunt you down and force you to write the sequel and I’m not kidding!!!! Just think of the agony B&T are in, you can’t do that to them for a long period of time. If so you’re just cruel…a very bad person, but it helps a bit if you kill Helena LOL……..Ally all of the above is just my way of telling you, that I love your writing and that I will miss The L Wing terrible :o))
ally darling this is so unfair you are hangin us up ona cliffhanger dude not right but i loved the story like i always do pls post soon wilya
what a way to end it… ok take your time off… but please keep everyone safe… love both of your stories…
aaawwwwhhhhh, I might as well have been on that plane because you’re killing me ;) I hope everyone is okay and I CAN’T WAIT until the season break is over…this is my first love of your stories and I will miss it!!
This was a big cliffhanger, wasnt it? Great job Ally. Take your time, but not too much. :D :P
oh the drama….
Awww a long break? D= Well if anything we’ll have something to look forward to as well as your other story. =D
WHAT!!! That’s just cruel to leave us like that. Oh well!! Great update!
You sure know how to pack a wallop! The season is over; where can I get the DVD set???? Thanks!
Because you treat us with your wonderful storytelling gifts and because you are prolific and can’t contain your creativity to one story we go where you go. And since you are the DRAMA QUEEN EXTRAORDONAIRE of course you must you leave us hanging – not to mention torture our heroines some more. I look forward to whatever you write but you are an evil cliff hanging so and so….
noooooooooooooooooooo cliffhanger…i will die… :(…write soon
I never thought I would really warm up to this story, but it’s one of the first I click on now. It seems like you’ve been struggling with it a bit lately, so maybe a hiatus is just what you need. I like your other stories too. Very fond of Holly and her penchant for animal lit! Thanks for writing.
ok! Now..it’s bad enough that we are having a chest pain and heart atack when u said that this will be for now! then you have to have that plane crash..wow! a cliff hanger ..plain cruel..but can’t help to love your stories..good work as always ally
You’re the best….and this is the best history here in fanfic…
Ally you are soooo bad…:P
Damn, talk about a cliffhanger. Please do not make us wait until September.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooo you cant leave it like that NOOOOOoooooooooooamazing.. but Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa damnnnnn! write again soon!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
Holy cow you so mean, this is not nice to leave us like this and hope you will make a new one for us soon. This is not good and hope they will be ok, the plane crash is just bad and damn scary and don’t let them die. Ok can’t wait to see what’s happen next and please post soon, thanks!
be still my heart what have you done????? you can’t leave us like this —oh can’t tina family hear them especially tina’s mom surely she heard the love if you love us you’ll write soon please!!!!!!!!!
oh no……what are you doing to this reader…i adore this story and this couple…..please not too much tragedy….will wait anxiously for the follow-up…..
awesome as always…you really know how to keep us at the edge of our seats.
Damn what a way to leave us hanging.
major..major cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!
i can’t blame any great writer for needing a break, but i can blame you for writing such a great story, or shall i say stories, that you leave us wanting more all the time….please don’t take too long a break, i luv all your stories, but this one will always be my favorite of them!!!!!!!!!
Just brilliant!! Look forward to you picking this story up again. Love your other stories too but this is definitely my favourite fanfic!
Alley, you are such a torturos tease by leaving everyone wondering what will happed next. Feels very Emmerdale to me. Hee, hee, hee!!! Brilliant as every. I particularly lived Bette’s response to Tina’s suspenders. You just can’t keep a good woman down. Positively edible. Okay I will suffice with “The Long and WInding Road” only as I am safe in the knowledge that you and your fabulous talent will re-ignite this blazing trail. Thank you for the story thus far. Your Loyal Fan.
that is just mean. so mean. your good ya know that. we’ll be waiting for ya. come back soon, please.
What!?! OMG! Ally how could u leave us like this? A plane crash! Oh jeez! It’s near impossible to wait .. but i guess i will have to … !
You know what, I’m goin’ to the hospital asking to put me in a coma for several weeks….that is what you do to me. I’m addicted to you.