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Masked Feelings CH 45 The Talk
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Alice was feeling great pangs of regret and shame… it showed on her face. Roxy was half expecting her to feel this way but she wasn’t prepared for her total emotional breakdown. She had been the other woman a few too many times… others have broken down after the fact. The difference this time… she cared a great deal for Alice. Hell, she loved the woman! Roxy nevered wanted to invoke this kind of response from Alice…. when Alice hurt, she hurt a thousand times over. She placed light kisses all over her face, tasting the salty tears that came from her brown eyes.
Roxy – Aww, baby… don’t cry. It breaks my heart to see you like this.
Alice pulls away quickly and scrambles out of bed… grabbing her nightshirt and pulling it over her head.
Roxy – Alice… please don’t go. Let’s talk about this.
Alice makes a move for the door.
Roxy – Alice… please. I’m begging you to stay. I love you.
The last three words caused her body to tense… the same response you would get if you heard fingernails on a chalkboard. Roxy tried to get up in time to stop her from leaving, but she was already out the door. Alice ran to the bathrrom and locked the door. Running water from the tub, she sat inside. Clutching a washcloth in her hand, she began to scrub her whole body down. Scrubbed until her skin was red and raw. She was trying to wash away the remnants of Roxy, but it wouldn’t wash away everything. Her conscious was what was in need of purifying. Alice had no idea what drove her into Roxy’s arms…. maybe it was the full moon that pulled at her emotions, whatever the reason there was no excuse for her betrayal. When that talk came in three days, how was she going to tell Dana? Too much had happened already… now she just sealed her own fate. Dana would never stay with her after this… and what was worse she’d lose her friendship, her best friend. Alice was contemplating on withholding some of the truth from her already… at least this part. She’d tell her the rest… but not this. Alice wasn’t a religious person by any means, but she was praying now. Please don’t let me lose her. I don’t deserve Dana and I can never make this up to her… but I want another chance. I promise I’ll never make this mistake again. I love her too much to live without her. Plleeaassee…. I’ll endure anything.. and I mean anything, but don’t take her away from me.
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I’m so glad I came home late this night and checked my computer. And first to comment yeah me! Brteyes have I ever told you how much I love this story because I do. I’m glad you’re holding my hand though because I cried like a baby whilst reading this chapter. You know I hate Roxy so glad to see her leave the house. The fight was coming and we knew it would be bad. Hope Alice goes after her but surely Dana will be pissed as hell for a long time. Never ever will I loose faith in this story and in you for writing it, I’m in this for the duration (and the sequels!!)Oh fyi I could never hate you. And also glad to read that ClosetDana is helping you out. You make a great writing team.
hey brteyes. yes, i’m back again. ow ow ow, the last three pages were so hard to read! oh man……this chapter was heart wrenching! poor alice…poor dana. good thing alice told her after the okay from the doc. too bad dana has to wait longer to release her sexual tension now that she is gonna probably hurt herself killing roxy. uhhh, my heart is so unbelievably heavy right now. damn girl, you are good at bringing on the angst! hope tina can help bring danish back 2gether. what kind of trouble will roxy get into other than dana ripping her heart out and slicing her in half vertically? thanks for posting. we wanted the talk, and you delivered. looking forward to more angst. (i’m such a masochist!) btw, what did u think of the “alias” series finale?
And yet another Sunday evening with a brand chapter of MF! *now carefully thinking of what to say next ’cause it could be of some influence on the s/l….you put me under so much pressure now LOL* You could have easily called this chapter ‘Facing the demons.’ :) Thank you for not letting Dana walk in on them. That would have been too painful….THE talk alone was painful enough. :( I can imagine Dana’s rage….nothing good can come out of it (*praying for Dana’s wellbeing*). Glad that Alice called Tina, but I don’t know how she can help Alice out right now (except for being there for her), she is in it too deep and she has to take responsibilty for her actions (and for Dana’s as well as from now). Alice automatically assuming that something was going on between Kirsten and Dana…isn’t that called projection, Alice? When I read that the mystery man showed the tape to Roxy it made me think of Mission: Impossible. ‘This tape will self-destruct in 5 sec.’ Wouldn’t that be bad? Roxy still no further in proving the innocence of Alice, but in big debt with the mob family… Well, I gues I’m kind of glad you didn’t go there….Roxy is gone!!!! :D But she will pull a Schwarzenegger with an ‘I’ll be back’? (Deep down I know she will, she wil be haunting the relationship of Alice and Dana in many ways for a while .) Expect me to read the next chapters with my rose colored glasses. I still have faith in you for getting our favorite girls get back together. :D (Btw, I went on a plane a couple weeks ago and while experiencing some turbulence during that flight, I then felt less anxiety than the turbulence this story is causing. ;) And in case you haven’t noticed it, I’m loving it!)
If that’s Dana’s reaction after hearing only the first part, I’m not feeling to positive about them mending this fence anytime soon.
Wow I was wainting for the confession abd I’m glad is finally here, but Alice need to tell the second part too ’cause that kind of thing killing you slowly and anyway they always see the light of the day at somepoint. I’m really interested to see how you’re going to resolve the story. Thanks.
I knew it was going to hurt, and I saw it coming like a bus in the street and I still read on. I read on because you wrote it, and I knew that you’d pull this heart wrenching pain from my body I knew you’d pour angst and despair upon me like sweet sweet chocolate. So I read this chapter and it was painful and made me want to reach into the computer to comfort and control the situation, but alas I could not, for the master holds the words and in time will reunite and tie the bonds that have been broken. All I can do is trust you, all I can do is bite ny nails wondering what will happen. All I can do is hope to God that I get a snippet, because this time around you saved the juicy stuff for Sunday. Dana’s anger was pretty authentic and the comment she made to Kristen before hand made it all the more dramatic. I like that Alice is going to Tina I’m not really sure what she can do. I’m glad your Tina’s a lot more likeable TLW Tina, she’s a bit of an ass bastard. Maybe Dana will go to Kristen who understands Alice a little. Great tension between Alice and Roxy, you can tell Alice is really sticking it to Roxy and not in a good way. Let’s hope Roxy will redeem herself (she doens’t need to in my eyes) and bring down the mafia like the wonderful agent she could be. Despite her sleeazy nature that I love the girl has got some moves and a snippy zing to her and she doesn’t give up easily. Great job with this chapter brteyes you know you always have me captive :) P.S. Tanja1975 I wish I could say that I was helping brteyes but it’s really the other way around I beg her for advice and sometimes if I’m lucky she’ll break me off a little piece…only if I’m lucky though.
Oh boy! That was a doosey. If I were Dana I probably would’ve thrown the vase a little sooner, and with better aim. No one wants to hear news like that, but isn’t it better to tell the whole truth? Alice needs to come totally clean if she even wants to have a second more of friendship with Dana. On the brightside, Roxy is out of the house!! I enjoyed reading the part where she got pistol whipped. I actually closed my eyes imagined myself holding the gun and delivering the blow to her skull. Hence, I loved this chapter. More please.
Oi, mate…I got asdfghjkl; on me forehead…last time I read the story. I’m loving it. I wanted to leave a longer comment but I’ve got to run (literally…been slacking), but I wanted you to know that I’ll be thinking of this chap as I do and hope for the best on my Danish. I’m not mad at CD for loving Roxy (someone has too), she’s awesome; Tanja1975 is right, you mates make an awesome team. Cheers.
I don’t know if I want Dana and Alice to together it depends on what condition they are both in after this rollercoaster comes to a stop. Not that my opinions matters, you are TPTB here. JMHO Right now Alice has a lot of issues to work out (e.g. if she loves Dana so much why did she do something that would hurt Dana so much? Maybe Alice’s feelings that Dana is to blame for Lara’s action play a role). Alice certainly made another mistake by not telling Dana all about her relationship with Roxy. Alice, better than anyone, should know how easily things can be overheard or taped. If Dana ever gets a viewing of mystery man’s video collection she is going to be a world of hurt. I can’t see Roxy not pursuing Alice now that she is no longer with Dana, we know how determine Roxy is. I also can’t see Alice holding out long, she certainly couldn’t do it before when she was with Dana. I don’t blame Roxy for perusing Alice, however, Roxy creeps me out the way she would molest Alice at will when Alice was sleeping or drunk. Anyway I will be waiting until next Sunday for the next twist or drop.
sorry i don’t comment much but do i like your story. so as long as you write it i will read it. thanks
this is great and I can’t wait to see what dana will do to roxy but I do hope that dana can forgive alive in time because I feel there is so much more to happen yet please post soon I can’t wait I love it
God you’re KILLING me!!! I have no idea how you’re gonna get Dana to come around but please do it soon! I have a feeling that Tony is still going to go after Alice and I’m still curious about Kristen…like I’ve said before, I’ll be patient but my girls have to be together in the end. Can’t wait for the update!
Wow. I dont even know what to say! You must really hate Danish though! :-P (JK) Please post again soon, because I’m anxiously waiting to see what happens with Danish. Dana better not do something stupid!
I dont need to write a million words to tell you how i feel
:faints: lol it took me a while to catch up! What an awesome story you got here B, im deff hooked! and i cant wait for the next chap! if i saw this on the shelfs in the book store i’d go broke buying all the series lol