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Like a fairytale, chapter 18
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Once upon a time on ‘Like A Fairytale’:
No… I was actually planning on asking you to come with us…
Alice shook her head firmly, indicating this was not the answer she had had in mind
Of course we are coming with you, Yoda… You didn’t think we’d let you 2 go alone would you? I mean what can we do now?
The boyishlooking girl was momentarily taken aback by the generosity and friendship that were in the her friends words and gestures… Dana was nodding in the rhythm of Alices words, reinforcing them and Shane felt a grin appear on her face as she hugged to two girls tight before giving them both a task…
Soon the house was as empty as when Shane had first arrived and Septembers niece reached for the mirror that was in her pocket, sighing deeply…
Shane had gotten up at 5am that morning, knowing that if she hadn’t fallen asleep by then she wouldn’t anymore… The voice of her aunt was resounding in her head, and the weight of responsibilty that laid on her young shoulders was huge. As she looked at her three friends who were handling the last things that needed to be done before their departure and felt a hope rise in her heart… For she saw the warm connection between all of them and she felt a part of that… And she knew instintively that that bond would make them stronger then any outsider or enemy would ever consider…
As the girls finished the last preparations, they joined Shane who was looking upto the house they had all lived in for so long… Each had her own memories and they grabbed eachothers hands… Just standing there for a minute, capturing them, before they all at the same moment turned around and began the journey that would change not only their lifes, but also would have a great impact on those of others…
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And now the floor show starts with a song and dance troupe performing “A Kind of Magic” by Queen. xD Seriously I started singing “it’s a kind of maaaaaaaagic” after that last line. lol Awww Tina can’t lose the faith! Man this is a long fairytale. When was the last time we slept? *yawns loud and long* hehe
LOL, I thought about Queen’s song too.. Hahaha IT’S MAGIC! LOL, Tina and Bette should go and see doctor if their heart keep pounding like that. :p
I read it real slow like you said to and it was very cool. Is there anyway that the mirror can send a message to Tina to let her know that the love of her life is on her way back to her? Once Tina receives the message can she then respond to Bette and tell her that she is waiting for her? Yoda is so cool and calm. With the help of Alice, Dana and Yoda Bette will reach Tina in time. I believe in our Captain that they will find their way home (into each other’s arms). Do you know where I can find a mirror like that?
The little girls turns into beautiful women. The princess wicked Mother the Queen has tried to keep them apart. The good fairy has taken care of The beautiful friend of the princess. She and her thre faithful friends are on the way to help the beautiful golden hair princess. from the evil boy toys her Mothe the evil Queen wants her to be with will the four friends make it in time to save the beautiful princess only the wuthor knows so post soon. thanks
Beautiful. I haven’t commented much on either of ur stories, but, I thought I’d make sure to compliment here. Wonderful post lady. I agree with Lamentamini. Boy am I tired…lol. I’m kidding. I could never be too tired to read ur stories. I’m inspired by u. Wonderful post. Oh and thanks for the comment. I greatly appreciate it. ur #1 fanfiction fan. Bye :)
Love it. Please let them get there soon. I can not wait for the moment Bette and Tina see each other again. I just love how you write the emotions and thoughts so beautifully (in both your stories).
As always love it but please let them get there soon i am soooo impatient. hope to read more soon.
I’m sure Tina won’t lose faith in Bette.
maybe september can give both B&T the sense of hope that they still love each other, so they keep waiting for each other
I love the story…it’s so sweet. But, may I make one little…small complaint? I am not sure why there is so much space in between each sentence. It makes it distracting to read to have to constantly be hitting the down arrow button!! Sorry…but you know I love the story itself!! Thanks!
That was great, I can’t wait for them to meet! It was too short though. Did I mention I love this fairytale? Post soon!! :)
Good chapter. Hope Tina still have faith in Bette, because Bette still are and deeply in love with her. Please let them get there soon and get them together. Ok this one is short and hope you will make the next one is a little longer, thanks!
is there some place for me? pleaseee! this is so good i hope Tina doesn’t misunderstanding the hearth thing cause Bette just want and need one person and is she! this is so good the important thing is the quality not the quantity (Bette said it one time!) take care, a pleasure read your post!
Aonther great chapter, I wish it was longer.. can’t wait to read what happens next.=)
Damn! it was indeed a short chapter! lol, ok, so the princess charming and her knights are still on her way to princess T whose heart by the way is betraying her, it’s beating faster because her love has started a crusade to rescue her, awww princess T, hang on!
So sweet JLB&T. Antoher song pops in mind (not Queen) it goes something like “Oh oh it’s magic, when I’m with you” can’t remember by whom? How can they go wrong with Yoda & magic on their sides.:)
oh! I give up…good things are short.
Just great as always…and it´s only fair that i cheer you up with my comments…your stories really cheer me up! :)
Ok, here is another ‘cliché’ for you, just loved you’re story, and I mean it.
I’m onto you, missy! Very sneaky to put so much space between the lines so that we wouldn’t notice this chapter is too short! Hehe, just kidding – sort of :P – I know you’re really really busy and you still manage to keep up with three stories. And they’re all amazing, too! I’m having trouble with even one story and I’ve got no school or work right now, so again… mijn complimenten! Bleeh, tis gaan regenen. Nou ja, nu voel ik me wel weer thuis hier in Nederland. :D