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When Tina became Helena
FRIDAY FANTASY CHALLENGE # 7
When Tina became Helena…………..
Narration of Helena
I woke up feeling like hell on earth — how much had we all had to drink last night. As I lay with my eyes still tightly closed some of the facts did gradually return to me. We were at my mother’s cabin in the woods. When I say we I mean the two soon to be wedded couples .
Bette and Tina had got back together after Shane’s non wedding and had somehow managed to work their way through the muddle of Henry and custody battles. Today they have been living together for 18 months and have decided to renew their vows in a few weeks.
Angie – now a stunningly pretty three year old was having a weekend away from her over protective parents with Aunt Shane and Aunt Lara — the most unlikely couple but they have been living together for nine months now.
And when the wedding is finished and they get back from their honeymoon they should get news their adoption application. So they needed a break away from wedding preparations and form filing.
And my fiancé and I just love a reason to get away for any length of time and have a long and lazy couple of days making love and enjoying ourselves .
Everyone says that Alice and I are an unlikely couple but it’s the differences that have become the attractions. She has made me less — well anal and I think that I have given Alice a stability and a focus that she needs — everyone says she is less insane now.
So last night we found my mother’s store of cocktails – well we found the bottles and we made up the rest . Alice had told us that there was a cocktail called “ Alice from Dallas “ which she knew the ingredients of but had never tried – and the ingredients were all in place last night.
So after several glasses of a mixture that included some orange liqueur that I never did name, coffee liqueur and tequila we were all pretty steamed.
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(29 votes, average: 4.31 out of 5)
This story is a cross between the movie Freaky Friday and the tv show Invasion. This is a great story line to show both women how much they really do love their own lives. It was very interesting.
This was enjoyable.
LOL…those cosmic crazies….get you everytime!..different!..funny…enjoyed it..good one..
LOL, are you sure it was TIna & Helena that saw the green lights? Mate, I don’t know how you consistently come up with the goods, but you do, every goddamn time!!
Very very funny and hot too. you sure know how to write and I’m glad you have a supportive girlfriend who encourages you so we all share in your wit and writing. Thank her for us will you.
Thanks Ally.. another lesson in be careful what you wish for!!!
That’s it! I am FINALLY convinced that the little voices in your head have taken over and WON!! This was a riot….too damned funny!! I’m certain that if you were to ever continue as a full story / chapter and all, neither will ever voice this experience to their respective partners.
1st………..brb
That was just wicked! btw team England won 1-0, Beckham has one hell of a kick. Great story and good luck!
Incredibly funny. I was laughing so hard, I had to hide my face to keep from waking my family up. Good luck, not like you’ll need it because I think that you won this without a problem!! :)
You my dear ally much think all day and half the night to come up with this story.Honey you could win this hands down. this was amazing, wouldnt we have love to do this a certain person. Guess when you see something glowing in the sky,needs to keep you mouth shut and think of little green fairies and keep quite thaks this was awesone, thanks
wow this was freakin rather entertaining to read!!
You fucking crack me up!!! Ally…you are amazing! Thanks for that.
this was really freaky LOL as long as they learned their lessons…but shane and lara? LOL…ally, it was great, good luck ;)
what ever happens below a spaceship stays below the spaceship…tht was so hot..but still alice and tina ….fantasizing tht ws a lil hard hellbetty was fuckin hot
Just 12 more hours.
damn girl, I wasn’t as quick as poopy sh’t..I got a pillow in the head then my coffee hit the carpet. You are capable of inducing uncontrollable laughter. This is a good thing. What are you drinking? I want some. Sue
Geez, Ally, that was out of this world. And an NC-17 to boot, how unexpected. But Ally? I think you left too soon. I think you should do a part 2 in which Tina and Helena return to a randy Bette and Alice and are unable to avoid the spousal “duties” of their counterpart.
LOL! YOu should so continue with a few more chapters!
Omg! That was hilarious! LOL :)) Only you can come up with something like this! Thanks Ally.
LMAO, Oh man, what a funny story!
This is awesome and hot and funny too, love it!
A spaceship, you’re just to much dear.