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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 201
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Chapter 201
An hour later Bette and the boys came through the door at home.
“T? Baby? Are you home?” Bette calls out.
“Yeah, I’m in the bathroom, changing Andrea’s diaper. I’ll be out in a minute.” Tina calls back.
“Mama, where’s my paint stuff?” Noah asks, walking around looking for it.
“Have you checked your room?” Bette suggests and walks into the kitchen to get a glass of water. Noah runs into his room.
Tina walks out moments later with a very active Andrea in her arms.
“Hey there Angel, how are you?” Bette asks as she takes Andrea from Tina and kiss and hugs her tightly. Tina smiles as she also takes a glass of water.
“Mama, I can’t find it. Mommy have you seen my paint stuff?” Noah asks coming into the kitchen.
“Where did you have it last?” Tina asks.
“Ehm… I think at the dining table.” Noah says and looks in that direction. He walks over and sees a plastic bag behind the table. “Found it.” He shouts. Tina smiles to herself.
“Baby, could you maybe drive down to the store and get some milk and another couple of things?” Tina asks Bette.
“Sure, just write a note and I’ll be on my way.” Bette says and kisses Andrea some more, she giggles and laughs.
Tina takes a pad and a pencil and write something down.
“Here.” Tina says and give the note to Bette.
“Thank you.” Bette says and looks over the note. “Maybe some ice cream for later?” Bette says and raises a brow.
“Hmmm, sure, that would be lovely.” Tina replies with a grin.
“I’ll take her with me.” Bette says as she’s holding her.
“Okay.” Tina says. “Drive carefully. I love you.” She adds.
“I will, and I love you too.” Bette says and leans in for a kiss.
Bette and Andrea leaves, they take the Tahoe. The market is just four blocks down, but they have to cross a medium sized intersection. Bette is watching the road and singing along with Andrea on a song. They are closing in on the intersection with lights. Bette has green lights so she’s driving through, but then she sees it, from the left, her side that a car doesn’t stop. It keeps coming closer and closer.
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Why are you doing this to us AGAIN! You are so cruel, Lauren…*sniffs* Please don’t let Bette go blind. Oh man, what have they done in their past life and they have to suffer that much. Urgh.. you better fix them Lauren! *sobs*… please post soon.
OK, it’s enough already. This family has been through more shit than three other families put together. Drama is good but must it always be life threatening? All this drama. It’s hard for readers to take, lol. Hope your move is easy. Post when you can.
God this family can’t seem to catch a break. At least Bette is not giving up. She has to fight with everything she has to get throught this. At least Andrea is okay. Hopefully you will get a chance to help us deal with this before you are internetless.
you know what – there should be an award for the most number of times that any couple goes through sufferings and hospitals – what is it with you about disasters and hospitals…there must be some fascination about it. how can anyone go through what you have put these family together – you know you should hve just wrap this story up and start a new one – its becoming so predictable.
Couldnt you just get Bette with a really bad flu ? lol damn you had to get her all broken! :P you bad! anyway i love the drama…but dont let her stay blind..and humm maybe this will get Bettes mom back and trying to reconnect?? Post again soon!.
So much drama. I thought we might have something happen but, at least I thought it would be something kinda simple. Not this. Please let her be alright and not blind. That means she probably will not play golf again, right. Oh my goodness. Good chapter overall.
Love you and ur drama!!
Taking the drama queen title from Chicki, are you??? This family can’t seem to get a break. I’m glad Andrea is ok. Hopefully, Bette will come out of this with use of her left arm again and her eyesight back. I love your writing.
How long without Internet?Are you author try out for Queen of Cliffhanger? Can’t believe that this is happening. Hell are you trying to kill everyone.Not you, just the writer. thanks
Drama indeed! Please let Bette be okay. They really can’t anymore more of these bad luck! Congrats on the 200 chapters, by the way.
Hey stranger, What drama you create in this perfect story. Please let Bette recover even if it is a long and slow process because Tina and her family will be there every step of the way. Thank you for this gift, all 200 and odd chapters. Your Loyal Fan.
These 2 have been thru plenty already! Please let Bette be well! Pleaaaaaase!
Lauren!!!! You need to fix this….please??????
Why this is happen to them again, damn drama keep coming to them. Poor Bette this is sad and please let her recover and not blind. OK post soon please, thanks!
Lauren – you are so cruel to your faithfull readers but we love you for it :o)……very nice twist but you better make Bette well again… post sooon
again? why? you want to punish us? why can’t Bette has just a broken arm or leg, well the leg was broken already! but all this lessions? and complicates lessions! please let her get better and won’t go blind! please please!
You sure know how to hit drama right in the face dont cha! .. I mean god damn! How much seriously can one family take?!?, plz make bette be ok, no blindness, no nothing, a lil bump, bruise, scar for some months, but no permanent damage
omfg…make bette recover completely, blind??? no-way bette porter’s gonna handle that jandal…betta fix it lauren.
Why Lauren….why?????