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    Pretty Women, episode 3

    Story written on June 13, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    ‘Bette? Are you in town on business or pleasure?’A Bette + Tina beginning based on ‘Pretty Woman’

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    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     

     

     

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

     

    We see a reshot of Bette and Tina in the car, as Bette urges Tina to drive, we see Bette mumble ‘pretty stiff’as Tina tells her how much she charges an hour, and Tina’s erotic rospons to that mumble. Them we see how Bette clumsily asks Tina to accompany her to her room and Tina’s answer ‘You got it’ (chorus of the Roy Orbison song ‘you got it’)

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Bette and Tina walk towards the entrance of the hotel #

     

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    Pretty Women

     

     

    episode 3

     

     

    Tina caught up with the gorgeous brunette and linked her arm into the other woman’s…

     

    You haven’t told me your name

     

    Bette was still a bit amazed by what she had just done, but at the touch of Tina, something deep inside her soul had bagan to stir… Something she had never felt before…

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    2. 400 bucks? I’d say Bette got a bargain! Great chapter. Your writing style is so unique. It like, infuses thoughts and emotions with external action…it’s really great. I hope you continue soon! :)

    3. You know what’s funny? I just watched “Pretty Woman” a few nights ago all the way through for probably the first time. I was flicking through the guide and was like “OMFG gotta watch!” lol So yeah Bette and Tina keep turning into Richard and Julia on me at times. lmao The bad thing was that I found “pee breaks” in the movie and hopefully I won’t find that here!

    6. Hey Captain, This is so interesting and so close to the first Pretty Woman. Although I find this one so much more entertaining. I can imagine the two of them in this movie. I love all of your stories and can’t wait to read any of them. Waiting patiently (and you know I have no patience at all) for the next update on any one of your stories.

    7. I’m addicted to it. Will you update again very soon and make it as long as possible? I don’t mind reading a 12-paged chapter. Get the ‘hint’? =P

    11. Oh man, I just can’t get enough! I still find it way too short, come on…look at the spacing and gaps, actually it just 2 pages! :p I need more fix *sniffs* LOL… Post soon pleaseeeeee, pretty.

    13. Rest assured that I am throughly enjoying your take on this story. If I led you to believe otherwise, I apologize. You are so right to add their thoughts, something the movie couldn’t do. Thank you for this chapter and I will patiently wait for the others to follow, even though patience is not one of my strongest personality traits.

    15. Gotta admit that the next time I watch the movie I have the feeling its B&T I’ll be thinking about. Can you imagine that version, hey theirs an idea. Love this, keep it coming.

    19. me always looks fwd to you posts and you know i always enjoy it sweet torture…pls keep rollin them coz this time you took freakin long time to post and i was like i have to pm her and remind her she has her FFA buddy waitin up for her to post miss you

    20. arrgghh… I know u’ve written like 4 pages.. but I still can’t have enough of it… this story is great and sooooo CUTE!! Felt tingles everywhere while reading this story… love it so much!! ;)

    23. I am so loving this story! I too caught the movie over the weekend on “Encore.” It’s still one of my all time favorites…My top 3 favorite scenes in this movie are 1. The elevator scene, 2. When kit comes to the hotel and is like “50 bucks grandpa, for 75 the wife can watch” (Lol)3. When Julie Roberts goes to get the necklace and richard closes the lid…love it, love it! I can’t wait to see how you do those scenes! Post soon!

    24. what a nice news! your post it! really really good! What can expect Tina from somebody that her first car was a limo? 400 bucks is nothing! now that they have all the night long i want to see what will happen cause there is a lot of tension between them!

    27. Good chapter. I think I watch Pretty Woman a couple times I don’t remenber but love the movie and now read this I think I’m gonna go buy the movie. Anyway, $400 bucks for all night long with Tina thats cool, and let see what they gonna do all night long. OK post soon please, thanks!

    31. Great chapter and story – it’s like watching the movie. I can the whole time see the scenes for my eyes, but this time with B&T which makes it way better than R. Gere :o)) More please….this is funny and amazing :o))

    35. Can’t you just clone yourself so you have more time to write? Hey, isn’t Richard Gere – yuck, btw! he creepy – the ‘free Tibet’ man? Pretty Woman… Richard Gere… Tibet… TiBette… Coincidence? I think not!*running in circles and breaking out in mad laughter*I’ll be busying my paranoid self with uncovering this Tibetan plot while waiting for another chapter of one of your 3 amazing stories!

    37. OMG! what a great chapter! I was biting my nails! Can’t see Tina as a redhead yet but I know I will. I guess that you’re gonna tease us with this story too, lol, I can’t complain with this one, you got me on the edge of my chair!

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