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Maybe I Miss Your Body (chapter 1)
Maybe I Miss Your Body
Tina’s POV:
"Too bright…" I mumbled, burring my face into the soft pillows. My head hurt like fucking Mardi Gras and I didn’t even bother to open my eyes again. It was way too bright even with them closed.
I’d slept on my arm funny and couldn’t move it, I had to grab it with my other arm and drag it out from under my back. I could already feel the tingly sensation fill the limb, like when your arm falls asleep.
Even the sheets were too rough. Was I wearing a shirt? Pants? Who cared, they wouldn’t stay on long once Bette woke up anyways.
I felt a warm kiss on the side of my neck and a soft voice whispering in my ear.
"Morning, beautiful."
"Too loud…" I grunted in response, getting a mouth full of yuck-tasting pillow. Not my favorite breakfast.
"Oh, that’s right, you went into a drinking frenzy last night." I could almost see Bette’s knowing smirk in my head as she said it. "The Captain is not your friend, Tina."
I rolled over onto my back, squinting against the sunlight, even though the blinds were down and closed.
"Hey, I had a good reason to ‘chill with the captain’ last night. In case you don’t remember, my parents came over for diner." She brushed the tangled hair out of my face. That felt better. I rolled over into her arms, snuggling against her warm body. Okay, I had no pants, but a shirt. Did I get laid?
"Hmm," She let out a little laugh. "I thought your senses were supposed to be heightened with a hangover. Isn’t my pillow too rough?" She slid away, grinning. Nice, Bette, tease the girl with a pounding headache.
"Noooo…warm. Hey, come back here." I whimpered, rolling over to her.
Rolling…………rolling…………rolling………..rolling………where did Bette go?
THUD!
"Ouch. Shit." I held my head as I stood up, taking in my surroundings. Dark windows, blinds down, stuffy old apartment smell, complete with rusty kitchen sink. The furniture was worn and what was once beautiful white carpet was now a sick yellowish color, the fabric missing in clumps and patches on the floor. The walls were plastered with peeling, crumpled ancient wallpaper that had what looked like little sunflowers on it with a brown background. The only light sources available were the 3 undersized windows (currently darkened with mini-blinds), miniature reading light by the bed, and stand-up lamp stationed at the side of the couch.
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(47 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
don’t worry , go ahead, it’s pretty good and interesting. I’m looking forward for the next episode.Keep writing…
Nice start. Let’s see how Tina would win Bette back. =)
Very interesting! Please continue!
nice. Great start it interesting to here everyones point of view
This is a great start. Glad to see that Dana is still alive. Hopefully with Alice’s help Tina will be able to pull herself together and go and win her woman back.
Not to worry, my love . . . this fic is all kinds of kool!!! So, please continue, I’m really excited to see where you take this. Keep it up, LYLAS ;-p
Oh, another thing, I love my Shane and Carmen, so I’m realy lookin’ forward to where you take them . . . LYLAS ;-D
I like the changes you have made and I look forward to where you go next. I like how you are moving each character along and I like the snarky comments from Alice alot and the connection between Dana and Alice and also Tina’s having to deal with herself. You’ve got a good story here – and I want to keep reading it. Please continue.
I like your changes,Sana is still around. Tina is still needing a home and where is the baby. thanks
I already like the beginning!! I hope you continue your story bc you’re doing such a good job with it!!! KEEP IT COMING!!
I like it.Post more.
So happy Dana’s alive – I like your take on the others too
good start keep going
yes please keep writing this one it is getting good and I love it please post soon and it will get even better than it is now
you just keep on writing…enjoying it.
this variation on S3 is interesting and great. keep posting i’m looking forward to read next ep
I’d like to read more of this
Good start. I’d like to read more.
Great start – please continue with this storyline.
Really enjoyed it. Great start.