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When Love Finds You (Part 9)
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“Helena came over last night.” Bette announced at The Planet the next morning
“I was over Dana’s and then Alice’s.” Shane sighed and rubbed the bridge of her nose
“Dana’s? Why?” Tina asked
“Lara left her.” Shane said
Bette and Tina shared startled looks. Jenny looked on in silence, not knowing anything that was going on. Kit came around the corner to hear the rest of the story.
“So that’s why Lara called in today.” Kit said sadly. “She didn’t sound too good over the phone.”
“No, I wouldn’t think so. Helena left Alice because of Dana, and Lara left Dana because of Alice. Notice anyone missing from our table this morning?” Bette asked
“Alice and Dana.” Jenny said
“Yeah, but Helena and Lara aren’t here either. Let’s not jump to any conclusions.” Tina scolded the women
“This is just going to end badly.” Shane smacked the table. “I know Alice and Dana more than I know myself, and I bet you anything that they are together this morning. They’re going to try another relationship, and then they are both going to be devastated and ashamed of themselves when it all goes to hell again.”
“What if it does work out between them?” Kit asked optimistically
“It won’t.” Bette said softly. “They’re best friends, and they think that they can make a relationship work because of it, when in reality that’s the thing that will doom them.”
“They might love each other and have a lust for each other that is undeniable, but I don’t think that its meant to be a long term thing.” Tina said. “They need to realize that they are better off with Helena and Lara and just keeping their friendship platonic.”
“Maybe Kit’s right though guys.” Shane said, hoping that her best friends could be happy together. “Maybe we are all just frustrated about everything that we had to deal with when they broke up last time that we want them to stay only friends. But what if they are meant for each other. What if they could be happy forever? Who are we to judge it?”
“I just don’t think that Alice could handle it again if it failed. It almost killed her last time, and I don’t want to see her go through that again.” Jenny said. “She deserves to be happy.”
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I’m still totally gonna read this but my danish heart won’t let go of Alice and Dana being together :(
You had me at the beginning with helacious, but once danish hooked up I couldn’t go back to helacious… lol
You do such a good job on all the ladies. I coulsd see Gabby being gabby. These four has a lot to work out good luck. thanks
phew! thank you for getting rid of gabby and not keeping al and dane together. please keep going.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww man this chapter was fuhhkin’ terrific!! Tossing Gabby out, by both Alice AND Helena was the fuhhkin’ bomb!!!!!!!!!!! Bravo!! I’m glad that Al & Dane came to their senses. Al got Helena back, cant wait to see how Dane gets Lara. Maybe in a small way, the intervention helped. Cant wait for your next post!!
1st……….brb
No, you didn’t screw up my visual. :D You hate writing those scenes huh? It doesn’t show… So far my comment on that. ;) I felt torn up and frustrated while reading this chapter. I really didn’t know who to cheer for, Dana/Alice, Alice/Helena…? Danish fans are divided on how Danish would have ended up (if Dana hadn’t died…)…you verbalized it very well in this chapter. Are Dana and Alice just two best friends or are they soulmates who are meant to be together? Although I share the last opinion,I think Alice did the right thing by leaving Dana. They just have too much history to establish a healthy relationship again. Now Gabby is out of sight, Helacious can start off and Lard can reconcile (or are they going to be more unexpected twists?).
yes that was great but I don’t know I think that there is still more drama in this one please post soon I love it and great update
Most excellent and enjoyable chapter
Yeah! I so happy that Helena and Alice are together again. Please post soon.
wow….i gotta say i think no one is more right for eachother then alice and dana, but this story played out well and i like the way you’ve gone with it. maybe my danish heart will have to accept helena and alice, but i think thats just fine. great job, i really can’t wait to read more..
Dang–that chapter was quite the rollercoaster ride! I didn’t know what you were going to pull out of your hat… Once again, great job! I think you did the right thing by all of them. But what else is still to come?