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    What Time Reveals Part 20B

    Story written on June 25, 2006 by pandamel.
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    Reggaeton and more tequila!

    Then…

    “Go right ahead Tina, show me how to claim Bette.” Helena took the challenge and threw it down. Tina tilted her head to one side with narrow eyes.

     

    “Don’t come crying to me when I’m fucking Bette later on” Tina boldly stated walking towards the dance floor. Peggy’s eyebrows raised and she merely shook her head.

     

    “There certainly is a lot of dyke drama. Maybe I need to go back to men. Hmmm our bartender is kinda of cute.” Peggy murmured to herself.

     

     Now…

    As Tina walked to the dance floor, another song was being mixed in, Promiscuous by Nelly Furtado started up. Tina found herself easily moving in rhythm. She got to Bette and Jenny and indicated to Bette she wanted to dance. Bette’s face registered shock and she quickly glanced to Helena who seemed to be smirking. Bette frowned and wasn’t quite sure what she missed. Jenny who looked a bit lost, moved from in front of Bette to let Tina take her place, but she was hesitant. If this would have happened a few months ago, she would have immediately moved, but because of all that had transpired since then, she was uncertain what Bette wanted. Bette got a nod from Helena to dance with Tina and Bette knew that something had happened between the two women. Bette adopted the beat quickly and soon had Tina moving around. Unfortunately for Helena and fortunately for Tina, Bette and Tina had been dancing together for years, so drunk or not, Tina was use to Bette moving her body. Tina had her back to Bette and Bette’s hands were on her hips, she was moving Tina’s hips to the beat, but there was still space between them. This was unusual for the two of them, usually there wasn’t enough space for light to get in between. Bette feels a bit awkward, but between the alcohol and the music, she began to loosen up more and more.

     

    Alice and Shane were doing shots of Don Julio when Alice looked up to the dance floor. She immediately began to choke, sputtering about. Shane was whacking her on the back to help clear her wind pipe. Alice finally waved her hands at Shane in self defense to get the lanky brunette to stop whacking at her. Shane stopped and Alice was breathing normal again.

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    1. that was crazy as hell…..i wish i were one of the crowd……shit……at this point…..i wouldnt mind bein helena……lmao….hot hot hot…..thanx for the update….make room for more soon……..

    5. Pandssssssssssssssssss that was hot as hell. I bet Tina could have sunk into the floor. That’s EXACTLY what she gets and deserves for thinking that she could just waltz up to Bette and all would be forgiven / forgotten and they’d be back together…………I can only imagine what’s in store for Helena when they arrive home. Alice – now that’s another story. We ALL know that she and Bette were together for a minute, but with ½ the sh!t that falls from her mouth, one would think they were together for as long as Bette had been with Tina/ Alice needs to get over that sh!t….for real though!…………..As an aside…………azmama, you said “I just loved all the music references. Checked em out on iTunes while I was reading your story.” I’m just curious, how the hell did you have time to read this story, check the songs out on iTunes AND post THAT fast??????????

    7. This was wild! From your detailed and seemingly perfect description, I gather that you’ve experienced this soon to be Olympic sport…tequila body shots.lol. Muy caliente. I just loved all the music references. Checked em out on iTunes while I was reading your story. Great fun….hot, sexy.

    9. Ha, Tina, put THAT in your pipe and smoke it!!! She can just trot that “her love, her soul” @#$! right back where it came from, or to put it another way, with “love” like hers, who needs assassins! I agree with snQQpy…and about Alice too. They dated for a few weeks, right, and then Bette decided it wasn’t right and ended it..the right thing to do when it’s not right…. A few weeks, a bunch of days, and Alice is still bent about it, like they were together for years, and that Bette still owes her something?Who owes anyone anything, or commits their lives, in a few weeks? I am so loving the image of Bette and Helena having at it on the bar, and Tina having to watch..More soon please!! Happy pride to all!!!!!

    10. :O OMG! Pandamel, what are you doing??? Do you wanna kill us? LOL… That was so HOT!!! Bette is the queen of the tequila body shots… hahah “POOR TINA” she doesn’t know what she lost… GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!!

    11. oh..my god..oh..my fucking god…i definitely need an ambulance right now..u were killing me..i can’t handle this so much hot..sexy…crazy thing…u made me want to get out of my office and go straight to a bar and find a woman do the “body shot” damn!!u r a greeeeat writer…thanks..but don’t forget post next chapter SOOOOOOON…

    12. Hey Pands this was what I was waiting for. OMFG you wrote this sooo fucking good I wished I was on that bar getting the body shots from Bette lol. And poor Tina Who??? She can’t get it rubbed in enough seeing what she trowed away like shit. Make her suffer some more please I just love it. Post soon thx.

    14. that was so damn sexy. are you a body shot champion?! it seems like it. anywho, I’m glad Tina is having to watch Sexy passionate Bette with Helena. I think tina seems to always think no matter how badly she treats Bette that she will always have a hold on Bette’s heart…..but we see in this story that is not the case. way to go bette! and helena is in soooo much trouble isn’t she?

    16. wow! pands, you always made me wanting Bette going with Tina at the end of first part :D But that bodyshot with Helena is waaay to hot to resist :P I love how you write :nod:

    18. I really like this story eventhough I’m NOT a Bette/Helena fan. I feel a little sorry for Tina, but at the same time, she can’t just waltz back into Bette’s life whenever she feels like it.

    20. I so want to hangout w/ this Bette Porter. I don’t know where to start. First this is written so well that I actually feel like i’m one of the people at the bar watching this all happen. I don’t know if Alice is lucky for having known Bette during her wild and crazy days or if she should be more terrifed of what Helena and Tina might do when they learn a little more about Bette and Alice’s past together. And Jenny is right Bette doesn’t need to give Shane nay more material to add to her arsenal. After this boody shot Helena is goung to be aching to take Bette back to that limo to be alone and Tina is going to be steaming that she isn’t the one who gets to be alone w/ Bette. This is such a great story! I still want to know about the last Bette was at Tequila Boom and how she ended upin bed w/ 2 random chicks. And will this night end w/ Bette and Helena (i hope so), Bette and Tina (i hope not), Bette and Alice (interesting, but wrong) or Bette plus ??? Can’t wait-so don’t keep us waiting too long. And before i forget I’m making an L Word fan fic mix based on the songs you used in your story-great job (I especially love the LL cool J, Shawna and Shakira tracks).

    22. SEXY VERY SEXY P.Love the whole bar thing,very interestng bring Bette and Alices relationship in 2 the mix,now Helena has 2 woman 2 be worred about.I have a feeling that Helena and Bettes relationship is going 2 get very interesting now .Tina will probably go offher Bette with full force now so let the games begain.Your so fucking amazing P.

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