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A Snap Shot to Love Chapter 12
Chapter 12
At Milk
Bette walked in and turned heads in the club she had not been in since Tina and her had got together. She dressed to impress tonight and by the looks of things she knew that she had picked the right jeans. She saw her friends and went towards their table as they stared at her.
Bette: Hi guys
Shane: Damn Bette you look good.
Alice: Porter I didn’t know you could clean up so well.
Bette: Thanks Shane and Alice not tonight.
Shane: Here Bette we got you a beer.
Bette: Thanks next round is on me.
Alice: Okay Porter the gig is up I knew it was too good to be true what’s up?
Bette: Alice what are you talking about?
Alice: Bette I have been your friend way too long to know that when you offer to buy rounds you have had a bad day or something really great has happen.
Bette: Alice you don’t know shit about me or my moods so just drop it.
Alice: No Bette I want. I want to know why you are at Milk dressed in the second skin jeans that say come fuck me and Tina is nowhere to be found.
Bette: What I can’t go out now without Tina with me?
Shane: Hey guys just let it go for now.
Alice: I would like to know where she is?
Bette: Well that makes two of us.
Alice: What the hell are you talking about Porter?
Shane: Bette don’t worry about it and we are happy that you are here and you don’t have to tell us anything.
Bette: No Shane if motor mouth wants to know about Tina and I maybe I should just tell her. So listen good Alice because I am only saying it once I broke up with Tina she lied to me and that’s all I am saying so deal with it.
Bette turned on her heel and walked away from the table. Bette knew that the gang was in total shock but she was just as shocked as they are at the moment. Bette found some random girl and pulled her on the dance floor as her friends looked on and Bette decided tonight she would live it up.
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(53 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
This is one intense chapter. Now I need to go back to the beginning and catch up. Can’t wait to see what Tina did to make Bette soooo stubborn.
Awww it was so short! Great chapter :)
a very good chapter but tooooooooooo short and let tibette make up before bette does something with no RETURN
awww too short!! and bette is being an ass!!
Ouch! my heart is aching….looking for the next chapter!
short but very very good! i hope read the next soon! Bette need to give Tina the opportunity to explain, everybody makes mistakes!
Good Chapter, even thought Bette is being a ass.
Wow, Bette really fails. You would think she would wise up if her friends think she’s acting like a dumbass.
WOW!!! Great Chapter!!! But way to short. Thank you
alice said it better then any one could… now bette needs to have a long talk with herself… and then kick herself in the ass… please continue soon
Bette just needs to get over her self. That was much too short lingor..
It’s like this Bette – I’m trying to see things from your point of view but I can’t get my head that far up my ass! I love your story L! Can’t wait for more!
Let’s be fair to Bette, she did give Tina 3 chances to explain, Tina declined. Tina could have said I have a family issue and I’ll tell you about it when I get back, that was actually true but instead she fabricated a story. Now that Bette knows she lied this time she could have been lying the other times too. The friends think its just a one time lie, Bette is thinking this is a pattern.
So Bette is digging in; can you blame her? At least she is sure of wht she wants. Now I need to go back and read the previuos chapters and figure out what Tina lied abot. This chapter has me hooked. i love the suspense and drama.
Damn drama coming and this is sad, they need to talk!
bette can be an ass. pls post soon
I am so glad that you clarified that Bette and Tina will be together because this chapter sure does not look good for our ladies. Bette needs to get off her high horse and at least give Tina a chance to explain. Hope you post soon.
I just got caught up on this story and I agree with most that Bette is being an ASS. Yes Biased, Alice did tell Bette that Tina was not great at relationships, but has Bette cared enough to find out why? Bette problem is that she is soooo horny and frustrated that she and Tina have not made love. She is blowing this thing way out of porprtion. It is not as if Tina is cheating on her. She needs to listen to Shane and Alice and find out why Tina lied. Please continue :o)
I thought early on Alice told Bette that Tina is not great at relationships. I think people are being hard on Bette b/c of her actions at MILK. Tina had chances to explain her actions but never did… since you’re a B/T fan I can’t wait for the romance and Tina trying to win Bette back.
I disagree with most, I thinnk this chapter was perfect length. I don’t know why they want a novel each chapter…you keep putting out the chapters at your speed and at your length. I’m enjoying the suspense of this story. I agree that Bette is being a pain but I also feel that she brought some of it on herself. Why hasn’t she taken the time to find out anything about Tina, her past, her family, her lack of relationships. I also think she should give Tina a chance to explain before tossing her to that curb, however, Tina should have been forth coming with some type of information. It will be interesting to see how Tina wins back Bette’s trust. I love you, thanks for the encouragement. 381!
omg what an assholee..sorry Bette but you’re being so fucking selfish right now aahhhh!!!!*getting angry*