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A Thin Line – Chpt 23
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Previously
I removed my fingers and pressed against her clit as her body shook, and trembled, and fluttered, then fell back exhaustedly against the pillows. I wrapped my arms around her and kissed her lips. Then I propped myself up and watched her as her breathing slowed. Her eyes were closed. She lay motionless and spent.
“Helena?” I whispered, caressing her face. “Are you alright, Sweetheart? Look at me.”
When Helena finally opened her eyes, a tear ran out.
I gazed at her in amazement.
“I’m sorry,” she whispered, as she began to weep. “I’ve never felt like this before.”
A long-missed emotion swelled in my chest. I quickly pulled her close to me and held her tightly, caressing her cheek with mine.
“Please, don’t be sorry.”
Chapter 23
I continued to hold Helena as she wept into my neck.
“Sssss-hhhhh. Ssshh-ssshh, sss-hhh, sss-hhh,” I tried to quiet her, and squeezed her closer.
Helena clasped me tightly.
Running my hands through her hair, I whispered to her, “Things have been rather intense with us the last few days. Sss-hhh. It’s okay.” Helena’s quiet sobs began to subside, but still moved me. “Sweetheart, if you don’t stop, you’re going to make me cry too.”
Helena pulled away and rolled over to her nightstand, plucking a tissue from the box setting there.
“And if I cry too,” I said, “then our shower of tears is gonna cause this makeshift beach bed to become wet and damned uncomfortable, with all the sand caking to us.”
Helena laughed at my attempt at humor, as she wiped her eyes and blew her nose. I reached to rub my thumb under both her eyelids, when she lay her head back on the pillow.
“Bette, I’m sorry about my emotional display. You just made me feel so, well, appreciated and cared for,” Helena said. “Being with you makes me so happy. I’ve waited so long for you.”
“Sweetheart,” I cooed.
“God, just look at me. I’m emitting phlegm from my nostrils," she said, wiping her nose one last time and throwing her tissue on the bedside table.
“Well, at least you’re not blowing fire and smoke like that dragon lady I once accused you of being,” I joked.
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1st,,I think…whatever that gets you. brb
zheese…another well written chapter that will transition us with the art showing and Tina Queena. PP is pretty intimidating. Even Bette seemed flustered when Peggy kind of cornered Bette. Who knows what will transpire…only you zheese. There are no guarantees in any relationship.
Man, Bette has all the Peabody women eating out of her hand. So Bette said it out loud and to her lover’s mother. Must be true. But those big, fat bankrolls can’t hurt, either.
I sure hope Helena was just rounding the bend to catch Bette’s offered confession. :) Can’t wait for the drama to commence again at the gallery opening with Tina’s jealous shenanigans. I know it’s wrong to wish ill of anyone, but S3 Tina really is due her cumeuppance. This is strictly my opinion, of course. Bring it on, Zheese!
Forgive me, comeuppance would be the proper spelling. All this sex B&H share is warping my brain.
Wow! Just…..wow! I’m smiling my azz off like it was me that Bette leaned over and was speaking too instead of Momma “Rockafella” Peabody! Can’t wait til Helena hears those words herself. Now…….let’s get to that gallery…………shall we? (insert evil grin here)…………..I hope Tina overhears Bette tell Helena she is falling in love with here (insert ANOTHER evil grin here)!
AWWWWW, bette has found love once again.
Always so pleased to see that you’ve updated, zheese! You’ve personified Peggy so perfectly that it nearly astounds me. I can hear her almost dry voice saying all these words with a purse of her lips and a turn of her nose. Absolutely fabulous- and quite touching with Peggy asking Bette her intentions. I truly enjoy this story, and I thank you for sharing. :)
Brilliant as usual
ditto..brilliant…tres bien.
Thanks for another wonderful chapter! I adore Peggy and the way she’s concerned with her daughter’s welfare at the hands of Bette.
Catching my breath here. You just have to love Peggy. Bette and Helena, gotta say it again as much as I love B&T, these two together, hot is not even a good enough description. Can’t wait for the gallery opening. snQQpy, you are so bad.
love the entrance of Peggy P. Another great chapter.I like seeing B & H proceed cautiously not so many declarations of love.
Thanks for another great chapter zheese. How cute is Peggy asking Bette about her intentions w/ her daughter. I did i read right; did Bette just admit to Peggy that she is in live w/ Helena? that is great; now she just needs to work up the courage to say the words to helena; though i understand the need to move slow and not rush into such heavy feelings having just come off that horrible brek up w/ Tina. Can’t wait for the enxt chapter zheese.
wow Zheese this was so charming once again.L And I’m so happy our girl found love again. Now bring on the drama and give little miss (I wanna hurt you forever’ Tina a piece of her own cake. Thx
Great update….So one Ms Bette Porter is falling for one Helena Peabody…I LOVE IT….Continue on please!
Bette and Helena make a fantastic couple. I think Tina is going to regret going to the gallery. she may see things that will probably put her into a tailspin. Very nice chapter.
wow, Go Peggy!!!! And yes, they’re falling in love…anyways this is a great story and I can’t wait for the next chapter.
Great chapter, as always. Thanks zheese!
Oh how i love this story so!! Love Peggy and her showing concern for Helena’s well being. And absolutely loved Bette’s answer! You’re writing is wonderful, thank you for writing such a beautiful story. Eagerly await the next chapter.