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“The Paths We Forge” – Chapter One
Hotel – Vancouver
Tina ran down the lobby stairs towards the front desk wiping the tears from her eyes. Henry followed close behind her.
“Tina, wait. Tina!”
Tina ignored him and walked up to the front desk clerk.
“Can I help you,” the clerk asked.
Tina wiped her eyes again, smoothed out her dress, and tried to compose herself.
“Yes, I’m Tina Kennard. I need to get the police here right away. My daughter has been taken.”
As the desk clerk picked up the phone, Henry walked up and put his hand on Tina’s shoulder. Just then, Alice and Lara came into the lobby. Lara looked across the lobby and saw Tina and Henry. She tapped Alice and pointed to Tina.
“Alice, isn’t that Tina and Henry? Tina looks like hell.”
Alice looked over.
“Wonder what the hell has her so freaked? Come on.”
Alice and Lara half-ran across the lobby.
“Tina?” Alice asked.
Tina turned and looked at Alice without saying anything. Before Alice could say anything, she heard the desk clerk talking on the phone.
“Yes, we need a police unit here right away. Yes, a possible missing child.”
Alice grabbed Tina.
“Oh my God, oh fuck! What happened to Angelica?”
Tina started to cry again. Henry wrapped his arms around her, pushing Alice back.
“Bette has her. We don’t know where she went. She took her from the sitter and won’t answer her cell phone”, Henry said.
A look of confusion crossed Alice’s face.
“I thought you said she was missing?”
Henry appeared exasperated as he tried to comfort Tina and talk with Alice.
“Didn’t you hear me? Bette has her and we don’t know where she is.”
Alice pushed her way past Henry and grabbed Tina’s shoulders.
“Tina, stop crying. What happened? Why did Bette take off?”
Tina wiped her eyes and tried to focus on Alice.
“We had a fight. It’s a long story, but she’s gone.”
The desk clerk cleared his throat. Everyone looked over at him.
“Excuse me, but the police are on the way.”
Alice turned back to Tina.
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i like it a lot == a great start
I love when Helena understands Bette… great start, I like it!
very nice beginning… i hope to read more…pls post soon. thnx! (‘ ‘,)
oooh this interests me, i can’t wait to read more.
very nice…I’m anxious to here more!
Very good start! Your dialogue was very true to the characters and to the situation, very clean and pared down and focused. Please help Bette find a way out of this. Helena is appealing! Thanks!
very good start. like your style…and i’d like it even more if this turns out to be a b&h super story….looking forward to your next post.
I agree with chocolate child. Loving it so far
great start. I hope to read more soon enough. Anyways I hope Bette comes to her senses and listens to Helena
Great start!! God, sometimes men can be so pushy!!! Thanks, looking forward to the next chapter!
Wow great start, I can’t wait for more…
OK i’m hooked – what a great start! looking forward to your next post!
Great start! Sounds exciting but not too OTT.
Yay! I can already tell this will be another good Bette/Helena story. Great start
Henry can really work a nerve and Tina is frantic right now not thinking straight…glad Helena to the rescue