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    “The Paths We Forge” – Chapter One

    Hotel – Vancouver

     

    Tina ran down the lobby stairs towards the front desk wiping the tears from her eyes.  Henry followed close behind her.

     

    “Tina, wait.  Tina!”

     

    Tina ignored him and walked up to the front desk clerk.

     

    “Can I help you,” the clerk asked.

     

    Tina wiped her eyes again, smoothed out her dress, and tried to compose herself.

     

    “Yes, I’m Tina Kennard.  I need to get the police here right away.  My daughter has been taken.”

     

    As the desk clerk picked up the phone, Henry walked up and put his hand on Tina’s shoulder.  Just then, Alice and Lara came into the lobby.  Lara looked across the lobby and saw Tina and Henry.  She tapped Alice and pointed to Tina.

     

    “Alice, isn’t that Tina and Henry?  Tina looks like hell.”

     

    Alice looked over. 

     

    “Wonder what the hell has her so freaked?  Come on.”

     

    Alice and Lara half-ran across the lobby.

     

    “Tina?” Alice asked.

     

    Tina turned and looked at Alice without saying anything.  Before Alice could say anything, she heard the desk clerk talking on the phone.

     

    “Yes, we need a police unit here right away.  Yes, a possible missing child.”

     

    Alice grabbed Tina.

     

    “Oh my God, oh fuck!  What happened to Angelica?”

     

    Tina started to cry again.  Henry wrapped his arms around her, pushing Alice back.

     

    “Bette has her.  We don’t know where she went.  She took her from the sitter and won’t answer her cell phone”, Henry said.

     

    A look of confusion crossed Alice’s face.

     

    “I thought you said she was missing?”

     

    Henry appeared exasperated as he tried to comfort Tina and talk with Alice.

     

    “Didn’t you hear me?  Bette has her and we don’t know where she is.”

     

    Alice pushed her way past Henry and grabbed Tina’s shoulders.

     

    “Tina, stop crying.  What happened?  Why did Bette take off?”

     

    Tina wiped her eyes and tried to focus on Alice.

     

    “We had a fight.  It’s a long story, but she’s gone.”

     

    The desk clerk cleared his throat.  Everyone looked over at him.

     

    “Excuse me, but the police are on the way.”

     

    Alice turned back to Tina.

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    Comments

    1. Very good start! Your dialogue was very true to the characters and to the situation, very clean and pared down and focused. Please help Bette find a way out of this. Helena is appealing! Thanks!

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