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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 8
A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 8
SUNDAY MORNING
Derek Stevenson had just finished getting ready when the phone rang.
Derek: "Hello. Derek Stevenson."
Tina: "Hi Derek I hope I didn’t wake you."
Derek: "Hey Tina. No I’ve been up for awhile. Did Eli fill you in on Kate being sick?"
Tina: "He did. I’m so sorry I hope Kate is feeling better soon. I know she was looking forward to doing some serious shopping with Sara."
Tina’s last comment made Derek cringe.
Derek: "God don’t remind me. Just hearing that makes my wallet feel lighter."
Tina: "I’m sure it won’t be that bad. I was hoping to talk to you about Eli."
Derek: "Sure what’s up?"
Tina: "I’m not sure if you know this or not but I used to live in L.A. and I still have some family that lives there. Eli was hoping to spend some time with them, one person in particular. Her name is Bette Porter and they had arranged to meet for breakfast this morning. I just wanted to give you a heads up that it’s okay for Eli to go with her."
Derek: "Sure. It shouldn’t be a problem. I’m just happy that Eli will be able to get to see more of L.A. and a chance to see some family."
Tina: "Yeah I’m pretty happy that he’ll get to meet them, they’re really great. Listen Derek I was able to talk to Bette last night and filled her in on Kate being sick and she’s offered to take the kids off your hands and show them around. I told her I’d have to talk to you first to see if Sara could join them."
Derek: "Yeah that would be great. I was feeling really guilty about keeping the kids cooped up in the hotel."
Tina: "Don’t worry about it these things happen, and I completely understand you wanting to stay close to Kate."
Derek: "I’m sure you wanna talk to Eli so I’m going to go get him for you…Hey Eli you have a phone call."
Eli: "Hi mom?"
Tina: "Yeah it’s me honey. Did you get enough sleep last night?"
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(50 votes, average: 3.70 out of 5)
Good Post.
I love this story…and have I mentioned Eli is my daughter….9 going 30. thanks for the update
This story ROCKS!
WOW!!! GREAT CHAPTER. Please keep this story going it is just great.
I hope the gang doesn’t scare him off. lol
Tina will need to explain to Bette why Eli has the Porter name. Maybe Tina is ready to come home to LA. love this story Eli is a very cool kid thanks
MORE!! :D I’m LOVING this story :D more more more plz :D If u can manage it :D
Tina has given a very difficult task for Bette, as I am pretty sure its hard for the girls not to STARE Eli…they might even break into tears when they see him. lol… really love this story, can’t wait for more :)
Awesome once again–can’t wait for the next post to see how the meeting with the L.A. family goes and ultimately when Bette and Tina reconnect in person!
wonderful…can’t wait for tina to come for visit
too much, especially the headmaster Britton, what made you think of that, i nearly choked cuz it’s my dad’s surname…please post soon, i love eli and i can’t wait for Bette and Tina to hook up!!!!!!!!!!!bet it’s magic, hot and overwhelming!!!! betta be.
Grewat chapter, can’t wait for the B&T meeting… BTW, nice reference to Gilmore girls!!! Post soon please!!
i love your story! please post again soon! moooooooooooore! =)
Eli Porter Kennard! i am spechless! Tina is so in love with Bette! i hope they can find a way to be together! this is an amazing story you always let me wanting more!
Did Tina use Marcus’ sperm?
Can we clone Eli??? Great chapter… please post when you can …. soon???Thank you!!!!
Hey Girl, i am always pleasantly surprised to see your new post and reading it makes me want more. I really enjoy it, so keep it coming.
THIS IS SO GOOOOD!!!!!!!!!
Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to post this chapter. It is going to be very interesting when the girls meet Eli. I guess Bette is pretty stunned to find out that Eli has her last name. Can’t wait to read the reaction that both Bette and Tina have when they see each other and realize that neither has really moved on. Hope the professor lets up some so that you can continue to post this story.
I really like where this story is going, I think, just please don’t let anything bad happen to any of them. I do seriously hope that you are a HUGE TiBette fan and will only let good things happen. okay? Love your story.
I really like where this story is going! Keep up the good work dude ;)