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The Long and Winding Road chp 27
The Long and Winding Road Chapter 27
“I rang the hospital – I’ve got the all clear Bette “
Bette got up and she crossed to Tina — they embraced.
Tina’s eyes were sparkling with happiness
“You know what this means ? “ she whispered
“I do “
“Apart from that – it means we can make love tonight “
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Bette smiled at Tina who was in the kitchen cooking something that smelt like it had been made for the Gods . When Tina had arrived home and told her that she had been given the all clear she had felt like her life had got a lot brighter.
Added to that was Helena’s offer about doing some digging into the lives of the two men that where candidates for the title “ daddy “. Bette felt more positive than ever about her future with Tina and their growing family.
Helena had stayed and chatted to the lovers for a while but she had seen their need to be alone. They had talked for a while wrapped in one another’s arms until Tina had decreed that Bette needed to rest while she got on cooking something special to celebrate the good news
Tina had been changed – she had swapped her dark business suit for a white cotton dress which was see-through from where Bette stood – she could see that Tina was naked underneath the thin dress.
“Whatever that is — it smells wonderful “
Tina turned and gave her the most loving smile to Bette.
“Hey sweetie – yeah – it’s a new recipe that Helena gave me. Its chicken curry with green mangos and vegetable samosas “
“Oh babe – I just fell that little bit deeper for you “
“Ah – my cooking can still win your heart ? “
“You have no idea how much T “
Bette pulled Tina into her arms and gently their lips met. When she ended the kiss Bette placed an envelope into Tina’s hand.
“What’s this ? “
“”Open it “
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(35 votes, average: 4.34 out of 5)
Only you, ally, have the ability of showing B & T’s sheer devotion to one another. Beautiful!
Great chapter mate!
Just great!
just what I needed on my lunch break – a great portion of Bette and Tina loving, thanks Ally!
thanks ally… keep them both coming… i love both stories… and just so you know i can’t always comment… esp when i read at work… but i am always reading… later babe
Yay, well done as usual!
sweet, and tender, great stuff but what’s the surprise??????????? trust you to leave us hanging…great stuff, great writer.
Thanks, Ally!! It’s all going to hit home sooner than we like. : ) nice chapter
hhhmmm…that’s what we need more loving..in this world full of angts we need more chapters like this,Good job Ally…BTW: love veg.samosa and mango salsa
Not Cool. First you make us wait for the next chapter and then you leave us hanging like that. I will be sitting on the edge of my seat wondering what the bid surprise is. Great Chapter.
Hope you are doing better. Great chapter AllyE. Just what we needed to see and what is the great surprise. Can hardly wait.
You do such a wonderful job on these two. The love that they share you make it shine, thanks
I’m loving your story.
sweet Ally
I saw you post your story on while i was surfin on my phone and jus the rating made me wait till i got home..I jus wanted to relish and enjoy it and you so freakin made it worth the wait..only you ally can show how much one can be in love with their soulmatehats off mate
chicken curry with green mangos and samosas? ummmmmmm… (sorry was very hungry when i read this:)
My first thought was the surprise was twins. O.o But I think it’s a proposal.
“… a sexual nirvana …” …Hummmm, smells like Tina Spirit!
Nevermind…
*Happy sigh*. Thanks for posting. I needed that! Can’t wait to find out about the surprise.
Ally, this chapter was really sweet. Bette is a really special person for tina. =)
The stuff romance is made of….
It is nice to see how much love that Bette and Tina share for each other through thick and thin. Can’t wait to see what Tina has up her sleeves.
amazing! you have a really good style to write this! you are sooooo good!
Oh no a cliffy! So is the surprise a proposal or twins?
This was….well, I have no words for it. Except thank you.
Damn this is awesome and love it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey Ally, Once again you show us how it all should be done. How you capture genuine emotion and realistic conversations is masterful. I adore this tender trysts between Bette and Tina. These unions lets us see how good these gals are together. It is the gentlest of touch, sweet words of seduction and minute ministrations that bring everything to its peak and allow me to bask in the glory. Thank you so much for this fabulous fan fiction. Now on to the surprise: twins… Can’t wait. Your Loyal Fan.
Awesome chapter, Ally! Thanks ^_^ Can’t wait to see what the surprise is …
TiBette forever!!!!! thanks
WAY TO GO ALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT QUIT BEING A TEASE,OH WAIT A MINUTE WOMEN LOVE BEING TEASE!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP IT CUMING WOMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!