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A Leap Of Faith (Chapter 5)
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Chapter 5:
Previously…
As Dana leaned her head back against the doorframe, she heard footsteps making their way across the floor; thinking it might be Alice again, Dana straightened her clothes, ready to announce her intentions, but when the mysterious visitor came round the corner, the expression on the athlete’s face changed dramatically, her heart dropped and she only hoped that the reaction wasn’t evident on her features…
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“Pookie!” shrieked Tonya, “Where have you been?! I’ve missed you! Oh I can’t tell you how much I’ve done with these sponsors, you are gonna be huge, I mean we’re talking big money now!!!”
Dana felt the energy seep out of her, but she forced a smile despite her disappointment…
Through gritted teeth Dana replied in the most upbeat tone she could master “Ton… you’re home early. How’s things? That’s great -”
Tonya: (interrupting) Well I wanted to come home early! I wanted to surprise you… aren’t you surprised? Oh we’ve got so much to go through… I’ve got forms for you to sign; photo shoots to book you into, merchandise for you to model…
Dana: Ton, stop… please, just for a minute?
Tonya: And not to mention prospective interviews! There’s just so much – what? What’s wrong? You don’t look so good; sweetie… do you want me to make you a health shake? We have to have you on top form for all this upcoming publicity!
Dana: No seriously Ton, just stop. We have to talk…
Tonya: Oh my God, you think it’s too much… well don’t worry, we can pick and choose what we like, depending on your schedule, I promise I won’t let you get overworked, I’m here to look out for you too, remember…?
Dana (shouting) TONYA STOP! I mean, stop… this isn’t going to work.
Tonya: But I’ve already explained, you don’t have to do anything that will put too much strain on you –
Dana: No that’s not what I mean…
Tonya narrowed her eyes “I don’t understand… What are you saying?” Dana let her gaze fall to the floor, “I mean us… it’s not going to work anymore… I don’t want you -”
Tonya: As a manager?
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Yay Dana got her ass into gear, about time Dana!! Psycho Tonya has got more planned though right? :( Post soon xx
Hell Yeah! Not only did you update, but you also gave this chapter a happy Danish ending;) But something tells me that Tonya isn’t going to let it stay that way for long (uh,oh) Anyways, as always, can’t wait for the next update! Hope it’ll be sooner than last time:)
Typically Tonya, kicking Dana out of Dana’s house…But hey, it did get Dana on the streets and ending up at Alice’s door. :) I didn’t think Dana would have the guts…but she did!! 4 A.M. rules! If I don’t mention the T-word….maybe you just forget that she actually plays a part in this whole story…just maybe (*wishfull thinking*). ;)
I liked it. Tonya sucks. Is it even legal what she did??? post soon
damn right! Man, Tonya is a scary psycho bitch. I hope she gets hers. But all thats matters anyway is Alice and Dana. I’m glad she finally realized it. Great update, Ican’t wait to see what happens next!
Dana should’ve called the cops on Tonya. The law was totally on her side. But looks like it might all work out for the better. Please post soon.
YAY! This update made me so fucking happy! Then again, happy Danish always makes me happy!
love it! thanks for the update. looking forward to the next one.
:jumps up and down: wowwww lol ok ok i know this is an old post but im just starting here to catch up after my … “disappearance” lol but yeah anyhow haha that TOnya has got some balls, but i loved it and now im on to the next chap :)