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    Pretty Women, episode 4

    Story written on July 9, 2006 by justloveB+T.
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    the alpha female giving up control… A Bette and Tina beginning based on the movie ‘pretty woman’

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    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

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      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot of Bette and Tina in the penthouse, as Bette offers Tina a strawberry… And then we hear Bette utter ‘What do you charge for the whole night…’ And after Tina answers how much it will cost, Bette exclaims ‘Done! Now that we have the whole night… We can relax…’

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    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Bette and Tina in the penthouse, Tina is lying on the floor, watching an old movie, Bette is sitting on the couch, reading faxes and other messages #

    The song ‘Hungry eyes’ by Eric Carmen starts playing.

     

     

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    Pretty women, episode 4

     

     

    Tina Kennard felt the softness of the expensive carpet underneath her and still felt like every moment she could wake up from this wonderfull dream. When she glanced aside and saw the gorgeous brunette, concentrated on those countless pieces of papers, her heart jumped. She tried to reprimand herself, but somehow the message got lost when she saw Bette’s lips move simultaneous with the eyes behind the glasses that looked so incredibly sexy on her. Allthough Tina had liked watching the movie till now, suddenly she wasn’t sure what it was about anymore, and her mouth had gone dry… Her heart was pounding heavily when, at once, chocolate brown eyes looked directly into hers, catching her stare. She looked away instantly, trying to act as if nothing had happened, but she felt Bette’s beautifull eyes rest on her now… Uncomfortable, the redhead laughed at something that happened on the screen she couldn’t concentrate on. She tried to breath in and out calmly, soothing herself, but soon the motion became one of panting…

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    5. Why, Capt. Mom, are you actually going to write an NC-17 before you reach the 100th chapter? Hmmm, I’ll believe it when I see it with my own two eyes and not a moment sooner… :PSeriously though, thanks! I know time is a scarcity for you right now.

    7. Damn right, it’s still way too short!!! Lol… Don’t you know my addiction is getting deeper? Man, I missed this story so much, I need more fix… *sniffs* more please I WANT MORE. LOL.. thanks for updating, it’s brilliant. :)

    9. I loved it, each time i read one of your stories i think tha it is my favourite then you write a chapter for a different one and i change my mind, so i think the solution is to just write more of all of them ;) oh and i am sure we can come to some arrangement for riders. what are your terms?

    14. Jeej! glad you’re back and with a great and teasing chapter! I’ll wait patiently for more because your updates are worthy! I couldn’t picture Tina as a redhead, never see that coming! thank you!

    15. hello there!!! you did it! another great post! of course i like it! i like it so much! Then the red hair was fake! B&T are falling in love and they don’t care! take care!

    20. I know that your life is really crazy right now but can you put me out of my misery and post soon. I can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

    21. I think you forgot a page, Ms. Tease. =p I woke up today hoping you’d post a chapter on something being the weekend and all. *does a happy dance*

    24. B+T..how could you do that? Torture. Teasing us..who do you think you are huh?IC. Anyways i’m enjoying this story, something very different from the usual B&T stories(all wonderful). I can’t wait to read what happens next..i bet they’ll kiss.great job as usual.

    26. Sorry – I have been gone so long…but you know how it is when you don’t have enought time in a day :o) – just been doing some catching up on you amazing story – love the twist you made on the movie…keep going and I’ll find the time to comment.

    28. I’ve always found Tina cute, but not sexy. But you make her sexy. I really like this story. Looking forward to Bette giving up control. Since Tina is experienced, I hope she does some really “fun” stuff to Bette.

    29. Wow… wow… wow… yes… tingles!! And hot!! I bet I’m just gonna melt when they’d finally make love :D oh yea, when r u gonna do any NC-17 in any of ur stories? ;)

    32. Girl, girl, girl, what are you doing with me. You’re making me wet and then you stop, why teasing me so much. Dit is een geweldige story, echt waar, qua verleiding ben jij de beste auteur hier on the board, ik meen dat uit de grond van mijn hart. Wacht asjeblieft niet te lang met het vervolg schat.

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