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Tina, Tiny Pieces Chapter 22 – Part 1
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At Tina and Henry’s, late Thursday evening
I shiver in delight as her velvety tongue traces a sweet, slightly moist path up my neck. I draw my arms, already encircling her back, tighter, pressing her naked body closer to me. I am lost in the feel of her skin, hot and tender, against my own. I am enveloped in her, reveling in the weight of her, in the nearness of her, once again. I whisper heavily, harshly, in her ear
Bette.
She murmurs.
Mmmmmm.
I whimper breathily.
Bette, baby, please.
She is planting tiny kisses along my jaw, occasionally nipping at my earlobe. I moan softly.
Her hands rest gracefully on my hips. I grip one, pushing it gently as I shift my hips, sliding slightly so she is no longer directly on top of me. I guide her hand, my hips now beginning to lift upward, spreading my legs a little wider.
She stops kissing me, her arm grows rigid, she flexes her fingers and then curls them into a fist. I cannot maneuver her arm. Although I am desperate, I giggle, allowing her a moment to tease, to play. I grip her wrist tighter, I try again – without success – to push her hand down.
Bette.
I can hear the frustration seep into my voice. I grit my teeth. I push upward, grinding my hips a little harder, giving her a more insistent hint. She remains unyielding, her head just below mine, her mouth closed. I release her hand, I touch her shoulder. I whisper, louder now.
Hey you…
She looks at me, shifting her weight so we are eye to eye. She smiles. I take this to mean she has accepted my entreaty, that the game is over… I catch her wrist once more. She shakes her head, she emits that low, throaty chuckle that never fails to turn me on.
Come on, Bette. Enough of the playing around.
I yank her wrist impatiently, I awkwardly spread my legs wider. This is no longer sensual or sexy, it’s ungainly and full of need. She remains unmoved. She smiles again as she speaks, as she shakes her head nearly imperceptibly, her voice warm yet somehow flat and lifeless.
You must be dreaming, baby.
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Okay…everyone is losing their minds…send Angelica to live with Kit…lol…good story!
like what your style; but oh chryst do they all have to go crazy???? I guess so b4 they can get back to some semblance of who they were/are…death is hard enuff but betrayal is crucifying……
God that was amazing! I’m off to read the other two chapter!!
Excellent chapter again, Kid……Denial vs. truth, reality vs. dreams, want vs. fulfillment, guilt vs. innocence and doubt vs. certainty. They are all struggling with these issues and in varying degrees, each trying to find secure footing on their shifting emotional landscape……Tina has escaped to the safety of dreams where she can articulate and feel what she can’t or is afraid to in reality. There is a tentative want that she is exploring and a denial about the truth of her actions in how she treated Bette. The need to feel fulfilled by punishing Bette straddles the razor thin line of doubt that by doing so she will ever truly believe that she has made Bette pay enough pennance for her betrayal……Bette on the other hand doesn’t deny the truth about her initial part in their demise, but she questions the reality of whether or not she its fair to make her pay such a price for the dreams of a family that she once had. Her want for a family and the fulfillment of that dream have her wrestling with her own reality and unresolved anger towards Tina. Her guilt over the affair with Candace is real, but so is the innocence she stridetly points out to Tina when it comes to Tina’s inner bitch (by the way, I love that). She can yell and scream about putting up and shutting up, but the truth is that her reality won’t let her because she wants to be certain not to lose the chance to have Angelica……Alice and Arden are doubting the believeability of what’s portrayed in a movie verus the reality of the content and the certainty of the message. How innocent are they with each other, their newly blossoming romance. I suspect that there is just a bit of guilt that Alice feels, like she may be betraying Dana in some small way. But want and the need to be fulfilled will hopefully win out…..They all have demons of some kind and they are all beginning to take baby steps towards examining what motivates their behaviors, what triggers still need to be vanquished and how to move about in a world where reality and fantasy often come face to face with each other. On to the next chapter!!
I decided to read all the chapters and then comment; but then, just as confused Tina, I changed my mind and decided to comment after each chapter. Tina really should wake up from her dream and smell the aroma of some foul azz coffee. It’s been how long, and she still can’t say the name Candace? I’ll be so damned glad when Tina starts looking at reality as it is and stop forever dreaming about what used to be. At this stage of things, I can’t see them even starting over. As Bette said, “she wouldn’t marry me…” There are so many things that had gone horribly wrong with them, yet it seems as though it wasn’t so bad (from my perspective) for Tina to go out of her way to break Bette down. I guess the upside to that is Tina being broken herself now. On to the next one….
Loved it. i’ll come back with more words, i’m speechless right now.Great job, of captivating emotions.
by the way, i’m not opposed to a B&T reunion(tibetter), but by the way things are going, i’d say BOTh of them need to get it together. Boy, oh Boy this story is good, on to next chapter.
Intense dreaming. On to the next chapter!
LK…this is too painful for my little brain. They are batshit crazy. But great writing.
Whoa~~~ Three chapters in a row! Ok, maybe not three chapter, but three parts of a chapter, but still! That’s why it’s shining outside. =)
Humbly bows to your story… sometimes you have to totally lose yourself to be able to find happiness… thank you! Your writing is amazing!
Sing it, Tina (Turner),..”You’re simply the best. Better than all the rest…”
tina is going crazy, bette is talking to ilene and i have no idea what alice is doing…off to the next 2 parts