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***Latin Business… or something else??*** –Chapter29.3
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Previously…(Chapter29.1)
Their lips merged together and she was sure she’d burst of love, the burning in her heart almost too much, but she couldn’t pull back, her body took over her mind. Marisol responded to the kiss tilting her head to the right and parting her lips to give Isabel access, and just as Isabel cupped Marisol’s face to deepen the kiss…
…‘What happened last night? Right! The gay club… And Bette did it great… Hum… “Let go of me”, sounds familiar… Right!That’s what I said before I kissed Isabel and she brought me here, yeah. Alice was pretty dru—’
“Oh my fucking God! I kissed Isa!” Marisol said out loud before her eyes fluttered open with the sudden realization
TBC…
Chapter29.3 : Bring it up or not?
*Conversations and thoughts translated*
When she finally realized of the weight of her words, Marisol didn’t know what to do, she stood still in the shower, the water running down her toned body.
‘What the fuck am I going to do? Why did I have to kiss her?!’ she admonished herself. ‘I have to tell her I didn’t mean to.. I didn’t mean it, did I? Oh my God! Did I want to kiss her? Wait.’ She started replaying the actions of last night in her head ‘We were drinking, after that, we danced, we kept drinking, Bette and Tina left, we kept drinking… uh, she brought me to Dana’s car’ A smile crossed her lips as she remembered how caring Isabel had been with her, but as soon as it came, the smile turned into a frown ‘What? I can’t possibly be… I mean you don’t think I’m— am I? No! It can’t be! I’m not gay, I’ve never been attracted to women before’ She continued with the replaying of the events ‘I almost fell off the car, she got me…’ She thought and , when she remembered her words prior to the kiss, again, it hit her ‘I started it!! Oh my fucking God! I started it! But… she did leaned closer to me, yeah! She came closer to me!!!’She reasoned ‘Yeah but you completed the kiss when she was going to pull back’ her little inner voice told her. She brought her index and middle fingers to her lips and remembered their lips pressed against each other’s. It had felt so right, so… perfect. ‘Wait, right? Perfect?! What’s happening to me? I need to talk to her. Wait, does she remember any of last night? I hope not. But what if she does but doesn’t want me to be uncomfortable? I mean, Isa would do that, she’s that considerate. And what does she think about the kiss… Maybe she thinks it was a silliness, I mean I was pretty drunk last night. Yeah, it was a silliness, yeah, I’ll tell her that…’
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Wah wah wah…(Oscar’s response) Was Oscar really saying that? If so that really cracks me up! It reminds me of Charlie Brown’s teacher. xD Ooooo and steamy B&T is always welcome. ;)
well to be honest, I really on read stories for Bette and Tina content, or a little bit of Alice/Shane/Helena/Carmen/Kit/Helena and mmmmmmmmm Lara, love me some Lara, even Candybabe!!!!lmao so I just scanned thisand will wait for some B & T thanks….
Damn this is sad and hope they will talk, what the hell is Oscars response, wah wah wah thats funny. Ok now let see B&T next, post soon please, thanks!
Well, I for one LOVE the I&M and thank you for it. Bette and Tina are my favorite, but it is nice to read about others that are not Shane, Alice, or Dana. To read about I’s struggle with her feeling for M is greast, and you write it so beautifully. So please continue with I&M. Looking forward to B&T with a little mix of I&M hopefully.
Isa needs to talk to Bette. Bette can help her out with some advice. This chapter was heartbreaking. Hopefully they can work out their attraction and stop the hurt. Love some steamy B&T.
I love I&M (maybe not as much as B&T but what do you expect?) you write with such feeling. I hope they can get over their confusion, hurt and pride and be happy together soon. Can’t wait for more, and B&T hotness is always appreciated!
i put my finger on it again! they need to talk! and try to put clear some thought, good chapter, looking for the next. take care
Hey, I haven’t read or commented the last couple of weeks, but belief me it’s not because I didn’t wanted to. But I’m back now, have just been catching up and all I can say is…..WOW, WOW AND MORE WOW. I’m totally speechless, you write NC-17’s like a expert. It’s so fucking hot and sexy, that I need a very cold shower now LOL. I normally never read about other couples than B&T, but I must admit I really like yours I&M. They are very sweet, but stubborn!!! Please keep posting, I’m addicted :o))
BTW I hope Tina hears about the bet from Bette and not Alice!!!!
hi little Isabel, I love this chapter and eventhough we didn’t talk about what might happen between I/M, you write what I was thinking about them, because it’s pretty weird that kind of kiss and I totally understand both reactions.Good job! And post soon!Beijo grande! from AOBNTOF. See ya KIDDO!