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Danish: From Beginning to End (Episode 13)
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EPISODE 13- DANISH: FROM BEGINNING TO END
“Ah, episode 13. Does anyone else have a bad feeling about the number 13? I mean, I’m not really superstitious, but the number 13 creeps me out. Call me crazy. In fact, if you do, you can join the ‘I think Al is crazy’ club. God knows there’s one out there.
“At least I’ve sort of cut back on the medication, right?”
A few weeks later, Alice was at The Planet with Tina, Shane, and Helena. Dana was out for a run, and Alice had gone to The Planet to get some work done. Not knowing that some of the group would be there since it was after their normal meeting time, Alice was pleasantly surprised to find a distraction from work and her thoughts.
The entire past few weeks, Alice and Dana had begun bickering at each other over little things, and Alice was having a hard time concentrating on her work. Dana had gone for a run to also clear her head and try to figure out why she and Alice had been fighting so much.
The small argument over the strap-on seemed to have a snowball effect on the couple. They continued to argue over small things, those small things turning into bigger things. They fought over everything from Alice leaving some dirty dishes in Dana’s sink when the dishwasher was empty not even two feet away, to Alice being angry at Dana for not getting things with Tonya completely resolved until she finally called the lawyers herself when Tonya continues to call, that of course sparking a whole other argument.
“Alice!” Shane snapped her fingers in front of Alice’s face
“Sorry Shane.” Alice sent an apologetic smile at Shane as she tried to focus on her friends in front of her
“Are you ok Alice?” Helena asked, concern written on her face
“I’m fine.” Alice tried to look convincing
“Al, you’re a million miles away.” Tina placed her hand on Alice’s arm. “What’s going on?”
Alice sighed. “Dana and I have just been fighting a lot.”
“What?” Shane asked, surprised. “You guys seem fine.”
“Yeah, when we’re with everyone.” Alice pouted and dropped her head onto the table. “I think the honeymoon stage is over.” She said, her voice muffled
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The beginning of the end….the title freaked me out eventhough I knew it was coming! You write them so well, and deep down I’m still hoping for a happy ending (but that’s just me) thanks.
Oh my god poopy…damn. It just keeps getting better and better. And that line… ” I fucking hate you because I can’t stop loving you.” omg..it’s just so emotional. I was wondering when Dana would come into the picture again, secretly hoping for it. Damn that Lara Perkins. I never liked her much anyway, except for recently towards the end of the third season. But even still, I feel for Alice. I can’t wait for more of the story to be unraveled. Please update soon, this has to be one of my favorite stories ever!
i love how you leave fantastic cliffhangers. damn. fucking dana, she’ll get hers.
*sighs* As much as I would like to, I can’t hate Lara. I hate that she took Dana away from Alice, but I can’t hate her. She amuses me. Aw, I loved the ending, though. I love the whole ‘glimer of hope’ aspect of it, because you know us Danish readers. We just can’t get enough! Oh, and I finally figured out why I love this story so much. It’s liek the same stuff we know is goign to happen, but you put a different twist on it. I think that’s it, it’s kind of hard to explain, lol. Post more soon, I’ll be waiting!
HOLY SHAT POOPY ONE..this chapter was perfection. it was everything i’ve ever asked for. My god you had my in tears by the end. I feel so badly for alice. Glad you took my idea and let dana come to the studio. so..is your next chappy gonna start with the continuation of this one..like back in the studio with dana hugging alice. Oh man that line got to me so bad ” i hate you, i hate you because i can’t stop loving you” my jesus! i get goosebumps. Anywhooo, as soon as the mentioning of lara came up i was like ” NOOOOOOOO” lol. well i love this story poopy one. It is heartbreaking, yet beautifully written. keep this up poopster, i will ALWAYS be reading.
real quick, i just wanted to say, in my opinion, that i think Dana has it the hardest. I mean she is heartbroken over doing what she did to alice. I feel that in life, you can have two people that you absolutely love in this world. Like dana has with alice and both lara. But i feel that even though you can have to loves in your life, there is only one great love. And that is what dana had with alice, which is why she should have never let her go. Just my two cents.
That “L” word gets me every time … Lara – grrrr…
i hate you because i cant stop loving you…yeah, been there. ah alice…post more SOON!
Great update…loved that Kit busted them. Really hot. Thanks for leaving us with just a glimmer of hope at the end of this one!
I don’t know how many times I’m going to have to say this but ‘Damn fucking Soup Chef!!!’ I was totally with Alice on that one lol… grrrr! Well I was dreading these chapters but you write so beautifully that I am enjoying them lots anyway! Seriously, Kit and the Dana/Alice encounter made me laugh out loud, and that was a beautiful touch at the end… poor Alice she’s so torn but yet there’s still hope which is what we all cling to :) thank-you for the update, it was so amazing, as always you rock, can’t wait for more :) x
Yay,you updated! I loved this chapter, allthough I’m still really dreading the breakup. But you left off with a glimpse of hope:) So, please update again, soon!
God that chapter was well written Poopy!!. It was good to hear Alice lettin it all out and tellin Dana what she felt. The ending was good… but we all know whats around the corner! Dont we? Post soon. Thanks.
Fucking Fantastic Poopy! I love it that you let them keep going at it even with Kit banging on the door! So hilarious. Yeah…Lara sucks…but she’s a nessecary evil.Nice touch at the end babe. I am glad that Dana didn’t leave her. But wow…that was sad…”I hate you because I can’t stop loving you.” Have I told you that you are fucking awesome!?! Ok just checking. Glad you updated…I was getting worried. LOL. NO I am kidding. I love you babe and and just wanted to say that this chapter was brilliant! Looking forward to your update. Later poopy :-D
Oh man. I loved this chapter, Please post soon!
Yes, Danish and bathrooms are inseperable. And there seems to be a Danish vocabulary/’language’ (forgetting the fact there actually are Danish speaking people out there). To begin with your screen name, but also ‘popping veins’,’swagger’ and the ones we are heading to ‘smother’ and the song ‘Whether you fall’. I was so suprised at the end…I never would have guessed Dana would be visiting Alice at the studio. It was really heartbreaking. And to know there will be a lot of more heartbreaking moments in the next chapter(S)…but I will keep loving this fic! :D And I’m still really curious where this story is heading in ‘real time’.
Ah you’re twisting my heart but I’m loving every second of it. Keep it up.
Hey Poopy-One, finally caught up on your fics. Brilliant! Now I’ll need to hang with everyone else for your next post. :)
Whoa! I did not see that ending coming. Great update.