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Angel Fire – 18
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Angel Fire
the young couple
chapter 18
Bette and Tina’s home
“I need to talk to my parents,” Stacy said as they recovered from making love several times — in the kitchen — in the living room.
“I thought they knew about us.”
“They do, but…”
“But what? You’re not going to tell them that we had sex, are you?”
“Not exactly.”
Angel looked at her girlfriend, now lover, with surprised curiosity. Stacy sat up and looked at her girlfriend who was still lying on the living room floor.
“I want to live with you as soon as possible,” Stacy explained. “I don’t want to spend one night away from you and I don’t want to wait until school starts for us to get an apartment.”
Angel reached up to run her fingers down one of Stacy’s breasts.
“Hey,” Stacy said tolerantly, taking Angel’s hand and kissing it. “I need to talk to you.”
“Then you’d better cover yourself,” Angie smiled lustfully. “Now that I’m allowed to touch your breasts, it’s hard not to.”
Stacy pulled a throw over herself and Angel
They decided they should look for an apartment, one close to their schools. Angel was going to USC and Stacy was going to be in the business school at UCLA. They also decided to look for jobs, but knew they were going to need help from their parents.
“I’m not sure my parents will help with an apartment,” Stacy admitted. “They might suggest I stay at home.”
“I think my parents will help, but we’ll have to talk to them.”
“We certainly can’t stay at my house,” Stacy said.
“Well, my moms would probably let us stay here for a while, but they would want us out on our own as soon as possible.”
“Well, maybe we need to start to look for a place to live.”
“Hey, I have an idea,” exclaimed Angel. “My moms have this real estate agent that could probably help us.”
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Bette and Tina, killing time
They had finished breakfast, walked in the park, drove around and looked at architecture, stopped for coffee. Tina looked at her glum wife as she idly stirred her drink.
“Bette.”
“Hmmmm?” The spoon continued to stir.
“Angel will always be our baby.”
Bette looked up at Tina and smiled.
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So both girls are now experienced huh? seems that they can’t enough of each other too, lol but don’t you think that they’re too young to be thinking about forever? high school’s sweethearts till they grow old?
What a wonderful story! Your writing and explanations were outstanding. Thoroughly enjoyable. I know they love each other but forever is a long time when you’re 18. Please continue w/this story if you wish. You write and I’ll read. I am addicted to your writing but I don’t want a cure.
Attached Parents is more like it….
awsome story!like mother/like daughter.please dont let this be the end ange;/stacy are still growing together they have to have ups/downs like every realationship.whats up NO DETAIL ABOUT TIBETTE IN THE MOVIES!lol
Love the ending – really great chapter – and now I’m so attached maybe mom and mom need to see the advantages of having the house to themselves- what do you say??
I’m guessing that Angelica found Von’s business card with the book that slipped from the sofa? Love the last line: “We were the ones that got attached” and that also applies to us being attached to your story. Hope there is more coming!
I had to go back and re-read this chapter to figure the thumping sound. Then it hit me like a newspaper would hit the porch. You had me squirming in my seat when Anglica and Stacy went to see Von. Bette and Tina were probably freaking out when they realized that A&S had gone to see Von. This is good. Hope that you will give us some more B&T and A&S loving.
My post did not go through anyways,another great chappy Pancha! Stangel are just too cute and it’s nice to see B&T acting like teenagers..lol! I’m on the fence about them living together only because they will be on their own for the first time. It’s one thing to be with someone all the time and quite another to be living with them….bad habits can get in the way! I guess I just want them to be individuals as well as a couple. Who knows? Maybe it will work out great with them. I know this is the end of the story but it would be really super great and I’ll love ya forever if you could continue or even maybe do snippets at certain points in their life together! Whether it’s a continuation of this story, new story or another “lifetime” chapter, just post soon cuz I love anything you write! As always thanks for sharing!
Awwwwww…that was so sweet. I loved this story….sorry to see it go but I am sure you will come back with another just as great.
Really really great – I love this :o))
GOOD CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!
Simply Spectacular! Thank you so very much for sharing this wonderful story.
One good thing about staying home sick is you get the fresh fiction hot off the presses. Somehow I don’t think my parents’ response to something like this would be to buy me a condo in LA. It was nice to see Stacy’s parents acquit themselves so well.
I am trying to figure put who heart stopped the longest, Yvonne when the girls showed up unexpected at her office speaking in double talk, or B&T when they found Yvonne’s card on the kitchen counter LOL.
At least Stacy’s parents didn’t freak out. No details on B&T making out at the movies? ;)
o forgot…u could’ve given us a ball by ball play on the make out session in the theatre!!!!! B & T making out, having sex, or just plain old flirting is friggin hott and awsome!!!!!!
great story, pancha…..I especially loked the reference to the crazy attachment parenting thing!
friggin awesome!!!! update soon …really, really soon!!!!!!!!!!
the last line was priceless, i got attached to angelica (olivia) as soon as they showed her for the first time in the show, the most adorable baby….i wanna read about B&T in the movies as well LOL…wonderful update, thanks
oh i loved it, young love, attachmnet parenting, etc…more soon please
Poor Tina. Ain’t no way in hell I could hear that and pretend I didn’t. OMG, i would run outside screaming, and attempt to build a time machine to go back to days when her biggest want was cheerios. That was priceless, thanx sweetie. please post soon. PEACE.
I’m glad this worked out so well for everyone. I wish someone would buy me a condo in NY!
Wonderful…wonderful story. Thank you! I have to admit to being totally attached to your writing!! :)
Ok, my IQ is just so low that I couldn’t find the ‘thud’ clue in this chapter? So I just assume it’s the answering machine running out of tape when Tina tried to call? Just a blunt guess ;)
Things are almost perfect by now. It’s good to have lesbian parents when you’re one. ;)
Exceptional!! This has been most entertaining, heart-warming, and educational :) story from the beginning ’til the end. Thank you sooo much for taking the time and share with us such meaningful story.
I LOVE THIS… now i do hope this is not the last chapter… and tina should of said… thats exactally what your mom and me did when we first moved together… then went home and had a few doubles… thanks … later babe
Great! Umm… nothing about the three weeks of living together in B&T’s house? Because I’m trying to imagine and it had to be really awkward…
Very good chapter. Your ability to write parallels is outstanding; Yvonne-Marie thinking the girls’ may be there for her services and Tina finding the business card were great. Hope this is not the end.
Well Pancha that was another perfect piece of prose form you. I adore the playfulness form both these couples. Bette and Tina’s visit to the movies was thoroughly enlivened by your conversations. True romantic flows constantly from this tale as these unions grow and develop daily. The ab=lmost misunderstanding with Von was priceless and an absolute hoot. Also, It was pleasing to read how Stacey’s parents took the news. NOw I can’t wait to see the adventures that Angel and Stacey share in their new home. Loved Tina last line. Wonderous! You capture real magic in this fantastic fan fiction. What a talent you are. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. Your Loyal Fan.
always great chappie from you!
Very cool. If only all parents acted like that. Thanks, hope you come back withanother story soon.
great chapters once again!!! love it! =)
we were the ones that got attached…. Oh so so so sweet O.o *sigh*
the Stacy’s father had a good detail trying to support her and her mother didn’t freak out! even the doble glass of alcohol will put away parents worries! but is so good to know that B&T continue to support to her child in all. I really enjoyes read your story! a very good story!
a wondewrful story loved the way you handled b and t coming home too early and how things worked out loved bette’s comment at the end hope this isn’t the end