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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–Ch. 12
A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 12
Tuesday: Half-way through breakfast
Everyone was eating while Bette and Alice had devised a plan of action. Bette and Alice were hassling each during breakfast, and Kit wouldn’t have it and told them to make-up. They had decided to call a truce and focus on making it a fun day for Jack and Eli and everyone else.
Eli: "So John what kind of a doctor are you?"
John Hughes was two years younger than Kit. They had meet when Kit was admitted for heart irregularities two years ago, and he was called in for a consult. They started dating shortly after. A year later they moved in with each other.
John: "I’m a cardiopulmonary surgeon."
Eli: "That’s heart and lungs right?"
John: "That’s correct. You know your stuff. Are you interested in the field of medicine."
Kit: "My nephew loves science. Did I tell you that he skipped two grades?"
John laughed because all Kit could talk about for the past two days was her wonderful, handsome, sweet, genius nephew.
John: "I think you may have mentioned it. So do you have any idea what you want to be when you get older?"
A few ears perked up at the question unbeknownst to Eli.
Eli: "I’m not sure, I figure I have a few years before I should think about it. Mom said that I’ll probably change my mind a few times. That I should just focus on doing things that interest me."
John: "So what do you like besides science?"
Kit: "Math. He scored high enough to get the attention of several very prestigious schools."
Bette saw that Kit was very proud of Eli and that she was just expressing that pride to John. But she noticed that Eli was beginning to fidget a little from all the attention.
Bette: "Hey Eli you’re going to be my ride partner right?"
Eli: "Yeah."
Alice: "Porter brings up a good point we should all pair off with a possible alternate."
Dana: "Well since Jack isn’t tall enough for a lot of the rides and I don’t like fast ones. I think we should be partners."
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(52 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
What a fun chapter! Bette is seeing what she missed by not having Tina and Eli in her life. Now, just get them into their bikinis lounging and swimming at Bette’s pool and let nature take its course. Maybe after a welcome party/BBQ for Tina At Bette’s house. Then have Aunt Alice take Eli for the night. LOL.
love this story….Eli is such a ray of sunshine…and are Bette and Tina still married??? I thought I read that in an earlier chapter????? Good build up, like a slow burn, very sensual, by the time B & T meet up again, it should be all go…
I really enjoyed this “necessary” chapter (as you put it). It was really fun! Can’t wait for more!
You really do a good job of making these words come to life. It seems so real and the way Bette is with Eli is so cute and real. This story touches you like no other story i have read so far because you feel Eli’s realness for some reason to which I cannot explain and beleive me i have read many Bettina stories. Keep on doing what you doing sister. I LLLLOOOOVVVVEEE IT!
Great chapter and Bette really let her hair down and had fun, with her clothes on. Rare for her.
God I love Disney. Try going at Christmas time, it is a blast. Eli got Bette out of her comfort zone and she actually had fun. It was nice to see the entire gang (minus Tina, bummer) getting together and bonding. Can’t wait for Tina to get there and also bond with her family. What exactly is Eli going to call Bette later on? Glad you were able to post and hope that you get to post soon again.
That was so fun and Alice is so crazy and funny.
It was great to see Bette have so much fun with Eli and the gang. I just love yoour story. Thank you
Great chapter, i wish I could’ve gone with them. Rides are fun. Please post soon
that was a fun chapter and sometimes you need them to move forward. I hope you get to post again soon…like today.
Read it, loved it. Will read the next chapter soon. =)
Great chapter. Only thing missing was Tina. Hopefully when she gets in town there will be another fun-filled family outing with ALL OF THEM again with lots of looks and sexual tension between Bette and Tina. Post Soon!
I love this chapter! I love how Alice and Eli force Bette and Shane on all the rides! It was hilarious!