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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–Ch. 13
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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 13
Wednesday morning
It was 10:45am and Bette was still sprawled out on her stomach with her arm resting under her head, and she could be heard quietly snoring. A knock at her door caused her to roll over on her back. A few minutes later and there was a louder knock. This time Bette heard it and started to open her eyes and stretch out.
Bette: "Come in." Bette didn’t recognize her voice, it was a little hoarse from all the screaming the day before.
Eli poked his head in. It looked like he was already showered and changed.
Eli: "Good morning. Is it okay to come in?"
Bette: "Yeah. Come in. Wow it felt good to sleep in. What time did you wake up?"
Eli: "About 8:30." Eli came in and sat at the corner of the bed.
Bette: "How could you get up so early. You were as tired as I was last night?"
Eli: "I’m young."
Bette: "I’m jealous. So what’s up?"
Eli: "Hold on…" Eli ran out of the room but could still be heard from the hallway. "…close your eyes Bette."
Bette smiled and closed her eyes she kind of figured out what was going on because she could smell coffee. Eli walked in with a tray and placed it to the side of her.
Eli: "Okay open."
Bette couldn’t believe what see saw. Eli had cut up some fruit, there was toast on the side, a glass of orange juice and a cup of coffee. Her eyes teared up and she wiped them away.
Bette: "Wow what did I do to deserve this?"
Eli: "It’s not much but I wanted to say thank you for everything you’re doing for me."
Bette: "There’s no need to thank me, believe me when I say that there’s nothing that I’d rather be doing right now then spending time with you." Bette gave Eli a quick hug.
Eli: "Oh I brought juice and coffee because I wasn’t sure what you drank in the morning."
Bette: "I need my coffee in the morning…So how did you learn to make coffee. You don’t drink it do you?"
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tooo short….is it sunday yet??????
I love this story. I hope Bette and Tina will be as comfortable talking in person as they are on the phone. Tina should just get on a plane and come on to LA. I can’t wait for the next post.
I do love this story; isn’t it amazing how time and distance puts things into perspective and what is left? as the Beatles said: love, love, love, all you really need is love!!!!
really good! i’ll be waiting to Tina to arrived to LA and talk to Bette, so sweet chapter!
I so Love this story. Thank you so much for letting Tina And Bette be happy with each other. Can not wait to read the next chapter.
So sweet. You are so good.
This is such a beautiful story. Thank you.
Have been gone all weekend and just read the update. It is such a great story..please post soon. I love this flirting between the girls.
Such a sweet story and its especially great w/o the drama and angst. I can’t wait for the dinner party to be over and for Tina to finally show up, so they can reconnect and be a family.
I’m loving it!Can’t wait for more.
God, I love this story and the interaction between our girls is just great. Please let Tina surprise Bette and Eli during the dinner party. Let her come on out to CA and surprise everyone or maybe she is already there at the beachouse. Wonderful story. Post soon please. Thanks.
I love the fact that this story is just fun, no angst, no big fight between B/T, just plain ole fun.
Love this story, cant wait for the big reunion between B&T. Look forward to your next post.
I can never get enough of this story. I am so glad that you are able to post. I hope that you project is going well. I really am loving the closeness that Bette and Tina are sharing right now and that is only over the phone. Just thinking about what may happen when they actuall come face to face is exciting. Eli knows that both of them love one another. I still am wondering when all is said and done what Eli will be calling Bette. I know that you are busy so post when you can.
Loving the story! Bette is so adorable..Eli is too!. I cant wait for next post :)
Great, great, great. I love it. Please post really soon
Ah HA So Bette DID notice Tina calling her babe. ;) You’d think by the tone of their playful conversations that they will jump each other when they finally see each other in person. lol
Already noticed Tina said “babe” twice. I wonder if Bette noticed? *keeps reading*
very cute and lovely…drama-free TiBette is what i like…maybe Tina should go to LA earlier and the 3 of them will spend more time together
I, too, love that this story is not angst-ridden. B & T are flirtatious w/each other. Question: How can they be so lovey-dovey now but have been separated for 9 years? You would think that there would be some residual animosity lurking about and rearing its ugly head. Please post soon. We all love your story.
Once again, I LOVE this story! It’s so nice to see Bette and Tina show the love that apparently never died! I didn’t think they would have parts of this conversation over the phone, but you made it work so well! Much success on your project, and please post again real soon!
Bette hasnt notice the Elizabeth and Eli yet just the Porter. That young man is so adorable,and Bette has fallen in love with another Kennard Bette is cute in this, and Tina is really a tease, thanks
Love this story, they are wonderful and lovely. OK post soon please, thanks!
What else is there to say but POST SOON… love this story just like the rest of your fan club… I think I’m #1 SAP… THANK YOU!!!
Hey Toribio – this is a great story and I’ve just been catching up. I can’t wait to read about Tina coming to LA and see Bette face to face. They’re really flirting with each other, that’s so cute :o))