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Love in the South – Chapter 2
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Previously…
Tina turned to Chris, "Why didn’t your mother come in?"
Casey and Angie came out into the hallway and Casey answered, "She didn’t have time to introduce herself, but she told me to call her if we couldn’t stay and she would come back and get us."
Tina turned around and saw Casey standing there next to Angelica and was so amazed at how much she looked like Bette. Tina just stood there staring at Casey.
Casey had a look of shock on her face as she started taking out her cell phone to call her mother to come and pick them up.
Angelica snapped her fingers in front of Tina’s face, "Earth to mommy! Earth to mommy! Hello! Mommy!" Tina snapped out of her state of shock and asked Casey,
"What’s your mother’s name?" Casey swallowed hard, "Elizabeth Porter, but everybody calls her Bette."
Tina passed out.
Tina hit the floor with a thud, hitting her head. Angelica runs over to her and shakes her, "Mommy? Mommy!" but gets no response. She turns to Casey, "What do we do? What do we do?"
"I don’t know! I’m calling momma!" Casey replied waiting on Bette to answer the phone.
"Hey baby. Is everything O.K.?" Bette asked.
"Um, not really momma. My friend’s mommy passed out. We’ve tried to shake her, but we’re not getting a response. What do we do?" Casey asked frantically.
"Get some cold water and dampen her face. Keep her cool. I’ll be there in a few," Bette replied.
"O.K." Casey hung up the phone and told the other kids, "Get some cold water and dampen her face. Quick! C’mon!"
Mark grabs his supersoaker and starts shooting his mother in the face and says, "C’mon guys! Start squirting!"
Angelica dies out laughing, "Mommy’s going to KILL you when she comes to!"
They soak Tina from head to toe. Tina wakes up screaming from the ice cold water, grabs her head, "AAAAACCCCCCCKKKKKKK! STOP! Ow! My head! Mark! What did I tell you about guns in this house?"
Casey interrupts, "He was just trying to help. You passed out and momma said to dampen you with some cold water. Don’t get mad at them."
"I’m sorry guys! Thanks for your help and how did you get so smart Casey," Tina asked a little dazed.
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I am loving this story….bring on the convo and explanation on how they practically live around the corner from one another….and how soon they can all move in together (are there any significant others in the picture?)
cute fantasy
i dont usually go for bette and tina stories, but i have to say i like this one. i hope you update soon!
Loving this story so much. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
a real fun chapter, i’ll have to go back to find out they got all those kids, lmao…
oooooh yeaaaa……post another chappy soon……..i cant wait…….
Great way to get a ready made family, and Tina soaked with the water guns LOL. I know that they have to talk and clear things up, but I like this family unit already. I only wishes that B&T had surprised Kit by showing up together to pick her up or Tina being at the house when Betteand Kit arrived back from the airport LOL :o)
I know that Tina regrets that she didn’t see Bette as she was pregnant or shared in the experience with her :o(
Absolutely. Love how the story is developing. Keep up the Southern lovin’
Oh Goodie! I was hoping you’d update again soon. his is great! Thanks you!!! Great job too. I am inlove with this story.
i knew itr was too soon for an nc-17. you fooled me! but its ok. i loved it! this is a great twist. kit is in trouble!
I am so hungry now I may just have to run out and get some fried chicken from Popeyes. Make those tomatoes fried green with a lite shrimp sauce and I will be at your house soon. I can’t wait till they are alone and supposedly talking. New Orleans is always a fun place to visit. Next time I go I will be looking for the new Planet. Post as soon as you can, thanks.
Damn, I like this story already, glad you got another chapter out. This is going to be a real treat. A story without all the problems and anguish they have gone through. Please post soon.
First, just a nitpicky suggestion. When picking a rating, just rate the current chapter you’re submitting rather than a general rating for the whole story. I personally don’t give a flip if it says G or NC-17, but I know some folks rely on the rating to determine if/when they can read a chapter. =) Now onto the story. LMAO@Tina and the gun! And were you trying to make me hungry talking about fried chicken and mashed potatoes? *drools everywhere* I like this story so far. Please continue!
great story! you did it so good! that boys alone will be so crazy! the next please!
I really like this,the boys will give the girls fits,and the two moms will need to take care of the matter. Plus these ladies will need to do a lot of talking. thanks
just got all caught up this is great
Just caught up with your story. Man, they didn’t seem like they haven’t seen each other for 15 years! Don’t get me wrong, I find the story interesting, it just a bit rush for me. Thanks for posting, please continue :)
I LOVE this story. I hope that when they go to Bette’s house to pick up clothes that they can discuss the feelings that they still have for each other and maybe we will find out why they never kept in touch ? Post soon, please???
I know its fantasy fiction but there is not much about this story that is believable. I will read to see where it goes. 30 minute is not long enough to fill in the blanks of 15 years and 4 other kids
wonderful update, they already look like one big happy family…post soon
Ahh love this!!!!!!!!!!!!