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Danish: From Beginning to End (Episode 14)
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EPISODE 14- DANISH: FROM BEGINNING TO END
“This is it people. This is the episode I’ve been dreading from the start. I was going to try to prolong it as much as possible, but Dana paid me a visit last night and I realized that I just want to get this over with and forget about everything having to do with her.”
One week later, the girls were all gathered at The Planet sipping their coffees and giving each other a run down on the new things that were going on in their lives.
“Hey ladies.” Lara said as she walked over to the group
“Lara!” Shane said, surprised to see the red head. “What are you doing here?” She shot a surprised look at Alice and Dana
Alice immediately tensed up as Dana sent Lara a big smile.
“I’m working for Kit now.” Lara smiled at Shane. “Hi Dana.”
“Hi.” Dana stood to give the chef a hug
“I see my new chef has made herself known with my favorite customers.” Kit laughed as she walked up to the group and put her arm around Lara’s shoulders
“Sorry Kit. I just wanted to say hi. I’ll go and get to work.” Lara said
“Why don’t you sit and catch up with the girls.” Kit offered. “We’re slow and I’ll handle the kitchen. I’ll come get you if I really need you.” She smiled
“Ok.” Lara shrugged and pulled up a chair to the group’s table. “How is everyone?”
“We’re all really good.” Tina smiled at Lara
The girls all sat around catching up with Lara, Alice not saying a word the entire time.
A while later, Lara stood up. “They’re getting kind of busy in here. I should go and get to work.” She turned to Dana. “What are you doing later Dana? Would you like to grab some dinner?”
Alice looked at Dana, shocked, and Dana blushed and hung her head. “I don’t think that will work.” Dana said, everyone looking on in confusion
“You can go if you want baby.” Alice said softly
Lara’s eyes got wide. “Oh. Oh! You two are together?”
“Yeah.” Dana whispered, feeling everyone’s eyes on her
“I’m sorry. I had no idea.” Lara said quickly. “I’m sorry Alice.”
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You’re killing me. You managed to capture the pain on both sides, and to give a little insight into why they’d both behave like this, which is so much more than the show did. I, too, vote for the happy ending…please.
Okay, that’s not fair…talking about happy Danish endings and then telling me to talk it the way I want. You know what I want…haha. Amazing update Poopy, you made my day. Even if the breakup is one big shitsandwich I loved the way you wrote is. IC should take notes!! Frustrating…Dana is..well you get it, anyways keep it up and please don’t keep me waiting to long I don’t think my Danish loving heart can take it. HAPPY ENDINGS….WOEHOE! (hint!?)
I didn’t think it was possible to love something (this story) so much, then hate it equally. Being an Alice lover I’ve always been on her side as far as the break up is concerned. Seeing Dana’s side of the story made me see how right I was to choose sides. I know that Dana hasn’t been out of the closet long but seriously this chick sucks at relationships. You can’t tell your girlfriend that an ex isn’t the problem ,make her feel crazy, then keep the relationship secret…not cool Dana. I also think Shane is being a little callused telling Alice to let go because it was only three months, it’s not the length but the relevancy of the relationship that matters and a lot of friends say what she said (but I completely see Shane’s point when you compare time like that it does seem stupid). I love this story and I hated this chapter, don’t get me wrong the writing was flawless, but I don’t like to feel and I felt something today lol. Seriously though great job, I think you’ve got these characters down and I still love the radio show…So what happened to Danish? Did Dana keep him and change his name? (Uncool Dana). I’m hooked Poopy and I’ll be singing your praises everywhere I go…Praise Poopy-Sh*t!
Ahh you’re killing me with the whole story, but especially with Dana’s little spill at the end… she can’t stay with Lara?!?! Pfft. Haha good job but Danish will prevail in the end, right?
oh wow jeez!!! that was a tear jerker. great chapter but so sad and soooo well written. i could picture it all so clearly. loved the scene with shane in the backyard. jeez!!!
I finally got round to posting a comment! :D! Love this story it is written so damn well! Sometimes Dana really pisses me off but I cant hate her coz she is so damn cute! haha I thought Alice was going to knock shane out! I hope Alice ends up happy with or without Dana in her life.. Anyway have a good one! Love the story!
I hope what dana said does not come true they are so right for each other please post soon I can’t wait to see what will happen next great update I love it
You expressed the pain of this situation really well. As a Danish lover, though initially reluctant, it dang hurt how they ended.
Another awsome chapter, I like how you have the present day stuff, along with the past story, thanks for the post!!!
Great update! I’m just kinda hoping that Dana was lying when she made that speech at the end. Anyways, the breakup sucked, but the update rocked:) Still loving the story and I can’t wait for the next chap!
Sigh.. this chapter hurt really bad, so painful and sad, sniff! Dana is so frustrating at times you just want to scream..Aaaaarh. Then she can be really funny ” Im all alone, theres no one here beside me,” very dorky Dana!![nice touch poopy]. Alice needs to try and chill now and be with her friends, to work out her own problems aswell. The comment from Dana at the end shocked me, but its keeping me gripped to see how it ends up!.Post soon, Thanks.
Hey babe! So excited to see you posted! This was brilliant as always my friend. So sad. So beautiful. You know I love you and this story :D I am working on my stuff so I will try to get it up here soon for you. LOL. You have officially motivated me. That was such an awesome update. Where have you been all my life poopy? haha. Talk to you later babe. Can’t wait for the next chap!
Sigh. The one chapter I was dreading…the breakup. It’s suchh a sad chapter. I really feel Alice’s pain. I don’t know, I think what made me the most sad was the fact that Dana said she had moved on. I guess it’s just the big part of me that wants them to have a happy ending. She should be Alice. I really wasn’t expecting her to confess that to Bette…hoping so much that it wasn’t true. What I really love about this story is all the emotion you convey through your words. I like the jumps from past to present. I dont know, I think it might be crowned as my favorite these days. I truly envy your talent. I hope when this story ends you continue to right Danish because you’re just so damn good at it. Anyways, after all this rambling..please give them a happy ending! I’m much too depressed these days to read this sad stuff. You’re fantastic…
wow, that was a really amazing chapter! i have to admit i cried a little when shane and alice where talking…damn what you do to me! i hope alice can move on, because in all honesty, in this story dana doesnt deserve her! well update again!
great story! Dana is so mean, but… great story!!!
poopy one…ohhhhh poopy one. I was dreading this chapter, but i knew it would come eventually. It was so upsetting yet beautiful at the same time. This chapter was so well written poopster. Plus the addition to “whether you fall” definately put a tear in my eye. I can’t believe Dana though. As much as i love her, it is all her fault. I mean, you don’t just start talking to your ex “as friends” especially without telling your girlfriend. Just stupid. I def feel bad for alice…and just a tiny bit for dana, but it was her fault. It sucks too that they most likely won’t try again at a relationship but who knows?..you might change it up on us. Well just wanted to say poopy one, that i think this story is really amazing. I love it so much. It just keeps getting better and better. I think that this fic is one of the best Danish out there, for real. It’s such a bittersweet story, sad yet funny and touching. Post soon cause i’ll be waiting as usually. Maybe i can think of some more ideas for the story ;)
I just read this whole story today, not sure how i missed it! You’re an amazing writer and i’ve really enjoyed your story (so far). Anyway i am an alice/dana lover, i think they are the most perfect couple in the show. But after watching season 3 i was just pissed that they didn’t get back together! But i’m really loving the way you write alice, dana and shane, and i must admit reading the last bit where dana said she’d moved on made me realise maybe alice has to as well, even though i think dana will always be the love of her life. Im looking forward to seeing how you continue this story, and if you don’t find away to get alice and dana back together, i really hope you have a scene where their friendship is restored! Update soon!
I really needed to force myself to read this chapter. They’re just fictional characters, but everytime I read or see something bad happening to my favorite couple, it still hurts. In some way I do blame Dana for everything that happened to Alice. I know Alice is responsible for her own actions but..damn you Dana! Breaking up with Alice, out of the blue! She really didn’t see it coming! But in the end, I always want them back together, no matter what bad things happened between these two. They’re just meant to be together. I was also shocked with Dana’s comment at the end. A lot of people blame the breaking up on Dana’s insecurities and Alice’s clinginess, but maybe Dana didn’t love Alice as much as Alice loved Dana (as lovers). (I cringe even writing that sentence.) Ofcourse I hope there’s a nice twist in this story and a happy ending is possible in real time. :D Yay, for real time! ;) Anyways, on a more happy note, I don’t know how many people listened to the commentary, but I did…and it’s hilarious! I can keep listening to it over and over again. :D