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Danish: From Beginning to End (Episode 15)
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EPISODE 15- DANISH: FROM BEGINNING TO END
“Well people, this is going to be a run down of the past 6 months. I originally said that I was going to make it quick and painless, but there is too much that went on to make it short.
“This is the official last episode of this radio story, and I want to thank you all for listening.”
The day after the break-up, Alice woke up to realize that she had cried herself to sleep on the floor; the same place she had fallen the night before in tears.
Alice groaned as she picked herself up off the floor and walked into her kitchen to get a drink of water. Downing the glass, Alice set it in the sink and made her way into her bedroom. Stripping off her clothes, Alice curled up in her bed and cried herself to sleep again.
Dana awoke in her condo and reached out for Alice, something she did every morning. Only finding empty space where Alice usually slept, Dana glanced around and then suddenly remembered what had happened the night before.
“Oh fuck.” Dana said, putting a hand to her mouth. “Oh God.”
Dana threw back the covers and hurriedly got dressed.
“Where are Alice and Dana?” Jenny asked as she sat around with Shane and Carmen at The Planet
“Beats me.” Shane yawned. “Where’s everyone else?”
“Today is obviously just a lazy day for everyone.” Carmen said and smiled at her sleepy girlfriend
“I want to be curled up in bed still. I hate thunderstorms.” Jenny shuddered as she looked out the window at the café to look at the dark and threatening sky
Dana suddenly ran into the café and looked around for everyone. Spotting Shane, Carmen, and Jenny, Dana ran over.
“Have you guys seen Alice?” Dana asked breathlessly
Shane cocked a brow at Dana. “No.” She said slowly. “Shouldn’t she be with you? We figured you two would still be in bed.”
Dana’s eyes filled with tears. “Shane, I did something really stupid.”
Shane looked at Dana’s pained expression and sat up straighter in her chair. “Dane, what happened.”
“I broke up with Alice last night.” Dana said softly
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okay i know that you said it was the last part of the radio show, but hopefully not the last part of this story! cause i love this story sooooooooooooooooo much!
Poopy, who the FUCK gives you four stars? Good Grief. That’s shitty. Grrr…sorry. I guess I’m a little protective of you and this story. I think that was a great update! I think it was actually better how you didn’t go into super detail about Alice’s crazy months. You gaves us just enough and the rest we can imagine on our own. It was an excellent chap as always my friend. I was dying over the whole pet scene. That’s totally how it would have went down. I was just waiting for Alice to go “Helena! What the Fuuuuck???” LMAO! Oh poopy. You kick ass. Now I am gonna go hunt down the idiot who jipped you a star. Later babe.
What can i say? another fantastic chapter poopy!It would have been so good if we got to see some of this in the show but alas we have to count on much, much better writers here in the fanfics.. you being one of them. Dont know if or where you are goin to take this story but i will just say, [quote Alice] ” I BELIEVE IN YOU ” lol. Glad you brought back the true character of Alice back to us, even tho she is in pain it was nice to see for a bit and i really needed it.. Im desperately hoping for it in season four.I will hang on for dear life to this story hoping theres more. Thanks.
Ah Poopy another chapter for my record books, I love Alice’s hysterical scene, I can really see LH delivering that. I would really love to see Danish back together, Lara always felt like a tool to me, she never really had a personality and that bothered me. I think sometimes a break up is what some couples need they simply can’t be together but I didn’t really see that in Danish. They have so much chemistry and I didn’t feel that with the soup chef. I do realize that I’m trying to convince you and you more than likely have a plan as to how this story will pan out but still lol. Great chapter, don’t let the rating get you down. There are people who read one chapter in the middle of the story and think they should rate. 5 stars, great writing, spot on.
Great chapter dude but I really must know… there will be a happy ending for all us danish fans… wont there?
it was so hard to watch alice fall apart and it’s almost harder reading about it. you’ve done a great job. i sure hope you continue.
Surely you can’t leave it there – please, please continue and get these two back together as they should be.
I hope that this is not the last part of the story but it is great please post soon I love it
Real quick..what i meant above..was that dana is DEF bad at breaking up with people. lol. Oh and i just wanted to tell you poopster..that i have to say, that this fan fic is one i would absolutely read over and over and over and over again, cause it’s just that good. ilene should be taking some pointers. k g2g lurve ya.
darn you rbelinda for being first! haha, well poopy one, that was def a good chapter, i’m keeping this short cause i have to go to work, but this chappy def filled in the gap of what was missing. You did greatttt. Oh and i absolutely loved the pet part, lmao. What i don’t get, is i don’t think dana ever stopped loving anyone..you know?…she never stopped loving lara b4 she broke up with her, and she never stopped loving alice when she broke up with her. The only difference is that dana had someone “i.e. lara” when she broke up w/ alice, so she had someone to fall in love with again, and to have comfort her. Which sucks, cause obviously alice does not have that. phew, if you know what i mean. well i can’t WAIT for the next chapter. You know i lurveeeeeeeeeeee this story times a thousand. Post soon poopy one, i’ll be waiting!
Thanks for updating so quick, and again it was an excellent chapter:) Loved it when Shane went to take care of Alice. I don’t know who dubbed you with four stars, but I’d give you a ten if I could! Can’t wait for more!
Wow..I really liked this chapter. You don’t have to worry about leaving too much out, I think it was perfect the way you wrote it. I really like the way you’ve taken this story. Like it goes along with show, but in your own way…and that’s what I love most. I wish this was Season 2 and 3. Your storyline and plot is to me a million times better then the actual show. The part when Dana came to the door and Alice was so cold, I honestly was not expecting that. That’s when I went..wow..this is so fucked up. The fish part had me laughing, first the conversation between Shane and Helena.. then poor Helena died lol And Alice coming in high..that was pretty funny too. Damn, I just love everything about this story. I really..really..reallllyyy hope for a happy Danish ending. I’m happy that Alice is looking to improve and move on with her life…but I just want them to get together!! Sigh..whatever happens..happens..can’t help it if I love the happy endings. Anyways, now that I’m done rambling, thanks for updating so soon. When I saw it I had to read it immediately, as a result I’m making a friend wait on me lol But it’s well worth it. Update soon my dear, I’ll be waiting! :)
What can I say when everything I love about this chapter has already been said. :) I’m acutally glad you didn’t go too much in detail over the 6 missing months. I’m one of the few people who didn’t like ‘crazy’ Alice. Leisha delivered the scenes perfectly and with grace…and yes, some of them were funny…I guess. But in the end I think it was really sad to see Alice go totally bananas after the break up with Dana. I’m glad Alice still has friends she can count on. AlShaDane is being replaced by AlShaHel, the whole pet-story was hilarious (but the last threesome can never top the comic skills of the first threesome though :D). And now the radio story has officially ended (too bad, no more Shane as a sidekick!), the story will continue in real time!
Another great chapter! Update soon!
Hé Poopy, what a great writer you are, I’ve told you this before but I felt like it needed to be said once more. The way you are able to write those kinds of emotions is amazing if you as me. Like Dawsons said you’re following the show but making the story more real and true to their characters. A fish called Helena that cracked me up and Alice being so hard on Dana surprised me but I liked it a lot. Now that we know most of the history I’m counting on you to make the future worthwhile. ove these girls together and seeing as your taking this story in to your own hands I have a feeling I might get what I want (and need). I sometimes feel like such a dork for getting so involved with fictional characters but he what can I do about it. Loved it yet again and hope you’re back soon. Bye my friend.
*blinks* um, excuse me, missy. You don’t think I’m actually going to let you get away with having that as the last chapter, do you?It may have been amazing with the whole ‘fish’ incident and watnot, but i need my Danish fix, and normally that’s this story! Write more!!!