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Danish: From Beginning to End (Real Time 1)
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DANISH: FROM BEGINNING TO END
One week after Alice’s breakdown at Bette and Tina’s, Alice was sitting in her apartment, her glasses perched on her nose, reading a book. Music softly playing in the background, Alice lightly tapped her foot to the beat as she sat engrossed in her book.
Her intercom suddenly buzzed, signaling her that someone wanted to come up to her apartment. Sighing as she was thrown from the fiction of her book back into real life, Alice marked her place in her book and threw it on the coffee table.
“Yeah, yeah. I’m coming.” Alice muttered to herself as the intercom buzzed again. Getting up from the couch, Alice slowly made her way down the hallway, the intercom buzzing for the third time.
“Jesus fucking Christ! Hold your horses!” Alice rolled her eyes as she made it to the intercom. “Hello?” Alice grumbled into the speaker
“Finally!” Shane’s voice filled the apartment, followed by a shrill noise
Alice winced at the sound and put a hand to her temple. “What’s up Shane?”
“Let me up.” Shane demanded
“Why didn’t you just use your key.” Alice asked suspiciously. “There’s a reason I made that for you.”
“I’m a little preoccupied at the moment.” Shane grunted, followed by a dull thud. “Fuck.”
“Do you need help?” Alice asked quickly
“I just need you to let me up.” Shane answered. “Goddamnit!” She shouted
“Ok! Ok! Jeez!” Alice said, finally hitting the button to let Shane up
Alice opened her door and peeked outside of it into the hallway to watch for Shane. Alice suddenly saw Shane’s head poke around the corner.
“Do you need help?” Alice asked cautiously, slightly afraid of Shane’s behavior
“No. Just go inside. I have a surprise for you.” Shane said
“Ok?” Alice asked slowly. “I’ll leave the door cracked for you.”
“Ok.” Shane grunted
Alice left her apartment door slightly ajar and went and sat down on the couch, impatiently bouncing up and down for Shane’s arrival.
“Al, close your eyes!” Shane shouted from the door
“Ok.” Alice complied
“Are they closed?”
“Yes!” Alice yelled, exasperated
“Alright.” Shane said, making her way into the apartment. “Helena and I bought you something, but she had to go into work unexpectedly, so she stuck me all alone.” Shane suddenly burst out laughing at Alice sitting impatiently on the couch, her hands covering her eyes
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Awesome update – I love it!!
That was a fan-freaking-tastic update! I loved it! Dana really needs to get her crap together and figure out what she wants (Alice cough cough) because she is truely destroying Alice. I’m really hoping for a happy Danish ending, but I see that if that happens that it will be a long time coming. I’m in it for the long haul though, so keep it coming. Great writing. I can’t wait to read more.
Wow poopy! This chapter was like a rollercoaster.. The witty banter with Shane, then the cute dog, Alices half cut hair[very funny],then BANG! What the f*ck!!! DANA.. what are you doing? She needs to sort herself out quick and stop torturing Alice before its too late!. Big up to Shane for the Dana slap, it was spot on. Helenas great too! I feel so sad for Alice right now.. your killin me here poppy!! Im still clinging on to this story for dear life and Cant wait to see where we end up next. Post soon, Thanks. Ps your writing in this chapter Awwwwsome!!!!
ouch!!! Dana was wondering why alice would not be her friend without trying to give alice what she needed. Alice needed her space to get her life back together and repair her crushed dreams.Dana as a friend should have given her that time and space. post again soon =)
wow! That wasn’t cool for Dana to do.
Yay Shane! I’m so glad she slapped Dana after what she said. Moved on my a**!!! This chapter was amazing. Sad, but amazing. It featured all my favorite things; a bathroom makeout, a puppy, alice’s hair and shane and helena. : ) hurry with the next update.
HOLY SHAT. i’ll be back to post.
OKAY BACK! hey hey poopy one! (since when has everyone been calling you “poopy”) lol guess i started that fad. ANYWHOOO! well well, nice chapter poopster. Geez i’m telling you i love this fic so much. From alice’s hair (lmao btw) and the way you write every character. Now for my thoughts. Well, you know for once i’m going to side with Dana. *crowd goes crazy, everyone hits me with bricks*. Okay, well not 100% but i’m kinda feeling bad for dana here. I mean (you are making her a total bitch here poopster, give her a break! lol) but you know i think it’s time for alice to get over her. I mean come on. Yea yea, alice loved dana, dana loved alice, but 7 months!..alice move on! get some hot *you know what* and get over dana. I mean yea she was gonna give her everything, but things didn’t work out, so suck it up and be friends again. Lol, am i being too mean here?..i dunno. and as for the whole kissing/ almost raping scenario, well that was interesting. Lol, nicely done poopy one. I mean it was sad/creepy, but you can’t just blame it all on dana. I mean she totally shouldn’t have pushed the situation further especially when quote un quote “she doesn’t love alice, just wants to be friends again”..she def shouldn’t have done what she did, although alice didn’t stop her. I dunno, i guess bittersweet. Well poopy, how does it feel to make someone’s emotions go crazy?!..lol, i’m happy with this story then i’m sad, i loveeeee it. But the situation dana and alice are in does suck, but i’m sure you’ll fix it. (btw and poor lara) that’s all i’ll say about that ;D POST SOON LOVE!
*stares at screen in shock* *coughs* well then! There are no words to express how pissed I am at Dana right now. Poor Alice! She’s going to be so fucked up now! Arg, damn you Dana! I think that’s the fasted i’ve ever read anything in my entire life, actually, lol. Amazing update! Post soon!
Oh Dana is such a bitch at the moment. That was real shitty… Ok so I’ll try fast to come up with some crappy Road to Joy chapter so that I can know what’s gonna happen. It’s killing me.
That was Awwwwwsome! that chapter totally kicked ass!! and I have got to love the bitch slap from shane. I have to agree Dana is being such a bitch at the moment I mean come on!! Sounds like you had fun at that work party.. You have beat my post formal party record from 2 weeks ago, I only made out with 7 people, I am very impressed! but I am only young I will learn lol
You know what, I don’t know why I doubted you. I asked you to keep Danish together and this chapter proves how stupid of a request that was. This chapter was more than amazing…I am keeping record books and you keep breaking your own records. You got that first Danish conversation dead on seriously. Shane calling Dana a cunt 100% see it…this was perfect absolutely perfect, actually I wish there was a rating higher than 5 stars I feel so lock in to just saying it was good, I want to say that this chapter made me want to stop writing because I could never write anything to top it. Great chapter I’m looking forward to the next one…I guess I’ll go back to writing my story now but I’m a little depressed because I’ll never be able to write like you :(
wow, that was unexpected! great update. loving shane and helena, especially shane at the end. looking forward to the next chapter. dana’s killin’ me.
Damn it Dana!!!!!! God Alice’s progression just went down the drain and then some. Shane and Helena are the coolest, even Jenny for a min or two. thanks for the post!!!
Hey babe, I didn’t get a chance to comment the other day cause, but I stole my little brothers laptop for awhile so I can comment :) This chapter was so awesome. I can’t believe what a bitch Dana is right now though. It’s great! I mean I if course what them together, but the drama is brilliant. And Shane kicked ass too. Everybody needs a Shane in their lives. So yeah…Lara’s got to go. I would say remove her immediately, but that wouldn’t be fair since she is causing trouble in my stories too! LOL Great up date poopy. Miss you. Talk to you soon.
Holy shit!!! That was AMAZING. You totally threw me for a loop, I thought all hope was lost! But just reading this chapter..it’s so obvious that Dana is still in love with Alice. She didnt just get caught up in old emotions, she wouldn’t have cornered her in the bathroom. She LOVES Alice, and it was really fucked up of her to fuck with her mind like that. Right on Shane for slapping her!! I was so shocked but Shane was so damn right. I loveeeee it! I seriously wish this was the show, in whatever season it falls..at least the Danish part of it. It’s so awesome, I can picture every scene in my head. Your writing is phenomenal and I wish I could write like you. I’m so happy you updated, I can’t wait for the next. I’d really like to know the ending, but I know that spoilers ruin everything. I might just be patient and wait, the suspense will build up and up. I be anxiously awaiting your latest update. And oh btw, I wish I had work parties like yours lol 9 people huh? What a stud =P
Dana, Dana, Dana…what the f*ck is she doing to Alice. I mean I know she still loves the girl but this was insane! Go Shane for giving her a piece of her mind. Buy Poopy you did it again, so glad this story is ongoing. I know I put a lot on you for keeping our girls together but happy Danish rocks my world (such a dork, I know!) I cried so hard at the end of season three. I just get “that” involved (so do you I read).Oh, and 9 people ha ha ha….you dog you!
I was having a great day already because of all the pics that had been posted in on the threads and now this story… There must be a god. :)I have to admit, after reading your summary, my first thought was ‘OMG they are going to have a baby!’ ;) I didn’t know what to do after reading this chapter, should I be cheering or crying?! Dana really deserved that slap from Shane…what the hell was she thinking?! She can’t play games like that with Alice! Or she chooses Alice and will stay with her forever or she just leaves her alone (and waits until Alice is ready to be friends again). Btw, lol @ Alice’s hairdo. I would like to see a picture of that! :D And yes, I did watch the video of the pillow fight. You summarized it very well…it was HOT indeed!!! ‘No panties, not for me.’ :P
holy shit
you know…part of me hates that you are such a talented writer and that i have to wait for new chapters. but then again i completly love that you are a talented writer and that your story kicks so much ass! keep it up.
Man, is Dana ever going to give Alice a break? Now poor Alice is probably going to have to restart the whole recovery process all over again:( But Shane will be there to help her through it, right? Anyways, I can totally relate to how Alice is feeling at the moment, because of the painful breakup I just had like two days ago, so I’m really trusting you to give this story a happy ending:) As always, loved this update and if I haven’t said it allready, you’re awsome! Please post soon!
Trip to El Combate/Gas for a 3 hour drive:45 bucks/5 bags of ice for the cooler: 13 bucks/Drinks: 23 bucks/Food: 28 bucks/Coming back home to 87 pages of Danish FB2E?: PRICELESSSSSSS lol I don’t even know where to start!! i missed a lot :( BUT i’m all caught up and simply put I WANT MORE PLZ lol those 6 or 7 chaps i missed where incredible i almost wanted to skip over the depressing parts but i just couldn’t cuz it was that good! You really dug deep into what Alice was going threw. Hands down i’m printing your story out when you finish it which i hope will be a long time from now lol but still i deff wouldn’t mind re-reading it a few times over :) thnx for the awesomenessss! oh and :gasp: how could Dana be so cruel poor Alice :sniff sniff : but of course i loved it! I sense some roller coaster moments ahead! Keep up the fantastic work Poopy and PRETTY PLZ POST SOON!
Omg! I can’t believe i go away for a couple of days and miss this chapter! I loved shane slapping dana, and she’s right, as much as i love dana she can be an ass sometimes! Keep up your amazing writing!