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Everything to Everybody Chptr. 39
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Bette dismissed the thoughts plaguing her about court today and the blonde stranger. Her attention was solely focused on Tina. Bette was watching her the whole night. The way Tina moved on the dance floor was captivating, the way the rhythm and her hips seemed to be in sync, was hypnotizing. Bette’s eyes were glued on Tina’s every move. Tina caught Bette’s eyes, she then smiled and winked at her, that was it. Just smiling at her made Bette’s heart stagger and fall for her harder than before.
Carmen was dancing across the room and she caught sight of the fire in Bette’s eyes. The way Bette was piercing Tina was completely oblivious to everyone but her, she had to do something to at least cool her for now.
"Hey cuz, come with me to get some air." Carmen said throwing her arm around Bette.
"Yeah… it’s uhh, kinda hot in here." Bette said choking on the breath caught in her throat. Bette and Carmen wriggled out of the house and caught a cool breeze eagerly cooling their warm, moist skin. Bette walked out, put her hands on her hips and leaned her head back inhaling deeply the sweet Cuban oceanic air. That’s when Carmen saw it, the biggest red mark that was sure to turn purple and last a few days. The heavy alcohol in her made her laugh out loud, catching Bette’s attention in the process.
"Care to share?"Bette asked as she took a seat next to Carmen on the porch steps.
"Nothing, it’s nothing." Carmen said trying to wave off any thoughts that Bette was trying to figure out.
"Nothing my ass! What’s up?"
"I was just wondering what took you so long to get back to the party and now I know." Carmen said playfully tapping the red mark on Bette’s neck. Bette in response covered the mark and began to blush.
"It’s just that I haven’t seen a hickey on you since you were what… 14? And here it is you show up with one the size of Chicago. Must’ve been some hello."
"Yeah…" Bette said as she turned to see Tina walking through the house. The smile on her face faded into worry and sadness. Carmen saw the turn of emotions and felt a sudden jolt of concern for Bette.
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It’s understandable. When you aren’t treated well in childhood, you’d become very sensitive, fragile and reserved. Bette should be more patient, trying to warm Tina’s heart again using her love and caring, telling her she’s beautiful and she loves her every moment.
This story is beautiful Nett.Been reading it for a while, and it continues to amaze me! They’ve both been hurt,hopefully this is the start of the healing process!!!
Gee, that really sucks you have to miss another 2 weeks with pay. I feel your pain. And it seems Tina feels Bette’s. While this little talk may make things uncomfortable in the short term, its the kind of thing that can be beneficial in the long run. Most things worth having take some effort.
Good chapter. They will work this out and Bette will help Tina to get her heart back. Ok post soon please, thanks!
great update!!!!!!!!!! 4 pages whooooooooooo tina should know that bette won’t judge her she just wants to love you
Thank you for posting…I am glad they are talking…that conversation was so needed.
I hope you are better soon…just think of it as getting paid for writing fan fiction stories…we expect alot of posts over a 2 week period.