Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
La Mer 2
La Mer PT 2
CH 2
“Ok so what’s the plan?…How we gonna fix me up?” I asked as I stared intently at Shane, who was more and more appealing as the seconds dragged on. I mean this woman saved my life…anything she wanted I had to give her….
“Yeah um alright so I made list of different uhh scenario’s depending on your progress yeah, so I think if you want we can talk about the stages of your treatment, or if you feel to overwhelmed by the different levels of um…gosh I don’t want to bullshit you or anything …I don’t want to kill your confidence. I have seen so many patients go thru it…but I think you can take it…so here’s the truth. The truth is your gonna be in a lot of pain for a while…when you don’t use your muscles they atrophy…you now this the docs I am sure have beaten you up side the head about it. But I promise you, and I mean it when I say it… The hell your gonna go thru…when you walk out to the beach and get on your board and go like I know you can…it’s all gonna seem like a walk in the park. Trust me Carmen…they sent you to the best…I won’t let you down…but I am talking about the cliché of 110% and giving it your all…and trusting me…I know we don’t know each other very well. but we are bonded…I saved your life and now I am your servant for ever…”
Now why can’t Shane be my girlfriend….why am I stuck with "little miss can’t be wrong"…I had to focus. Shane was right. 110%
“Ok Shane you got me listening so lay it all out there…”
“Now your talking…Ok for the first couple of days starting now. We sauna, just to warm up your muscles…we take a day off in between to let the heat do it’s work…then we start the hydrotherapy…just 5 minute walks in the pool…don’t worry I will take every step with you…”
And she stops talking and just smiles at me…God she is so fucking hot. The way she was trying to ease my fears…they way she chewed her gum…I could see her tongue when she rolled the gum around in her mouth…I was noticing things about her that I never paid any mind to with what’s her face….
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.


(12 votes, average: 4.17 out of 5)
Fuckin’ awesome!!! I can soooo see Shane and Carmen’s characters in this story line!!!! Glad that Kim chick is outta’ the picture, but I really smell some drama comin’ on . . . You gotta’ continue like NOW!!! Like always from me, LYLAS ;-p
The story is very cool..Shane is so funny around Carmen..its cute!. Please continue :D
So glad you are back, I now have something to look forward to! This is different for them and it works, keep it up!!
I think that the most of the “sharmen” fics are really great and I love to read them. Then there are a few stories that stands out and every time I go check on the updates, I keep an extra eye for them. Every story of yours is one of the latest!! I love your imagination and your ability to get me hooked by the story with your writing! Your stories are so different and I truly love them!!
This is the best story ever!!! Just when I thought nothign could top your trilogy, you just keep getting better! Read this over at Sharmenonline.com and then read it here again! I love this story girl! Love it!
Oh you’re back, loving it! Keep on writing :D